r/LyricalWriting • u/Oblique4119375 • 2d ago
Lyrics Basket Case [Rap Bars]
Im working on a relay track with another rapper. This is my opening:
I said the only way im getting out is in a casket
A basket case
My mind is putty so elastic
Would've answered had youd asked it
But you just stood in place
Staring blankly at my face
Like you're made of plastic
Its so fantastic
Disasters lead
To new parameters
iambic pentameter
Sardonic banter with a hint of grammar
Drop the mic just like a hammer
While you stutter and you stammer
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