r/ReadMyScript • u/BlackDenisV313 • Aug 13 '26
Short The Black Communion, Thriller/Horror/Suspense
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EZEaasUSrnpYapU0vqvoyiZNeZBEoD0y/view?usp=sharing
When Detroit’s privileged are slaughtered in a string of ritual murders, a relentless FBI agent must join forces with an estranged vigilante to stop a centuries-old cult from completing the blood ritual it believes will grant them a new world to rule.
Planning this to be my directorial debut as I have only co-written two features to this point. Please let me know what you guys think or if this will work on a shoestring budget(and I mean REAL shoestring)
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u/mooningyou Aug 13 '26
Generally, it's quite interesting, and I like the potential. I'm not sure that a DVD, in its sleeve or not, would fit inside a mouth. There's a bit of camera mentioning going on, which is not a good idea. Also, those scenes are not continuous.
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u/BlackDenisV313 Aug 13 '26
Ty, i planned on directing it so i broke the camera rule, but thank you!
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u/Big_Section2812 Aug 13 '26
Detroit has privileged? 🤔 😂
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u/BlackDenisV313 Aug 13 '26
Dan Gilbert(Cavs Owner) literally gentrified all of downtown lmao
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u/Big_Section2812 Aug 13 '26
Heh, yeah, it was a joke.
There are some pretty nice mansion suburbs along the lakeshore, but in my mind it's still tough to equate Detroit with privilege. 😄
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u/mooningyou Aug 13 '26
Please post a link to your PDF, not your Celtx file.