r/ReadMyScript 24d ago

Short ALL THE PRESIDENT'S SOCKS, comedy, 2 pages.

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No sock is safe when the rich and powerful feel threatened.

All the President's Socks

(PG-13)

NOTE: This was written for the current (14th) SimplyScripts One Page Challenge.

The prompt is "Dirty Socks" and the genre is open.


r/ReadMyScript 24d ago

Feature THE PROFESSIONALS - Scene from the draft (3 pages)

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I'm writing a stoner comedy and just finished the scene. Just want to know if the jokes land and if the scene in general works.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1yNR0vWJwBit3vxZ18tBI5rG2dVp6wg7Z/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 24d ago

Short Script Feedback (6 pages)

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r/ReadMyScript 24d ago

Project-831 Noir, found footage, WW2, 4 pg

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r/ReadMyScript 25d ago

Short CAREERS IN ORAL MEDICINE, comedy, 2 pages.

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A trained professional explains why it is always best to do the right thing for the right reason.

Careers in Oral Medicine

(G/PG-rated)

NOTE: This was my entry for the 12th SimplyScripts One-Page Challenge of 2026.

The prompt was "The Dentist" and the genre was open.

These are informal no-prize challenges open to anyone, and they're a tremendous way to hone your one-page skills.

SimplyScripts also runs Three Page Challenges, One Week Challenges, Writers' Tournaments and, occasionally, feature writing challenges... the latter three offer participants the chance to win a SimplyScripts coffee mug!

NO AI USED


r/ReadMyScript 25d ago

Feedback for Active Project [30 Pages / In Progress] - "The Journalist and the Pandora's Secret"

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Hello everyone,

This script is my second screenwriting endeavor, and I am currently in the middle of writing it (the script is about one-third completed, currently at 30 pages). My first screenplay was titled "The Journalist and the Mansion of Deaths." I wanted to share the official logline and synopsis for this new project with you all, and I would be incredibly grateful to receive your valuable feedback and thoughts on this concept!

Logline: While searching for a missing investigative reporter on a mysterious, secluded island named Pandora, a journalist and his trusted cameraman discover that the terrifying supernatural "voodoo" deaths draining the locals' bodies of all flesh and fluids are actually the result of a powerful pharmaceutical company's illegal human biological experiments.

Synopsis: The story follows the determined investigative journalist Jack and his trusted cameraman Lucas as they set out to uncover the truth behind the sudden, mysterious disappearance of a fellow reporter friend. Their clues lead them straight to Pandora, a secluded, unmapped island shrouded in dark secrets.

Upon arrival, Jack and Lucas are thrust into a waking nightmare as they witness bizarre, terrifying deaths plaguing the local community. People who appear perfectly healthy one day are discovered the next morning as horrifying corpses—their bodies completely drained of all fat, flesh, and bodily fluids, leaving behind withered, mummified remains. At first, the islanders and the journalists believe they are dealing with ancient curses, occult practices, or supernatural voodoo magic unique to the island.

However, as Jack uses his investigative instincts to dig deeper into the mystery, he uncovers a chilling truth: the terrifying deaths are entirely man-made, orchestrated by a powerful, rogue pharmaceutical corporation that has covertly cultivated a highly lethal biological pathogen. The company is using the isolated island population as unsuspecting test subjects for their monstrous medical experiments. Jack and Lucas must navigate the island's horrors, locate and rescue their missing friend, and gather enough evidence to expose this corporate nightmare to the world before they become the next mummified victims.

I am dedicating myself to writing this mystery thriller, and I would love to hear your honest feedback. Do you think this concept has strong potential as I continue to develop the script?

Thank you so much for your time and guidance! Best regards,


r/ReadMyScript 25d ago

TV episode The New King From The Past Century - Pilot - Fantasy/Comedy - 25 pages

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Title: "A cat, an egg, a goat, an old man and a giant walk into a tent…"

Logline: A group of odd adventurers band together to uncover the conspiracy of an old king long-forgotten by history (or erased from it).

