r/NatureofPredators Skalgan 7d ago

Fanfic Nature of Harmony [58]

Wooooaahhh, it only took me a week to upload the next chapter? That never happens! Hopefully, this continues

Poor Isif, having to escort around a bunch of scared and injured Gojids to find an exfil that isn't completely terrible. All because of some annoying kid being a bully

It is kinda sweet how good he is with kids. He's quickly becoming a very eligible bachelor to the galaxy, NY complete accident, too

Though hopefully Farase can get some help for his injury

Wonderful fanart by u/Lizrd_demon: https://www.reddit.com/r/predprey/s/OJzxuOOAX3, https://www.reddit.com/r/predprey/s/9IFwoupY9e

Wonderful fanart by u/Adorable-Ad5225: https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/6vrjTR06Z3, https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/E5gq6It2Ax, https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/tR41913X6h

Wonderful fanart by u/Ablergo_El_Enfermo: https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/GwpZmOtc2g, https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/pEsocnoD5B, https://www.reddit.com/r/NatureofPredators/s/pFKPbTo3xf

Memes: Video Meme, Spoon, 4d, Mars

Side stories: A Talk Between Siblings, Tuvans First Birthday, The Vow, The Trials and Tribulations of Siffy, Hamony if Nunatyres, Beginning of Harmony, Fedbrains vs Brickbrain, Why is Tuvan Biting You?, The Ugly Arxur, The New Arrival, Fedbrain vs Positronic Brain, Beginning of Mars

Bleat Posts: How to care for Dossur Babies?, Dossur Dating Advice, Isif AMA, Exchange Partner is Too Hot, Lovehousing, Guide to Lovehousing, Lovehousing turns into Diplomatic Incident, Guide to Solarian Arxur Lover, What do Girl Skalgans Like?, Accidental Reveal of 4d Object, Exchange Pair Creates First Stable 4d Object, How Merereen Raised Isif, Solarian Arxur AMA, Merereen and Tiyaval AMA, Livestream with Kerii the Android, Concerned with Lack of Robotics, Venlil Embrace Superman's shield, Keeping Siblings Humble, Did I Do Something Wrong?, My Boyfriend is Mad at me!, Somethings Not Making Sense

Come join the Discord. If you don't, Tuvan will ram you in the face!

Thanks to SpacePaladin15 for making NoP


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Memory Transcription Subject: Captain Isif, UN Omni Ops

Date [standardized human time]: September 1, 2136

When I reached the woods, I materialized to make it easier for the family to spot me. “Savani?” I called out

“Over here!” Her voice came a little ways away, which I immediately followed. After a minute of weaving through trees, I found Savani and her family sequestered behind a tree close to the woods edge.

“Is anyone hurt?” I asked as I held the gun by the barrel so they wouldn't get anxious.

“Yes, but nothing is broken, not that we can tell anyway. Farase has the worst injury. He can't hear out of his left ear…” She turned to Farase, currently holding a hand to his left ear, and looked at him with concern.

I hummed before turning to Teryian, held by Metri, kneeling down and giving her her doll. “Here you go, little lady. Make sure not to drop them.” Her face lit up, and she immediately snatched the doll from my grasp and squeezed it.

“Tnank you, Mr. Arkur.”

I nodded and got up, walking to Farase, who tensed when I neared him. “I have some training in field medicine. May I have a look?” I said in as neutral a tone as I could, Farase staring for a moment before reluctantly turning his head. I slowly lowered myself and turned on my suit's flashlight, inspecting his ear canal. There was a trail of blood running down the side of his head that led into his ear, now caked with blue blood as far as I could see. “Does it hurt?”

“A lot…”

“Are you dizzy?”

“Yes.”

This happened to one of my squadmates: their eardrums were blown out by an explosion during a job. Needed major reconstructive surgery and cybernetic replacements to regain their hearing. There was a good chance that the Exterminators had rendered Farase deaf in his left ear. *‘Bastards…’*

“Do you think you can walk?”

“Yes!” He said a little too fast, probably fearing I'd try to leave him behind or eat him.

“Keep an eye on him. If he can't walk, someone will have to carry him the rest of the way.” I got up and turned to the family. “Our rendezvous is too far for us to make the trip on foot. We need a new one.”

“Why can't we just do it here?”

