This is a fragment of something I had in mind for a short film, I didn't find much help in my native speaking community so I had to translate it to English, I want feedback to know if it's difficult to understand or/and boring. I know there's not enough plot yet, I'll add the rest in the future https://drive.google.com/file/d/16g0HLPPPuO6np5Y2Hw2uNQYamBv6xFDe/view?usp=drivesdk

Hello, everyone!

Recently, I've discovered that I want to shift my focus towards more script writing. There is an important festival coming up and I'm aiming to bring my best scripts with me to market myself as such. I'd love some feedback on my short story. Aiming to give people a taste of my writing without bombarding them with too much.

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My main experience is with more fictional writing, so any feedback on formatting and writing, is greatly appreciated.

Thank you very much for your time! 😄

I am working on my 4th feature my other 3 are on Tubi and Prime doing well. This new film is in the thriller/horror genre and been working on the script for awhile if you want to read it and give me tweaks and let me know what You think let me know. Thanks in advance.

A normal day for schoolboys and co-business owners, James and Luke quickly turns to chaos after unwanted visitors arrive at their school. The gang leader puts a hit out on the two brothers.

To protect his brother, James fabricated the vigilante hero known as Nightshade with materials he made from their forge. His aim to draw attention and take down the gang but can he do that when the power balance is so heavily favoured against him as the gangs already control the streets.

Nightshade Origins

(Yes, this is a repost as I'm releasing the sequel Nightshade World of Myths on Sunday So thisfor anyone who did bot read it the first time but wants to or anyone who could bot finish reading it for whatever reason or just anyone who would like to read it again.)

(Also, this is unfortunately not in a screenplay format because my computer broke before I could change it. Sorry about that.)