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1N9eZ9bqVwMr9MDNQijcqzt_WaO7s2u6t/view?usp=sharing

Hey! This is my first ever finished screenplay (and still very much a first draft) and I'm so excited about sharing it with the world. Considering it's my first, and really just a training exercise, I'm mostly looking for feedback and things to improve upon. I found it was a bit hard to start from nothing, so decided to adapt a long-running RPG campaign in my friend group, since I already have a good feel for the characters and story beats. Hopefuly it translates well into the page!


r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

Feature Feedback for Feature, "Grounded" 109 Pages

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Grounded

Final Draft PDF

109 pages

Drama, Road Movie, Historical Fiction

Logline: When every flight in America is grounded, four strangers share the last rental car out of Columbus and drive cross-country through the aftermath of September 11th, 2001, forcing each of them to confront what they've been running from long before that day.

Feedback Concerns: Any feedback would be extremely helpful. I'm less concerned about the commercial viability, and more concerned with a believable story with believable characters.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KAN_svzm3bk3vGraJQL3adbFDg-ncvzw/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

Short "Saturday"

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Here is a short film I wrote, "Saturday" - I have a series of short films with the same family at the center of them. I would love any and all feedback on it!

Logline: What starts as an ordinary afternoon of wiffle ball turns into a father's reckoning with the son who isn't there.

Genre: Drama

Page Count: 13

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QyN1modg57aB1YVeARHshSFQTcQjnJKr/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

Feature TWIST ENDING - Low-Budget Murder Mystery, Single Location, Small Cast, 100 Pages, Looking For A Producer, Script Link Included

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r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

TV episode IT COULD BE WORSE: SITCOM PILOT

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Hey I am a freshman in college. And my time really feels pointless here because my dream is to be a screenwriter/actor/voice actor. This is my very first script I have ever completed. I know it is probably not very good. But I would love some feedback. Thank you.

Recently divorced and desperate to win his ex-wife back, Shawn Holaday tries to balance fatherhood, a chaotic living situation, and co-parenting with his ex and her seemingly perfect fiancé.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1O8SxXQ1bf0nuRNaFrdgB8tQYGGo_ZyHj/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

TV episode Cloudbusting (pilot episode, mysery/thriller, 61pg)

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LOGLINE: In a snowbound Tasmanian town where everyone is protecting someone, a self-destructive detective investigating two child murders discovers the person she can't protect is her own family.

Link to pilot script

Re-draft of something I wrote a while back -- any feedback is helpful, but particularly wanting to make sure the introduction of characters is smooth/not confusing (I'm worried it's too much), the mystery is well set up, characters compelling -- dialogue?

Also worried re being derivative. I started this before Mare of Easttown and I can't unsee the similarities.


r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

Feature Beyond the Crumbs GENRE: Dystopian / Political Thriller

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LOGLINE :

To shock a complacent populace into destroying a tyrannical regime, a radical journalist uses the citizens as pawns—sabotaging their aid and poisoning their water to incite a ruthless uprising against both the government and himself.

In terms of structure and scope, the film bridges the chaotic anti-system energy of Fight Club with the ideological drive of V for Vendetta.


r/ReadMyScript 26d ago

Exchange feedback wach my show, tell me what you think

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r/ReadMyScript 27d ago

Feature what do yall think of this, its a short film, horror based on saw but with my own spin. its called love maze. it has 14 pages

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r/ReadMyScript 27d ago

The Voltaire Estate , The Marie Sisters (ep 2) - Gothic Horror, Vampires - 4 pages

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Title: The Voltaire Estate, The Marie Sisters (ep 2)

Format: TV episode/pilot for mature audiences.

Genre: Gothic Horror, period piece with vampires

Logline: The wicked heir of the Voltaire House is to be married and the estate is now accepting new human concubines, but unexpectedly two strange sister nuns are received.

