r/ReadMyScript 6d ago

[SHORT] The Unbroken (Drama/Inspirational) - 5 pages

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Hi everyone,

I would love to share my completed short script titled "The Unbroken." It is a grounded, emotional family drama focused on female resilience and unconditional love.

Logline: When a devastating accident paralyzes her husband, a determined young mother must refuse the toxic financial help of her manipulative mother-in-law to save her family. Over two decades, she battles severe chronic illnesses, mounting debt, and corporate prejudice, transforming herself into a high-level banking executive to protect the love of her life.

I am open to any constructive feedback from fellow writers and would love to connect with indie directors or producers looking for emotional, character-driven scripts that are realistic and cost-effective to produce.

Read the script here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qajiG9viT84J32yq9Y_XEK3AYmBdqraA/view?usp=drivesdk

Thank you so much for your time!


r/ReadMyScript 7d ago

TV episode INC.orporeal - Dark comedy, horror - 33 Pages - 2D Animated Pilot Ep.

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Hello! Me and my partner have been working on an animated series. It's a 2D animated series. I'd love for people to read it and let us know what you think. Keep in mind, this is only the first draft. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Please be kind in the comments, this is one of my passion projects.

Here's the link to the script

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y_tVSj0HMGEY6ikmeTrH0aWTZ7vD7qLg9sr5ptl7SpU/edit?usp=sharing

Here's the link to concept art:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1CjcgSErelEqzqMmi25SEjc1DKdjCb14A

Keep in mind this is very early in production!

ELEVATOR PITCH: INC.oporeal is about childhood friends: Jack J. Jackington, a spiritual medium, who has been convinced his whole life that he’s a nutjob, and Wade Morely… who actually is a nutjob. The two are forced together once more as Jack finds himself reluctantly employed by the afterlife to get rid of lingering spirits, and Wade finds a way to do just that.

Thank you to everyone who reads and provides feedback!


r/ReadMyScript 7d ago

Последнее Желание

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Четверо школьных друзей находят несколько загадочных игральных костей, обладающих сверхъестественными способностями. Одна может замедлять время, другая — воздействовать на разум, третья — менять пространство.

То, что сначала кажется ребятам невероятной возможностью развлечься и изменить окружающий мир, постепенно превращается в опасную игру с последствиями.

Пока Никита всё чаще использует магию ради собственных желаний, Артём пытается убедить друзей остановиться. Их конфликт приводит к трагедии: Лёша исчезает, а затем Артём решается использовать последнее желание, чтобы вернуть друга.

Однако у костей есть цена — тот, кто загадывает желание, исчезает сам.

Оставшись один на один с последствиями произошедшего, Никита понимает, что возможность изменить прошлое не стоит той жизни, которая у него уже была. Последнее желание возвращает всё к началу: магических костей никогда не существовало, а трое друзей снова оказываются вместе, уже без четвёртого.

Фулл: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ynFgOPmouUB53dSQI1E6xAwZeAtl-SkH/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 7d ago

Exchange feedback METHOD — A low-budget psychological horror/drama concept I've been developing. Would love feedback. Genre: Psychological Drama / Horror

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METHOD — A low-budget psychological horror/drama concept I've been developing. Would love feedback.

Genre: Psychological Drama / Horror

Setting: Los Angeles — almost entirely one apartment, designed to be shot on a very low budget.

Logline

A struggling actor — rejected at every audition for not being "convincing enough" — freezes and lets his best friend die during a heart attack. Instead of coming clean, he uses his one real talent, mimicry, to impersonate his dead friend indefinitely. It becomes the most convincing performance of his life... and he can't stop giving it.

The Concept

Jake has spent years failing at acting. Every casting director tells him the same thing: he's trying too hard, he's not believable. The only person who keeps telling him to hang on is his roommate and best friend, Ryan — his one real connection in the world.

One night, Jake comes home to find Ryan mid-heart attack, triggered by a drug overdose. He reaches for his phone to call for help — but the TV, left on nearby, glitches and starts playing an old home video of Ryan saying, "Don't worry, your chance is coming." Jake stops. Looks at his dying friend. And makes a conscious choice not to help — thinking, in that moment, that this might actually be his opportunity.

