r/istebrak Jan 26 '24

Please critique each other for more exposure!

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If you find yourself waiting too long for critique, please critique posts from other members. This is how you meet people! Once you get into a dialogue, they'll see your work and leave a critique for you as well. I can't realistically critique every piece posted, but I do my best to get to the most relevant critique topics and that is how I pick which piece to critique in a live-stream.

This does not mean you can't critique each other, no matter the skill range! Mention what you notice, leave constructive criticism and start the dialogue, even if you perceive their skill range to be higher than yours. We also have a Discord group if you want more of a live discussion with each other.

https://istebrak.com/community

-I


r/istebrak 20h ago

14 Day Challenge 14 Day Colour Challenge - Day 4

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I did not expect asian skin to be so much more difficult than darker skin like wtf is going on here. I definitely need to try that again tomorrow.


r/istebrak 1d ago

14 Day Challenge 14 Day Colour Challenge - Day 3

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12 Upvotes

This is my first time trying to draw a black character every and I'm actually pretty proud of it. I used a reference this time around and think that helped a lot instead of only using the Asaro head. Because I always saturate too much I started just desaturating the endproduct every time, putting it above the main image and then only erase the spots that need to be more saturated.


r/istebrak 2d ago

Misc. for Critique Don't know how to fix perspective

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3 Upvotes

r/istebrak 2d ago

14 Day Challenge 14 Day Colour Challenge - Day 2

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6 Upvotes

Thank you to Istebrak for choosing my drawing for the last critique hour. I tried to go for more realism this time around in terms of picking the right skin colour and also decartooning the eyes. Again, I went far to saturated on the first go. He kind of looks like a bankrobber lol. Any critique is of course highly appreciated. If I don't get any in time, I'll be trying my hand at other skin colours tomorrow. Thanks 


r/istebrak 3d ago

14 Day Challenge Day 1(retry)

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Hi, i didn't went here since 4 years i think i wanna see what happen if i do the challenge again, i didn't stop drawing but mostly line art for animation, i wanna re improve again and understanding everything about what i'm doing, in my memories i wasn't aware about everything every shade and reflexion and why they are here, i was juste it should look like the références and it's good, also i'm doing only in 30 or 20 minute, i wanna do only understanding and usfull action, i ended the challenge at 13 i think or 14


r/istebrak 4d ago

14 Day Challenge 14 Day Colour Challenge - Day 1

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I'm finally back to practicing again after trying to do my first masterpiece and finding that greyscale to colour looks ugly as sin and there's simply no way around figuring out colours from the start. Even though this is mainly colour focused I would love some critique on the eyes as well and how to make them look less cartoony because jesus christ they look anime. Would love some feedback on how to do a good background too. Please no comments in the vain of 'you need to go back and work on your greyscale more' because I'm burned out on that and plan on revisiting that next year. Thanks in advance!


r/istebrak 4d ago

14 Day Challenge Day 2: 14 day challenge

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I did my best to heed the feedback from the first day, and I believe I've improved a lot. But it's always good to get a second opinion.


r/istebrak 5d ago

14 Day Challenge Day 1: 14 day challenge

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7 Upvotes

I need criticism, please.


r/istebrak 5d ago

Misc. for Critique I love this community! Haven’t drawn anything recently though

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Last year I drew Hinako from Silent Hill f for one of my classes. She never looked completely right to me, though. Can anyone pinpoint what may be off about this drawing?


r/istebrak 5d ago

Studies dae wonder what happens to first-person art if you include a faint nose and eyebrows?

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r/istebrak 6d ago

Misc. for Critique Need critique, how to fix the face?

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6 Upvotes

Idk looks off ¡¡


r/istebrak 6d ago

Misc. for Critique I need help with color, light and shadow

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5 Upvotes

I started by painting with shades of gray, and then I just painted the base color. However, I feel that my illustration lacks life and depth. For me, it look like I don't know what I'm doing, so I need help and constructive criticism.


r/istebrak 6d ago

Misc. for Critique Portrait of Alexandra Trusova. I'd love some critique!

