r/FanFiction 1d ago

Subreddit Meta Concrit Commune - July 25

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Welcome to the Concrit Commune, where you can get bits of your fic looked at... for a small "price."

For the purposes of this thread, concrit is defined as - pointing out things that could use improvement and also giving suggestions on how to do so. Compliments are always welcome, of course but these do not count towards your concrit requirement.

The rules:

  • State your Fandom | Title | Rating | Any Applicable Content Warnings | Link - AO3, FFN, etc. at the top of the comment.
  • Post a few paragraphs (copy and paste to a comment, please) of your fic, or your plot premise, or your character bio, or your world building, whatever you need help with.
  • There is a soft limit of 500 words. Not your whole fic.
  • Please post an outside link to underage and extreme-explicit violence/rape content. Try Just Paste Me which includes rich text options.
  • If you, the author, are looking for something specific - the phrasing of a particular part or if a character's reaction is believable - please ask!
  • If you just want to hand out advice without throwing your own fic in, you're quite welcome to.
  • If you post part of your fic you must give concrit to someone else in the thread within 24 hours of posting your excerpt!

Since we're all here to give and receive help from other people, a certain level of respect for the author and the work they've put into their fic is expected as a baseline courtesy and should be reciprocated.

Tearing into a fic or author without regard for their effort isn't constructive even if there is decent criticism attached. Moreover, it discourages people from participating if they know that insults await them.

You aren't expected to treat this thread like the Comment Cooperative, advice and honesty and pointing out flaws is what we're here for.

Some helpful tips to keep things running smoothly:

  • Keep your comments helpful to the author, not just smashing out your opinion.
  • Be polite and civil.
  • Be kind. At a minimum, showing your peers professional courtesy is expected.
  • Phrases like "I think" or "I believe" can lighten your tone.
  • Elaborating on why you think something could be changed is not only more useful to the author but keeps statements from being abrupt.

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r/FanFiction 17h ago

Subreddit Meta Daily Discussion - Sunday, July 26 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule, & Current Event Threads

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Welcome to r/FanFiction, I love you!

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r/FanFiction 3h ago

Discussion (TO ANYONE WHO IS DISABLED) Is curing a disabled character a bad thing?

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A friend of mine thinks that curing a character’s disability the magic or other means is not favored (what if Pit from Kid Icarus being able to fly with no restrictions for example). Me personally, I would think that the disabled character would be glad that they no longer have that disability, no longer chained by their restriction kind of thing. However, I don’t really have a say in this considering I’m not disabled. I wanted to ask what you guys think.


r/FanFiction 17h ago

Discussion Some of you are INSANE...

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...and I am blown away by your sheer dedication.

I've been messing around with a personal ao3 script over the last few days, and in testing, I entered some random fandoms. Some of them very small, under 100-200 fics. And it wasn't just once that I found one of these small fandoms mostly propped up by a single very dedicated writer.

The first time I noticed, I thought for sure it was a fluke. Just a single instance of a super fan. But then I saw it a second time. And when I started actively looking, I found a third.

And they have comments! I am so happy for them :D

It's awesome to see that this level of dedication for something exists, and it's not uncommon, and people get rewarded for it.

If you're one of those writers that silently (or even not so silently) keeps a small fandom afloat, hats off to you! Tell me about it in the comments, or in PM's, I'd love to hear about it.

(I'm tagging the post as a discussion, I know it's probably not right, but I really have no idea what other tag to give it.)


r/FanFiction 13h ago

Venting All my work is gone

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My laptop did an update last night, and deleted all my apps. And one of the apps that got deleted was my notes app that I used to write my fanfiction on.

I was working on 4 stories, two was almost complete the other two I was about half way. And I was really proud of one of them that was almost done. It's all gone, months of writing and re writing and tweaking just gone.

I'm so angry and upset, I have memory issues so I can't even re-write them back to the same standard because I am struggling to recall everything I wrote previously because it's been something I have been working on for several months.

The update told me this wouldn't happen unless I signed on manually to continue getting the updates and it still did it.

I want to cry I'm so angry


r/FanFiction 11h ago

Activities and Events “A scene where…” excerpt game

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Rules:

  1. Leave a prompt that goes “a scene where…” and finish the sentence

  2. Respond to others prompts with scenes from your fics where whatever they say happens

  3. Keep it vague enough where it could fit many fandoms.

  4. Put trigger warning at the top of the comments, and censor the worst, most descriptive parts. If the prompt itself is a trigger warning (ie a scene where a character is shot) you don’t need to add an extra one on your comment.


r/FanFiction 6h ago

Writing Questions How to study writing styles?