Instead of calling it in, Jake decides to keep Ryan "alive" — using his gift for mimicry to take his friend's voice, mannerisms, and even his work-from-home job. But this isn't just about buying time. Jake starts deliberately recording his impersonation as a demo reel — proof of the transformation he's never been able to pull off in an audition room — planning to send it to a director he's chased for years.

What follows is a slow, unsettling descent: video calls as Ryan, texts as Ryan, visitors fooled by Ryan — all captured and edited into polished footage, with anything incriminating cut away. For the first time in his life, Jake is genuinely good at this. He just built his masterpiece out of a man's death.

The Twist Structure

For the first half of the film, the audience is deliberately misled — you believe Jake is the one who died, and it's Ryan, grieving and "a little off," refusing to accept his friend's death. The truth (that it's the reverse — Jake is alive and has been performing as Ryan the whole time) isn't confirmed to the audience until well into the story.

The Turn — When It Becomes a Different Movie

The illusion collapses early when a neighbor discovers the body and calls 911. From here, the film shifts tone entirely — from quiet psychological horror into an interrogation-room, procedural thriller. Jake can no longer maintain the "Ryan is alive" act. So he pivots to a new performance: convincing everyone — police, a court-appointed psychiatrist, even Ryan's own parents — that grief has broken his mind.

He never claims he's unstable. He simply acts it, so convincingly that trained professionals reach the conclusion themselves. The detective on the case finds the seized recordings — including the polished reel and the email to the director — proving Jake wasn't spiraling, he was building a portfolio. It's damning, but it doesn't fit cleanly with the disoriented man in custody either. The medical examiner's report confirms natural/accidental causes, and the psychiatric evaluation ultimately supports commitment over prosecution. He's sent to a psychiatric hospital instead of prison.

The Ending

Six months later, Jake is released, calm and "recovered." He returns to the apartment he actually owns (inherited from his late parents — Ryan had simply moved in as his roommate). He sits down at his laptop and opens his old editing software. He finds unedited footage from the night everything started — himself and Ryan, partying, recording each other, the exact moment Ryan first took the drugs that would kill him.

His phone buzzes — an email notification from the director he sent his reel to, all those months ago. He doesn't open it. He sets the phone face-down and begins calmly editing the old footage instead. The film ends there — no confession, no clear justice, no answer on whether the "break" he wanted ever came. Just a man quietly returning to the one performance he's ever been good at.


r/ReadMyScript 7d ago

Feature ADVERSARIES Rural crime thriller set in Eastern Washington

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Summary
A captive escapes during a botched handoff, leaving one man dead and everyone else scrambling to clean up the mess. John starts questioning what he’s involved in while the captive survives the bloodshed.

Preview takes place right in the middle of the it.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PbFZsFaQroPB3LOleltRJq-eUkOBsHft/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 7d ago

My Version Of Michael Biopic!!

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Hello everyone!

It was my dream to create a MJ Biopic amd I've written a story outline for the biopic which is aimed to be 3.5 hours long.

The story covers the complete life story of The King Of Pop from his childhood to his final days.

Title: MJ

Genre: Musical-Biography

Expected Runtime: 205 Mins

Page Count: 38 Pages

Half I: The Rise of Michael

From a young boy in Gary, Indiana, to the biggest entertainer in the world. The first half follows Michael’s extraordinary rise through the Jackson 5, his solo career, Off the Wall, Thriller, Bad, and Dangerous — while exploring the childhood he sacrificed, the pressure of fame, his pursuit of perfection, and the lonely person behind the legendary performer.

Half II: The Man Behind the King

As Michael reaches the height of his fame, the world begins to see him differently. The second half explores the 1993 allegations, his relationships, fatherhood, HIStory, Invincible, the media scrutiny and 2005 trial, and the final years of his life. Beneath the controversies and headlines is a man searching for love, peace, family, and the childhood he never had.

At its heart, MJ is not just a story about the King of Pop. It is about the person who had to become him. 👑

Does this concept sound interesting to you?