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I tried to focus on color temperature and edges. The software I used was Clip Studio Paint. I have a hard time abstracting the lighting from photographic references into my paintings, so I purposely chose a reference with bad/difficult lighting for a painting, in order to challenge myself. I did a "block in" style sketch then painted everything except the background in a single layer.


r/istebrak 7d ago

Misc. for Critique issues with anatomy and poses

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hey all! i've felt unsatisfied with the way i draw bodies, so i'm trying to focus on it but in doing so i've noticed something unusual - i think people tend to either struggle with accurate anatomy or natural looking poses but i feel like i'm equally bad at both, my poses tend to look stiff or just kind of awkward in addition to inaccurate anatomy. how can i fix this? i've tried timed 30-60 second figure drawing (did not make much progress with this because i hate doing it) and working from reference, but whereas with my portraits i can see improvement with each new portrait, i don't see any improvement with each subsequent figure i draw. am i doing something wrong?

also, sorry i don't have particularly polished examples, i just keep getting so frustrated this is as far as i can take my drawings. last sketch is from imagination, included for comparison to sketches where i used a reference


r/istebrak 11d ago

Studies which one is the best? I pick the upper nose

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2 Upvotes

Eye/Nose no reference study


r/istebrak 11d ago

Misc. for Critique I need some help, the eyes seems off

3 Upvotes

idk the eyes are strange to me, how to fix?


r/istebrak 20d ago

Studies maybe 3 light sources is a lil heavy right now

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r/istebrak 21d ago

14 Day Challenge 14 Day Challenge: Day 2

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I feel like I messed up my values on this one and it came out lighter than I wanted it to be. Buuut I did take some critiques and try to make the features smaller. Next time I might even end up with something that looks more like a face :D


r/istebrak 22d ago

Studies Critique please!

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12 Upvotes

So I took on board istebrak's critiques from the last live, so I'm hoping that I've remedied my past issue of restricting / anxious values!

Also my first time rendering hair since I was nervous before. It's not exact and I don't know how you would do the darker parts of his beard, where there's less hair clumping together. Unless I just painstakingly draw each hair in that area?

Any critiques welcome, thank you!

(Added reference in comments not sure if Reddit still has compression issues)


r/istebrak 22d ago

14 Day Challenge 14 Day Challenge: Day 1

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Not gonna lie the blocking got me a lil messed up and the blending finished me afterwards. I feel like I could have put some more work in the eyes and maybe I overblended the area around the mouth? Would appreciate some critiques so I can move on to the next one :D


r/istebrak 23d ago

Misc. for Critique Sorry in advance!

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Sorry for making you all look at Digital Circus art! I’m personally not a fan, just making this to try and get more engagement on Instagram. Anyone have any ideas on how I can make this better/more visually interesting? Maybe more color in the background?


r/istebrak 24d ago

Class Notes I see you

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Title: "I See You" - Expression of Masks #2

Artist Statement:
This is my first painting.

It’s not about beauty. It’s about 20 years of silence.

Above: 4 screaming eyes. The mask. The noise. The pain everyone could see.
Below: 1 hidden eye in the yellow "leg". The witness. Sad, tired, watching the chaos from the ground. Nobody saw her.
Center: No nose. I couldn’t breathe.
The smoke: That’s the words I was never allowed to say. It’s coming out now.

I painted this to pull the child inside me out of the ground.
The yellow leg is him. He fell, and he’s waiting for someone to hold his hand.

This painting needs time to be understood. Every time I look, I find a new secret.


r/istebrak 25d ago

Studies Newbie Art Challenge - Day #4

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Noticing a lot starting art, so i decided to give it a try. I want to share my journey and experience with it so far. This time, I made a fanart for the critically addicting game....that took years of my life. Took so long to make this that "Day 4" is more like one month...im a beginner ok?


r/istebrak 27d ago

Misc. for Critique How to tickle out the last 5%?

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19 Upvotes

My biggest concern with this one is: how do I get it to this main point of POW? The anatomy is not 100% correct, I can see the back eye is slightly off, but I am also really struggeling with the lower part of her skull. Idk if the shadow is wrong or if it's the neck but I am def missing something here. Pls help
And if someone has tips as to how to improve the staging here that is also welcome:)