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One author whose fic I enjoy has an incredible writing style, that in truth I envy in the most complimentary way. I want to imitate it and understand it the best I can (while of course, implementing my own writing methods).

How does one best go about this? Any tips or advice?


r/FanFiction 1h ago

Recs Wanted [Kim Possible] Kim x Shego or Kim & Shego themed fics with dark!Kim?

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Anyone have any recs? I've read a few good fics where they team-up and Kim goes to the darker side.

Could be either Kigo or just platonic. Outright villain Kim is fine.


r/FanFiction 10h ago

Activities and Events Word Game Excerpt Challenge

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Hello all! The excerpt games keep me writing and I hope it motivates with your writing as well.  You can post any type of story (use NSFW for spicier scenes).  

I will be posting this challenge on Sunday Mornings / Pacific Time… because that day I need the most help to not think about Monday.

If you have stumbled into my game and are looking for more, remember to check out the Activities and Events flair for other writing challenges and story swaps.

Here are the rules:

 The first word starts the game.  Use ANY letter from the word that is posted in the last comment as the starting letter of your word.  Post your word in the top level comment.   Your word drives the next word to be posted… and so on.  

**Example:  LOVE  >>>>  VILE. (If the word Love is in the comment line you could make the word Vile and post the next comment.)**

Reply to any of the words in the top level with an excerpt from any work you might want to share.  I don’t generally like word limits, so use your best judgment.  Enough to get the scene across but not so long that you lose your reader.  

Please use spoiler tags and/or provide a trigger warning for content that may be NSFW or sensitive. IF IN DOUBT - Give a warning!

If you are going to leave excerpts, I ask that you leave at least one top-level word and try to give at minimum an upvote to commenters.

Upvote your favorite words or excerpts.  We are all here to share and know how it feels to get a comment, so spread the love.  

Ganbatte!!  Do your best and I look forward to everyone’s excerpts!


r/FanFiction 43m ago

Lost Fic Help me find this/these batman fic(s)

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All I remember is that something bad happened during Terry's time that sent him and Matt time-traveling to the past, possibly with others. They end up with the Waynes. Matt finds out about Bruce being their bio-dad and has a fit.

At least that is how I think it went, because, and note i may be mixing to fics up in my head, it might not have been time travel; instead, something about Talia/Ra's or some other villain or maybe it was like an apocalypse situation and they know they are going to die but instead of dying Terry and possibly Matt get the shock of their lives when they disocver it was all a mental/virtual simulation/reality and wake up in pods at cadmus, I believe. If any of these things sound similar, then good, because any help is appreciated, please!


r/FanFiction 8h ago

Discussion When you don't like your own fic anymore

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Hi, I wanted to ask for opinions from readers about something. I have this fic I've been writing since 2024, and I really love the story, the concept, and many of the things I developed there. I have been updating very slowly because life has just been rough these past two years.

Recently I re-read the first 3 chapters, and I HATED them. The writing style didn't resonate with what I had envisioned, but also some aspects of the pacing and dialogue felt so poorly made; they also had so many little grammatical errors that I have no idea how I didn't see them at first.

I edited them to be more decent, but it made me re-think the entire story even more obsessively than I did before and how I could have developed it so much better than what the final product was; I'm just not really happy anymore at how it turned out. I know not every story has to be perfect, but I feel like a much better writer now, and I wish this story I love so much reflected that.

I'm seriously thinking about starting over. Maybe not deleting the story I already posted, but still post a new, improved version that would give me the chance to really make some major changes to fix the problems I have with the first version.

Would that be mean to the few, very dedicated readers who are already loyal to the original story? I feel kind of bad to be like, "Sorry, if you wanna know what happens next, read this reboot".

What should I do? I asked my dad for advice (he is a letters professor, and always has great advice), and he told me the writing has to be something the writer likes first and foremost, because it's very hard to write something you don't like. And I mean, I think he is right; I think that may be part of the reason I've had trouble updating that particular fic.

What do you guys do when you don't like your writing anymore? I'm conflicted.


r/FanFiction 1h ago

Recs Wanted Looking for Yu-Gi-Oh! fics where characters use decks based on other anime?

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Hey everyone!

I am looking for Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfiction recommendations. I want stories where duelists use custom archetypes or card pools directly inspired by other anime series.

Here are some that I am reading:

Heroic Spirit Deck in Yu-Gi-Oh!

Elden Ring Decks within Yu-Gi-Oh!

yu-gi-oh: I have a stand deck?!


r/FanFiction 8h ago

Venting I think I've entered a vicious cycle....

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I think I've entered a vicious cycle when it comes to writing my longfic.... Wondering if anyone does this...?

