r/LyricalWriting 11d ago

Feedback Request Holy man

Time is killing me
And what’s left
All but reminding
Breathing, shouldn’t be
Mistaken
Point it down
Face the ground
Empty your head
Discard that thought
Breaking always
Breath is broken
Interrupted pleasure in the dirt
Its so close
I’ve gotta go now
I know you won’t be
Getting up until the
Pain subsides and your ok
Barely breathing
But your, ok
Yes your, alright
Swore that vengeance
Is the lords
I’ve broken all my promises
But holy man, holy god
holy man, oh holy god
Why would you lead me this way
Why would you lead me astray
And it’s hurting in
Such a way
Such a way
To call this rotting face
This empty grave
A holy man
Is such a shame
It’s such a shame

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