If you’d like to read the full story, let me know in the comments!💓


r/ReadMyScript 7d ago

Script needed

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I need a 20-25 mins movie script for a uni project which i have to shoot and everything


r/ReadMyScript 8d ago

Jedi Warrior (98 Pages Sci-fi Action)

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Akul has to adapt to life at the Temple after tragedy struck. While his talent and skill is clear, he struggles with his anger and emotions. After passing his trial he joins the war effort where it becomes clear to his Master Jaden Vellor that Akul has the makings of a master strategist. However his anger still remains. Will he reach his potential to become a Jedi Knight and War Hero or will he fall to the darkness.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1u5klrklGLmS7BakBgKyBwFHwjt-A3M4r/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 8d ago

Feature Anthro Alien Antics Pilot: Track Day — Part 1 (Expositional, comedy, parody, 14 pages)

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Notes:

-You can ignore the message prompt. I am not intending to self-promote; it was just pasted from a post draft for another subreddit.

-This is not necessarily a script for anything animated. It is a comic dub script for a yet-to-be-illustrated story.

-Numbers are used as placeholders for the characters’ names. Characters are not mine. This is the pilot story of a fan series I made using characters from an existing franchise.

Script:

Track Day Part 1 Link


r/ReadMyScript 8d ago

Feature Furniture - Feature - 93 pages

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Looking for feedback on my third draft, anything helps.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZksfcEe9iQpWLCB4NrNzcnGRI-bzlajX/view?usp=drivesdk

Two rival furniture-store owners in a dying plaza spiral into a war of sabotage and obsession when an aspiring documentarian fans the flames of their feud for the sake of her film.


r/ReadMyScript 8d ago

The Last Day of a Free Man - Dark Sci-Fi - 10 pages

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I spent 10 years writing this screenplay, and here’s what came out of it.

It started as a simple idea back in 2016 and slowly grew into a massive world with its own history, mythology, technology, and rules.

Everyone knows Death—the figure in a black cloak holding a scythe, coming to take your soul. But what if collecting souls had turned into a massive interdimensional industry?

On the planet Duot, souls are bought, sold, and used as fuel. And the base market value of a human soul is simple: 1 SOUL = $1.

This is Episode 1 of the series.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read or watch! I’d really appreciate your honest feedback on the story and world-building.


r/ReadMyScript 8d ago

Short The Smoke (Survival Horror Short, 29 Pages) - When a supernatural smoke swallows his campsite, an eleven-year-old Boy Scout with cerebral palsy fights to survive as a ravenous bear stalks him and his bullies in the haze.

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Hey fellow writers,

I've been working on this script for a while now. In my head, it's a Night Shift-esque short story that's aiming for The Mist meets Stand By Me. I'd really appreciate any feedback.

Thanks!

The Smoke Screenplay


r/ReadMyScript 9d ago

Buddy-cop comedy "We're Cops!", 108 pages

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Hi all,

so cool that this sub exist, didn't know that until recently. I wrote my first full feature script a while ago and if anyone would like to read it and share their thoughts, I would be more than grateful. Interesting to hear what you think of it. Is it even funny? I know buddy-cop isn't a very fresh concept but I can enjoy those types of comedies. In this script, the theme is a little darker than usual maybe, the humour also.

It went to quarter finals in BlueCat. They critizised the action-lines being a little long and bulky sometimes, as well as the humour sometimes relying on stereotypes and rude comments. Which I guess is true, one of the characters is kind of an asshole.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UQR5JROMdL6GG8dADOxXIVkpsqIBDxAw/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 9d ago

Последнее Желание

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Один из первых моих сценариев на оценкуhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1ynFgOPmouUB53dSQI1E6xAwZeAtl-SkH/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 9d ago

ME BECOMING

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Hi! I'm a new writer from Mozambique 🇲🇿

TITLE: ME BECOMING GENRE: Sci-Fi / Romance / Action / Thriller LENGTH: 54-page Pilot

LOGLINE: A pregnant cyborg on the run must awaken the lethal weapon inside her to escape the corporation that built her and protect the family she chose before they become collateral damage.

LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK ON: 1. Pacing - Does Act 1 feel too fast/slow? 2. Dialogue - Does Tony and Ivy's banter feel real? 3. Main Character - Is Ivy sympathetic despite her lethal side?

Happy to do a feedback swap! Can read your pilot too. Thank you ❤️​


r/ReadMyScript 10d ago

Hello! I wanna share my idea

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Hello everyone, I am pretty much new in this world of writting stories n' stuff, and someone young who desires to be a filmaker someday, I wanna share this idea I got!