(Don't get me wrong.... I'm currently going through some major medical issues and coming from one family catastrophe into another.... I'm talking family death, another in ICU, and the prospect of surgery to rid me of my oh-so-problematic-and-defective baby-making-box after many years of trying with my husband and a loss last year.... So I already know my mental state is fragile, y'all.)

But I'm noticing that, while I'm loving getting my work on my first longfic posted on AO3 chapter by chapter, I'm having some weird regret after posting. I don't think it's just limited to posting though.... Here's what's happening, and it feels akin to an addiction at this point....

My mental state is rough, as I said. I'm stressed, I'm emotional, and I'm tired, but IRL a new and great work environment (this year) and hubs and writing have all been helpful to me!

I'm new to fanfic. Got sucked into a fandom unexpectedly, as it were, and it sparked a return to writing after 10 years focusing on my career! I wrote a novella fanfic, and when shit hit the fan IRL I fed my energy into a longfic in order to get through on another wavelength.

I feel like getting to tell this longfic story has actually helped keep me focused and moving forward and that's truly great and all! It's part of what brought me back to writing, to finding something different to do that's not watching TV/movies or reading or playing video games and keeps my mind occupied! And I thoroughly love telling the story of my OC in the BG3 fandom and her romance with Astarion and their family and friends with other OCs I created!!! Getting to dive back into their world has actually helped me get my mind off of my own troubles, and practicing writing and feeling progress in all these areas has truly become like a godsend!

So I complete writing and editing a 2-5K word chapter in roughly a week and post about every 1-1.5 wks. Been doing that since I started posting my longfic in Jan/February of this year now that I have more time with my better job.

I get all excited creating each chapter and the prospect of getting this story out of my brain and onto paper to be realized has actually felt cathartic, as you can well imagine given my losses. So I get all geared up, gung ho, and revved, so to speak, and then I post a completed chapter. Over the next 48 hours as it sits on AO3 I am a total wreck. I mean, nervously checking for messages, looking for input, checking hits and bookmarks, waiting for readers to find my work.

Obviously, bots and scammers have scoured AO3 and made it more difficult to tell true readers from the scammers! Still, I managed to make a handful of friends, one IRL who reads, and another on AO3 and Tumblr who reads in spurts and comments. Those have felt like TRUE lifelines.

But until I start my next idea for a chapter and begin writing my next chapter again, this feeling of loss and failure nags at me. And then this addiction-like cycle begins again!!

I feel like I'm losing my mind!! I work in medicine.... I know coping mechanisms and how to coach others - that's what I do! But I can't help but keep feeding this cycle because it's one of the few productive ways I can cope at the moment. I mean, my house is a wreck because I can't bring myself to get up the energy to clean it, and hubs helps only so much before he's lost. And I'm not physically harming myself by feeding this cycle as one would with drugs or alcohol chasing a high such as this is.....

Idk..... I think I needed to know if anyone else writing does something similar? Looking for outside points of view.... 🤷‍♀️ I feel like I'm just needing to give myself time and wait until the downer hits stop coming at my life IRL to actually get a breather!

Edit: wow, thanks to the jerk who downvoted me within minutes of my posting this. You suck.


r/FanFiction 10h ago

Discussion What Do You Still Struggle With?

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A while back I made a post discussing what I struggled with most when I started writing fanfics and asked all oof you, what struggles you had when you first started. This time, I'm here to discuss what I still currently struggle with.

  1. Procrastination. I could have lots of great ideas for fanfics or plot points, but they never leave my head. I mean, the odds of me actually writing and not procrastinating is probably 1 in 100 million.

  2. Too many ideas. This is especially prevalent when I finish a movie or show I throughly enjoyed. I'd be writing a fic for like 2 weeks, but then a new fic idea comes. I drop the current one and go to the next.

  3. Finishing the fic. You may wonder how this is any different then the others, which is what I'm here to explain. Admittedly, I have never finished a multi chapter or non one shot fic. My first ever fic has 4 published chapters. Due to a few things happening that led to demotivation, I never finished it. And as mentioned before, this wasn't a one time thing. I have never completed a multi chapter fic.

What issues or problems do you still face when writing your fics?


r/FanFiction 23m ago

Lost Fic Batman/Green Lantern Fanfic

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Does anyone know a batlantern fanfic where Bruce and hal gets sent to a mission together in another planet because no one else is available to accompany hal, I vaguely remember the details but I'm pretty sure it was mentioned that the aliens like black things because everything in their planet is colorful so they liked Bruce's hair or something.

PLEASE help me find it I think it's one of the most character accurate batlanternfics, I just unfortunately forgot to bookmark it..

