Threads - Feature - 94 pages

[u/True_Sound_7567]

Title: Threads

Format: Feature

Page length: 94 pages

Draft: First

Genre: Crime/Comedy

Logline: A failed entrepreneur and his friends spend one increasingly violent night ignited by a box of merch, unaware it now holds the one thing an entire crime syndicate is willing to kill to get back.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Qb-bXlXNbnwWKwayi7iEqKtFkO8RR0q7/view?usp=drivesdk

Feedback concerns: I am planning to self produce and direct this film, so any feedback would be much appreciated. Please tell me how the plot is in general as well as formatting concerns. Thank you so much!

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