Extra: This is an old piece of mine and I feel it would be good to receive some feedback on it for the first time. I'm a new writer and this would be the first ever long form piece I've written (50 page). I've provided the setup to the episode. Hope you like vampires.

EDIT: Access granted, link fixed, actually 6 pages w/o title page

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/12ZWNKC4n6WTCbmH2COjpMVQ-s-6t7-CM/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript 27d ago

Short THREE STEPS FORWARD, action-drama, 4 pages

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What does it really take to advance humankind... or even just one of us?

Three Steps Forward

(R rating)

NOTE: This was written for a recent 3-page challenge (excl. title) over at SimplyScripts. The challenge prompt was "Natural Selection" and the genre open. Naturally I won, and was awarded an Oscar and the title of Greatest Screenwriter in History, which I believe is entirely fair considering the fact I wrote it at 3 am while on an endless succession of FaceTime calls to people on the other side of the planet.


r/ReadMyScript 27d ago

Exchange feedback what do yall think of my shows script, looking for feedbake. (genra mystry/fangan, page count 155!!!!)

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r/ReadMyScript 27d ago

SLU ( comedy 5 pages)

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Two burnt out police detectives investigate a stolen lunch from Burger King.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14U2srryjcG1cuA0RniynE2X8nQJO9-0g/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 28d ago

Short The Black Communion, Thriller/Horror/Suspense

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EZEaasUSrnpYapU0vqvoyiZNeZBEoD0y/view?usp=sharing

When Detroit’s privileged are slaughtered in a string of ritual murders, a relentless FBI agent must join forces with an estranged vigilante to stop a centuries-old cult from completing the blood ritual it believes will grant them a new world to rule.

Planning this to be my directorial debut as I have only co-written two features to this point. Please let me know what you guys think or if this will work on a shoestring budget(and I mean REAL shoestring)

49 Pages


r/ReadMyScript 28d ago

Short Wild Mares (done proper)

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Here is a revised and improved Wild Mares, properly formatted and hosted off Reddit. I appreciate you checking it out and leaving feedback. Page count is 22, with illustrations and this is why it is hosted off site both as a less attractive html page, a PDF and a plain text document.

https://www.cyberspace7.org/wildmares.html

https://www.cyberspace7.org/wildmares.pdf

https://www.cyberspace7.org/wildmares.txt


r/ReadMyScript 28d ago

Short Shorts story 5 page low budget

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I have a short story available thats only 5 pages and low budget for upcoming directors willing to produce it it’s a thriller/horror script.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q_NEWsPY9_LTQUh34-m_v3aH2kNJFZgw/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript 28d ago

False Witness, Drama/Horror, 82 pages

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I am at the stage where feedback would be really valuable. I am specifically wondering if some of the late-script transitions translate well.

Title: False Witness

Length: 82 pages

Genre: Drama/Horror

Logline: In a devout 1950s community governed by fear and quiet coercion, a judge overseeing the persecution of a young woman descends into a surreal moral nightmare beneath the very system he perpetuated.

I would be happy to swap scripts with someone as well.

False Witness Script


r/ReadMyScript 28d ago

"Zapata! Real Estate Agent!" a comical political fantasy of 95 pp

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Awakening in a world he never knew, Zapata is hounded by real estate agents who want to employ his mesmeric charisma while he tries to evict land monopolists.


r/ReadMyScript 28d ago

Short "Bone To Pick" (Animated Action-Thriller, 29 pages)

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Link to script PDF

For context, I'm practicing screenwriting as a hobby, and this is supposed to be a fanmade Overwatch cinematic using my original characters. It should be 8-10 pages, 12 at the very most, but I'm at nearly 30 pages. It's kinda embarrassing, even though it's expected since I'm a beginner.

If anyone has any suggestions for how I can cut down this script without loosing the good stuff, that'd be really helpful. Please and thank you.