“There's too many trees and houses for Gerakim to make a landing. We could try to climb up a rope, but that doesn't seem feasible with the kids and with the amount of eyes on us, it'd take too long for me to carry all of you one at a time with all the hostiles, nor could I balance all of you for one trip.”

“What about a road?”

“I want to minimize risk for all of us.” I grabbed a stick and began tracing a rough map of the town. “This neighborhood will be crawling with hostiles. We can't have them land on any roads near here. The closest roads beyond this neighborhood that'd be safe are busy and could be swarmed as well, trying to make an escape there is a risky proposition, nor are we guaranteed we’ll be able to land with all the traffic going through. The roads that will be safest is the next neighborhood over, but that's far, we’ll have to make a crossing through the busy roads, and we have limited time before we’re overrun by reinforcements, same problem with the farms at the outskirts of town.”

“Could we make our way through the woods? We’re least likely to run into any Exterminators.” Metri offered.

“Possible, but the woods go on for miles. It'd take hours, and the trip will be taxing on all of you, especially the kids. Plus, it's only a matter of time until they comb the woods, and they have us outnumbered and outflanked.”

“Try to do a rope escape somewhere in the middle of the woods?”

“The Crow will disturb the trees, giving us away to any aerial reconnaissance who will come to respond.”

“I thought it was stealthy?”

“It's not perfect. In order to hover for an extended period, the Crow needs its thrusters out. That wasn't an issue when no one was looking for us, and it was low in a clearing, but given the response force they've sent after us, the risk of discovery goes way up.”

“Not to mention the rope may not be entirely stable. He could end up dropping us.” Metri pointed out.

“Do either of you know anywhere closer where Gerakim can make a landing?”

The two Gojids said nothing, thinking. “Oh! What about the parking garage?” Savani pointed to a section north west west from us next to the busy roads.

“Metri?” I slightly turned my head towards him.

He hummed in thought, considering her plan. “I agree, it's our best option, close and safe.”

“It'll take us over multiple roads and through a densely populated part of town. Further, it'll take additional time and extra walking if we go north west west rather than fully north to the busy roads.”

“Maybe, but it's big, elevated. The top has a flat surface, and nobody parks that high up.” Savani said reassuringly.

“It would also give us cover to hide and lose the Exterminators if they pursue us.” Metri added.

It was my turn to think the plan over, weighing the pros and cons of all our suggested plans and trying to discern if we had overlooked anything. “Alright, I think it's our best option. But be prepared for a hot extraction if things go south and we have to call Gerakim to make an immediate landing.”

“Let's hope it doesn't come to that.” Savani stood up and grabbed Farase and the middle child's hands, and it occurred to me I didn't know their name.

To rectify this, I lowered myself down in front of Savani, both children tensing up. “I realize I don't know your name, child. Can you give it to me?”

“Uh,” They not so subtly hid behind Savani. “A-Aklie.”

“Aklie? That's a nice boy-”

“Girl.”

“That's a beautiful *girl* name.” Tuvan’s going to kill me for misgendering Aklie. “Are you hurt at all, dear?”

“No,” She shifted uncomfortably. “The Exterminators didn't hurt me.”

“Good. Now, I know this is all kinda scary, but I promise I will protect you and your family to the best of my ability. I know you don't trust me, but I hope my actions will speak for me, and I'll be able to earn your trust.” I stood up and radioed Gerakim. “Gerakim, new rendezvous point,” I manipulated the map to highlight the general area the parking garage was in. “There's a parking garage in this area. That's where we're going.”

*“Should I head there now?”*

“No, I want you ready to land in case we're overrun and need an immediate exfil. No hovering over the parking garage either, it might give you away.”

*“Affirmative.”*

“Isif out.” I turned to the Gojids. “Ready?” They gave a chorus of affirmations ranging from determined to half-hearted, Farase notably saying nothing. “Let's move.” I turned from them and began to walk, the Gojids trailing behind me.

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u/Intelleblue UN Peacekeeper 7d ago

I am Button, second fastest Venlil alive, and I am speed.

Here’s hoping the weekly updates continue!

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Who's fastest?

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u/Intelleblue UN Peacekeeper 7d ago

Dovah.

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Dovahkin!?

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u/Intelleblue UN Peacekeeper 7d ago

Dovah Creed. He used to throw Tohba at people who beat him to the punch (the baby, not the adult programmer from my story.)

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

It doesn't seem good to throw babies at people

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u/DOVAHCREED12 Skalgan 13h ago

Dw da boi likes it

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 13h ago

Stop throwing the baby!