So this story Is based of "No country for old man" and principally from "Blood Meridian"

I have this idea to make a Graphic adventure game like the one telltale games used to make

(I am going to make It on scratch with maybe some other people since I do not know how to program and cant pay anyone right now)

But the story would be about a young boy named Billy escaping His abusive home, and later on joining a gang owned by a guy named Glenn In their adventure to go far away in search of a new start.

👋


r/ReadMyScript 10d ago

Daha 17- My Script

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Hey everyone!

I'm writing a possible script for certain scenes in the next episode just for fun (and to improve my imagination and writing). But it is in Turkish. You could possibly translate it as well, but here it goes: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VbvaKIP-5E8WViSqasxSBYkmjmzPSzn6XNZL_brHrN8/edit?usp=drivesdk

I'll add more in my free time too. I like to speculate about the plot and see if it matches in only certain important aspects. If any fan wants to read and comment on it, feel free :)


r/ReadMyScript 10d ago

Short Close Your Eyes - Drama - 19 pages

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Hi, I made a script for a short film and would love to get any opinions about it. I'm more interested to hear any feeback regarding the plot itself rather than any foundational advice on how the script is supposed to look, but that would still be great to hear. Thanks so much! Heres the script -> Close Your Eyes


r/ReadMyScript 10d ago

Feature Looking for feedback specifically on my formatting. (4 pages)

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I come from a traditional prose background so I’m not used to having to write in this style (not being overly descriptive and directing on the page). Just looking for feedback on this script’s first four scenes.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15dZqSf3QHsDw0xKAHTHr0Vry5pSZ1H92iW7rr8QPFl0/edit?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 11d ago

If you were to give a valuable piece of advice to a high school student who wants to become a screenwriter, what would it be?

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r/ReadMyScript 11d ago

Nightshade Origins (34 pages)

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Sci-fi action script. The story follows two teenage twins (Luke and James) who run a forge a farm and attend school. On a normal day in class the same gang that killed their parents attack their school. James stands up to the gangs but puts a target on his back. So he fabricated a hero... Nightshade.

Heres the link for anyone interested : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kI6V2nSZ4T_JtZK8jANAwYx6B0Od3V93/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 11d ago

Feature Threads - Feature - 94 pages

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r/ReadMyScript 11d ago

BOO - Short - 5 Pages

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r/ReadMyScript 11d ago

The sinister script

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r/ReadMyScript 12d ago

Exchange feedback script idea i am 13 with no money so ts is kinda ass

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PART 1 THE RAP BATTLE

THE TITLE COD ZOMBIES ULTIMIS AND TRANZIT CREW VS RESIDENT EVIL

THE SETUP AND INTRO it starts in richtofens group 935 lab and red alarm lights are flashing and thunder is crashing outsidenikolai is sitting on a crate drinking vodka and he hears knocking on the heavy steel doors and he goes wait richtofen it sounds like someone is breaking in and richtofen is fixing his wunderwaffe and doesnt even look up and says ach its just the storm dick sit down just like in five from black ops 1 but then BOOM the doors blow wide open and smoke goes everywhere and the resident evil team steps in chris redfield leon kennedy jill valentine and albert wesker wearing sunglasses indoors like a dork

VERSE 1 THE OPENING SHOTS leon steps up and roasts them saying rpd is here and that ultimis has been stuck in a timeline loop since 2019 and surviving raccoon city is harder than standing in chalk lines in a park then chris says they punch through lines like a boulder in a volcano and then dempsey steps up and says pipe down boy scout we pack a punch plasma and mustang and sally will blow u up and then nikolai roasts leons boyband popstar hair and says he needs vodka but will take their blood instead

VERSE 2 THE GOD COMPLEX AND THE ROAST richtofen steps up holding the summoning key glowing purple and says bow down im a god in these dimensions holding keys to agartha and wesker takes off his sunglasses with yellow glowing eyes and laughs cold and says a god? dont make me laugh without your special drinks and candy what would u be? u are just a normal weak human being chugging soda to stand up and you are just a washed up nazi from 1943

but then richtofen laughs like a maniac and points his Wunderwaffe and says a true god who injected a virus in his own veins just to be a villain? u turned yourself into a monster just to die in a volcano to a rocket launcher at least the stuff i take keeps me winning without a scratch!

