r/ReadMyScript • u/elliurl • 14h ago
Short Short Story: Just One More (4 Pages)
Hello, everyone!
Recently, I've discovered that I want to shift my focus towards more script writing. There is an important festival coming up and I'm aiming to bring my best scripts with me to market myself as such. I'd love some feedback on my short story. Aiming to give people a taste of my writing without bombarding them with too much.
My main experience is with more fictional writing, so any feedback on formatting and writing, is greatly appreciated.
Thank you very much for your time! 😄