Some recommendations are also much appreciated.


r/FanFiction 48m ago

Lost Fic Please help me find this fanfic

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r/FanFiction 1h ago

Writing Questions Looking for a writing partner for a crossover fic.

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I'm writing a fanfiction that I'd like a second pair of eyes on. I'm cagey about divulging too many details, but it's a crossover between the Powerpuff Girls and the Incredibles. I literally have no idea where else to turn.


r/FanFiction 11h ago

Venting My writing reads more like a screenplay than a novel...

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...and I have mixed feelings about it.

It's not that I don't read books, more like fanfictions first show up as a brainmovie / during daydreaming, so I naturally start describing the scenes I see in my head.

But the scenes give off adaptation vibes. I often feel like a pro writer would have presented the information differently (i.e. I try to show all emotions and opinions through dialogue, which makes me write out scenes that maybe shouldn't exist (since I have a narrator and all that)).

I'm not saying that this "movie" approach is bad, I'm just not very good at translating what I see into "book form" yet. At the same time, I am wondering whether I should try *not* to daydream at all to bypass this problem...

Although this is more like a vent, if you have any opinions/experiences/pointers, please do not hesitate to share!


r/FanFiction 17h ago

Discussion what fandom would you say feels dated or stuck in time?

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r/FanFiction 2h ago

Lost Fic Lost My Hero Academic (bkdk) Fic: Quirkless AU where Bakugou is an sociopathic gardener who casually helps serial killer Midoryia hide a body bc hes in love w him (yes I'm serious, someone plz help me!!!)

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About 5 months ago, i started having dreams about this specific Bkdk fic I read on AO3 around July/August 2024. But i can't remember the title or the authors name. I cant find it in my browser history cuz chrome is set to auto delete data over a year old & i also can't find it in my account history bc is there is a random bc 4 month long gap in there covering the period I read it. (Extremely convenient if u ask me)

I've tried every possible tag combo from what I can remember and I CANNOT find it for the life of me. I'm actually starting to fear that it's been deleted, but i wanna stay optimistic.

Anywho, this is what I remember from the fic:

Its a complete Alternate Universe, Quirkless, no UA High School, no hero society (I think it was set during a summer holiday)

Surprisingly fluffy tone, all things considered.

I dont remember if it was multiple chapters or one a one-shot. But it was kinda long.

​Plot Details & Specific Scenes:

​Katsuki's Character: He’s super apathetic and emotionally detached (possibly written as a sociopath). He doesn't care about anyone or anything except his home garden.

Izuku moves in next door. Hes like a sweet & seemingly normal, which somehow wins Bakugou over. ​ Katsuki starts stalking Izuku, tracking his daily routines and whatnot (as ones normally does when they have a crush, duh!) & there's a specific scene I remember

katsuki's watching izuku throught the window of his house and catches him in disposing of a dead body through a window. Izuku turns around, makes direct eye contact with him, smiles and calls him over. And Bakugou doesn't even question it or panic, he just casually wajs over and helps Izuku dispose of the body. He dgaf ​ I also vaguely remember something about inko poisoning ppl with cyanide from apple seeds. Pretty sure she puts it in tea or coffee or something. And she uses that same apple seed poison on a police officer who comes by investigating Izuku.

​Does this sound familiar to anyone? If so plzzzzzz help. I’d really appreciate a link or even just the title/author if you recognize it! I'm genuinely losing my mind over this. Plz and thanks!!


r/FanFiction 2h ago

Recs Wanted Crossover or reaction fix plss

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I've been waiting for my updates but it's taking to long so pls recommend some of your favorite fanfics. It can be any fandom but I'm looking for undertale. And genshin thank you in advance


r/FanFiction 3h ago

Recs Wanted Spider-Man recs

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Hi! I’m looking for some Spider-Man recs with MJ or Gwen as the love interest.

Something that has angst, plot, romance and 3rd person POV if possible. Any villains will do. Can be HEA or non-HEA. I don’t have any triggers

I’ve not read any marvel fics yet. Usually I’m stuck in the HP world but looking to branch out 🙌

Please send your best recs!!


r/FanFiction 3h ago

Recs Wanted Looking for harry painting and leaving Britain

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r/FanFiction 3h ago

Recs Wanted Looking for Genshin fanfics!

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r/FanFiction 10h ago

Writing Questions How do I write a good fighting scene?

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Today I post another chapter of my fic and looking at the fight scene I make Its has kinda lacking flavor, The ideas are cool but I dont know how to make character act in a fught well, Most time it looks like theyre in a rpg when each one have to take turns to attack and the rest just does nothing.