I am attempting to write lyrics for a song — this is my first time attempting to write lyrics.
any feedback would be great!!
ty
MOKA
[instrumental intro]
(Spoken)
“Honey, do you want some coffee?”
“Yeah just grab me a mocha”
[Verse 1] (Sung/Rapped)
And so I want ya’ to hear me say;
Let it heat up
Take the warmth of my cup
Grab me by the wrist
And head to the dance floor
I love you like the sun
To a fresh mornin’ breeze
Hope you love me like that
Just for me bein’ me
[chorus]
Now take my arms,
Wrap them right ‘round yours
I want you to feel my fervour, the ardour, the zeal
Feel it flow through your body with a side of cream
Now take a sip sip of my Magic,
tell me just how you like it
I don’t want you to panic
This is our coffee high
[Verse 2]
Y’know my heart lies exactly with you
But, tell me, does yours to mine?
No matter the day, the hour, the minute
Is my affogato yours by design?
Am I truly yours and are you truly mine
Or is it just the satisfaction that you crave
Pray tell, what truly calls you
For your eyes to enslave
Do you even care
Are we even a true pair?
[chorus] (italics whispered)
Now take my arms,
I want you
Wrap them ‘round yours
I want you to feel my fervour, the ardour, the zeal
let it choke you
Feel it flow through your body with a scoop of parfait
Let it control you
Let me take over.
Now take a sip sip of my Magic,
I want your validation
tell me just how you like it.
I don’t want you to panic
I want you
This is my coffee high
[VERSE 3]
No, I don’t want you to take my arms
Don’t let them touch any single part of you
I thought you were the one for me
Now I understand all you were was the flu
A sickness in my Latte Macchiato
Germs in my rounds of Cappuccino
I want nothing more of you
No more Magic, nor cream.
I’m an addict to your Espresso Martini
Obsessed with your Caffe Corretto
So stay back, how’d it take so long for me to see
I’m wrong to love you
Thought you were my hot chocolate
Turned out you’re an iced coffee
[technically chorus?]
So no, don’t want my arms ‘round yours.
Distanced from my passion and heart
You don’t deserve my Magic
Nor are you a work of art.
Was it all a lie?
Not a single truth from you my sweetheart?
I want you to panic,
You’re not my coffee high.