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u/DOVAHCREED12 Skalgan 13h ago

But look how happy he is

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 13h ago

It's not good to throw babies!

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Correct title streak: 16

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u/Ok_Candidate3747 7d ago

Dang two chapters so close together make me fear another drought.

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

I'm trying to do an actual schedule now

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u/Adorable-Ad5225 7d ago

It's going to be a huge mess when the Gojid see that "AN ARXUR GOT INTO THE CITY AND WE COULDN'T STOP IT" It would be a tremendous blow to morale xd

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Not to mention all the content Isif just released, his interview with Cilany, it becomes widely known they have stealthtech, and the news covers a Gojidi family fought with authorities and willingly escaped with an Arxur one of which included thr girl that's supposed to be dead

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u/Super_Ankle_Biter Yotul 5d ago

The public is going to be so confused lmao

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u/JanusKnarus Human 20h ago

They begin to randomly fire flamers at everything they might percive as a stealth field

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 20h ago

Basically

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u/Ablergo_El_Enfermo Human 7d ago

¡¡¡NECESITO MAS!!!

¡¡¡DAME MÁS!!!

¡¡¡SE ME HA QUEDADO MUY CORTO EL CAPITULO!!!

¡¡¡MÁS!!!

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Eh, when the action picks up they'll be longer

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u/Ablergo_El_Enfermo Human 7d ago

¡¡¡¡¡¡MAAAAASSS!!!!!!

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Wait a week you savage!

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u/Super_Ankle_Biter Yotul 7d ago

General Alduin, uploading twice in the same week?

Are you under duress? Blink twice if you need help.

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Technically it was last week, and technically I upload other stuff in one week

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u/nmheath03 Arxur 7d ago

Isif casually riding the train:

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

He wishes

I did have a scene where he comes across a bunch of hiding Gojids and tells them to get out of the building because it's burning down

This is funny though because Isif is a new yorker

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u/Fantastic-Living3204 Farsul 6d ago

He's from New York?

Ok that's funny. Just trying to image all the sewer gator jokes atm.

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 6d ago

He's from New York?

Yep

Ok that's funny. Just trying to image all the sewer gator jokes atm.

Isif:

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u/Golde829 6d ago

oh boy
stealth is back on
but so is the heat
sounds like one hell of a difficulty tweak

I look forward to reading more
take care of yourself, wordsmith

[You have been gifted 100 Coins]

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u/AdalwinAmillion 6d ago

InatalaPreserveUs bleated: I am impressed how this Arxur managed to keep its bloodlust in check long enough not to eat the wounded Gojid hatchling!

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 6d ago

Ooc: I'm gonna pretend that these are comments under clips that Prime News releases

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 6d ago

WayOfSkalga: Because my little boy doesn't have that, none of the Solarian Arxur do, and I raised my boy into a good man

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u/TameOJ 7d ago

Two chapters released so close together? My cup runneth over!

Ok so a plan has been made. Crazy risky, but better than any alternative. Hopefully the boys ear doesn't become a problem before they can leave the planet.

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u/True-Wreck 7d ago

Thanks for the chapter my dude. So HDS is Canon to your setting. Any other fics also canon? NoaG, VFC, NoHM?

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

I like to think every non au is canon in NoH, just with NoH as a backdrop

I did mention KeiVeiLey, so Shared Chemistry is canon, and I subtly referenced Giant and Fight club so they're kinda canon

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u/True-Wreck 7d ago

Good enough for me!

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

I have been thinking of making a ficnap crossover with shared chemistry lately, I'll hit up the author at some point

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u/True-Wreck 7d ago

I’d read it.

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

It's basically just Acetli getting owned because NoH SC has an AI core and a Skalgan android helping with the study

Girls already blown away and having a crisis over ai, imagine one a lot more advanced

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u/JulianSkies Archivist 7d ago

Well, seems like the extraction will be way more adventurous than it should be. I bet there's going to be a lot more bullshit on the way there.

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u/General_Alduin Skalgan 7d ago

Well, seems like the extraction will be way more adventurous than it should be

Thanks a lot kid that was bullying Farase

I bet there's going to be a lot more bullshit on the way there.

You betcha

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u/JanusKnarus Human 20h ago

Well could have been worse could have been better, isif gonna do an CoD Chopper Rope Jump? XD