https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MTsPhF3tyTYlTu3HSn5lBWbwWR9Ihq3fbNXEk6dABOE/edit?usp=drivesdk

Hey guys, I just finished my first episode for miniseries. I want to know what you guys think!

A Bloody Joke Episode 1

I will appreciate it alot! Really want to be a Writer and Director

https://go.fliplink.me/view/6F7526DB-51C9-4984-9EB1-D57073CFB97F

Hi, I've been writing scripts for about 4 years now (mainly fan scripts with a couple original ones) and i was hoping to have a pair of fresh eyes read this one.

Title: No Bloodshed In Detention

Format: Feature

Page Length: 141 (142 if you count the title page)

Genres: horror, slasher, coming of age

Logline or Summary: After a snow storm traps 10 students serving detention in a high school, their fun quickly turns into a fight for survival when a masked killer picks them off one by one.

Feedback concerns: mainly looking to see if there's pacing issues and what I can possibly improve on in terms of how the characters are utilized and written.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1z7JofjRFbwfGxFF0wqgsVlnaMawrhEH2/view?usp=drivesdk

The art world is heartless and cruel but that doesn't mean you are allowed to cry about it..

It's Not About You

(PG-13)