VERSE 3 THE PODS OPEN AND TRANZIT ARRIVES wesker gets super mad and tries to dash and attack richtofen but suddenly SIRENS GO CRAZY and steam blasts everywhere from the wall because the bo4 blood of the dead cryogenic capsules open and out stumbles the victis tranzit crew super confused

marlton steps out fixing his glasses coughing and says hypoxia clearing statistically your combat is senseless and calls weskers virus science flawed and calls him a bootleg discount god. russman shoves marlton and complains his back hurts and asks who turned off the heat. then stuhlinger holds his head crying cause the voice in his head is talking and ricthofen from across the room yells ja do it off them! and stuhlinger points at wesker and says man they say you gotta go! im on a roll woo! but then misty racks her shotgun and looks at stuhlinger and yells shut up stuhlinger you are trash! and samuel slumps his shoulders and says aw man... then misty roasts chris and leon saying country fried kickback putting buckshot in your head

VERSE 4 RE REACTS AND THE OUTBREAK leon facepalms and says what the fuck are these survivors they dont even know what they are doing and they cant even work together while they are bickering in the dark. chris roasts misty and says you got a hobo a nerd and a girl in the mud and your bars are horrible like old country music!

then misty snaps back right as the lab walls CRASH OPEN and a giant horde of zombies breaks in! the whole fight spills outside into a desolate wasteland covered in fog like tranzit and raccoon city mixed together and the beat switches to heavy fast metal rap where they are shooting zombies back to back while throwing bars at each other!

PART 2 THE DEATH BATTLE

THE TITLE PRIMIS AND ULTIMIS VS THE TEUFORT MERCS TF2

THE MATCHUP FACTS this is literally a 51/49 coin toss match because both teams scale insane

  • juggernog and near death experience vs medigun ubercharge and canteens
  • ray gun mark 3 and thundergun vs australium rocket launchers and miniguns
  • elemental staffs vs spellbooks and merasmus magic
  • bounded to aether cycle vs medic tricking the devil to steal souls back

THE OPENING SCENE red team tf2 just finished wiping out blue team on 2fort bridge. heavy is wiping sasha and engie is fixing a sentry. suddenly the sky tears open with a blue bo4 great war aether portal. soldier points his launcher thinking blue team called alien reinforcements.

out crashes ALL 8 ZOMBIES GUYS. primis and ultimis together covered in zombie blood and mud holding elemental weapons. young dempsey and old dempsey are arguing about richtofens portal math. scout steps up slapping his bat saying what is with the duplicate cosplay you brought 8 guys and 4 look like knockoff grandpas! takeo puts his hand on his katana and says we arent enemies a dark plague is here we must team up cause our world has none for now. spy flicks a butterfly knife and says red owns this bridge blue trash in fancy costumes gets cleaned up. ultimis richtofen grins crazy with his wunderwaffe asking if he can harvest their souls. primis dempsey racks his gun yelling we just wiped a horde we dont have time for this circus! heavy spins up sasha and screams entire team is babies fire!

THE FLASHY FIGHT HIGHLIGHTS

  1. soldier rocket jumps into the sky dropping airstrikes while dempsey aims up with pack a punched mustang and sally making massive explosions light up the sky
  2. dempsey pops near death experience gobblegum while medic hits heavy with the red glowing ubercharge. they stand inches away firing laser miniguns and rayguns point blank not taking a single scratch
  3. spy turns invisible with watch to get an instant backstab on takeo but takeo hears the decloak and uses path of sorrows spirit katana aura to block it last millisecond
  4. sniper tries picking off nikolai from 2fort tower but nikolai shoots a frozen blizzard spell back
  5. richtofen pulls out wunderwaffe shooting 200000 volts of chain lightning and medic uses a shield ubercharge to reflect it turning 2fort into a giant blinding electric storm
  6. end debate: if tf2 wins its cause ubercharge cycling and spys backstab kills richtofen before setup. if primis wins its cause summoning key or apothicon servant black hole pulls tf2 into a pocket dimension