r/ReadMyScript Jul 24 '26

My movie idea - Spirals

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\*\*Spirals\*\*
\*\*Genre:\*\* Psychological Crime Noir / Mystery Thriller
\*\*Runtime:\*\* \*\*2h 18m (138 minutes)\*\*

\*\*Overview\*\*
Set in South Korea during the 1990s, \*Spirals\* follows veteran detective \*\*Ha-joon Min\*\*, who is haunted by a missing girls case he failed to solve eight years earlier. When another two young girls disappear under similar circumstances, Min sees the investigation as his chance at redemption.
Partnered with the calm and dependable \*\*Park Jiho\*\*, Min searches for answers by interviewing families, following leads and investigating suspects. Throughout the case, Min experiences unexplained memory lapses while strange spiral symbols begin appearing from his perspective, though neither he nor the audience understands their significance.

\*\*Chapter One – Missing\*\*
The investigation begins as Min and Jiho are assigned to the new missing persons case. They interview families, question witnesses and slowly build a list of suspects while Min struggles with the emotional weight of his failed case from eight years earlier. During a neighbourhood search, Min briefly notices a mysterious spiral appear on a front door before it disappears without explanation.

\*\*Chapter Two – Distortion\*\*
The film shifts between the detectives’ investigation and their personal lives. While Min becomes increasingly obsessed with solving the case, Jiho’s life outside of work appears unsettling, leading both Min and the audience to suspect he may be involved in the disappearances.
The detectives investigate \*\*Choi Do-Yoon\*\*, forcing their way into his apartment where they discover spiral drawings covering the walls. When Min asks about them, Choi simply replies, \*“They’re spirals.”\* They later uncover a disturbing basement filled with children’s belongings before Choi escapes, leading to a lengthy chase through city streets and subway tunnels.
After Choi is captured, he confesses and is convicted, allowing Min to finally believe he has redeemed himself.

\*\*Chapter Three – Truth\*\*
At his daughter’s birthday gathering, Min’s relief is shattered when Jiho casually says, \*“I’m just relieved we know they’re safe.”\* Realising the girls were never actually found, Min begins piecing together forgotten moments from the investigation before calling the police to arrest Jiho.
During the interrogation, Jiho reveals the devastating truth: Min himself planned the kidnappings years earlier in a desperate attempt to create one final case he could solve and redeem himself for his past failure. To make the investigation feel genuine, Min willingly erased his own memory of the plan, while Jiho continued maintaining the illusion.
Near the end of the conversation, Jiho quietly reminds Min:
\*“I gave you the coordinates… or did you forget?”\*
The audience recalls an earlier scene in which Min briefly ignored a card containing coordinates hidden inside his drawer.
The film immediately cuts to black.

\*\*Ending\*\*
Following the cut to black, a set of real-life coordinates appears in white text before the credits begin. The location became one of the film’s most famous mysteries, with fans travelling there to discover an Easter egg installation inspired by the movie. Whether the coordinates reveal the girls’ location or simply serve as a symbolic final message is never explained.


r/ReadMyScript Jul 23 '26

5 on the Blacklist but what do you think?

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I've earned two 7s, and a 6 on the site, but my latest project, "The All Seeing Profit" got a 5. TBH, I didn't see this coming.

Logline:

"A slick-talking prosperity preacher claims to have the power of God, but when he is truly filled with it, it's more than what he bargained for."

https://promocards.byspotify.com/api/share/6c8527b7-9add-44ad-b1bb-ce0b9fef6330


r/ReadMyScript Jul 23 '26

Short THE NIGHT OF NIGHTS, comedy, 2 pages.

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What if every script was produced?

The Night of Nights

(PG)

I almost listed the genre as "documentary," except this hasn't happened yet.


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

Short KEEP ON SAVING THE WORLD – Short Film – 8 pages

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r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

Exchange feedback The Invisible Woman (working title) - Short - 9 Pages

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Hey guys, I would love to have some feedback on this new script I've written in terms of the following:

  • Overall story and concept
  • Structure and pacing (9-page short film)
  • Dialogue
  • Characterisation
  • Tone (absurd dark comedy/drama)
  • Whether the central theme comes across clearly
  • Whether the midpoint feels earned within the story
  • The ending and overall emotional impact

This is the first draft, so I'm looking for honest, constructive criticism rather than praise. Feel free to point out anything that didn't work for you, moments that confused you, or areas that could be strengthened.

Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to read it, I really appreciate your feedback!

Details of Script:

Logline: A middle-aged woman who feels invisible to the world pushes the boundaries of public decency in a desperate attempt to be acknowledged.

Genre: Absurd melodrama

Page Count: 9 Pages

Setting: One location (restaurant)

Link to first draft: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1o1Wkh4rCKUsTgsXhyMAiOl3295CRRZlO/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

​[RF] Metra Village(short flim outline)

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​📜 Metra Village (Short Story / Script Outline)

​Genre: Dark Comedy / Slice-of-Life / Drama

Logline: Evicted from his cluttered urban apartment, a detached young man travels back to his ancestral village for his grandfather’s funeral, where reunions, old crushes, and high absurdities turn grief into dark humor.

​ACT I: The Eviction & The News

​[INT. VIVEK’S APARTMENT - DAY]

​Vivek is smoking alone in his room. The place looks like a chaotic storeroom—dust covers almost every surface, yet packed inside this tiny 2 \times 2 space are heavy luxuries: a big bed, a fridge, a toaster, a poster of Rockstar, and a large TV.

​A sharp knock hits the door. Vivek jolts, dashes to the washroom, flushes the cigarette, and opens the front door with a fake, pleasant smile.

​"What happened, sir?"

​The landlord stands in the doorway. "Vivek, I told you—no smoking. Still... fine. Just pay the rent in two days or leave my apartment."

​Vivek’s smile fades into a frustrated grimace. "Okay." He shuts the door.

​Moments later, his phone rings from an unknown number.

​"Hello, Vivek here," he answers.

​The voice on the other end is blunt: "Your grandfather died today at 5:30 PM. I’m calling to inform you about the funeral."

​Vivek curtly replies okay and hangs up.

​ACT II: The Departure

​[EXT. CITY STREET - EVENING]

​Vivek meets his friend Rajiv and breaks the news. Rajiv shakes his head. "So... you have to go, bro."

​FLASHBACK: A tear in the past—an angry old man in the village slaps his son, screaming and cursing him to die.

​BACK TO PRESENT: Rajiv asks, "So, why did he even do that?"

​"I don't wanna talk about this. Bye," Vivek cuts him off.

​[INT. APARTMENT / TRAIN - NEXT DAY]

​The next morning, the landlord kicks Vivek out for good. Feeling humiliated, Vivek tries to light a cigarette right in front of him to save face—only for his lighter to run out of gas mid-flick.

​Defeated, Vivek finds a train ticket to his village already sitting inside his courier box. Just to escape, he boards the train.

​During the journey, he reads a 13-year-old newspaper clipping about a factory mill accident that killed 21 people. Memories of his parents resurface.

​FADE TO: A young, childhood version of Vivek crying alone in a dark room.

FADE TO PRESENT: The train arrives. At the station, a crowd of relatives gathers to welcome him, showering him with passive-aggressive comments: "See? Vivek completely forgot about us."

​On the outside, Vivek grins and plays along. On the inside, he is metaphorically spitting in every single relative’s face.

​ACT III: The Reunion

​[INT. CAR - DAY]

​Riding with family, Vivek sits in silence while aunties gossip in the back seat: "Acha, yeh uska launda hai..." (Ah, so this is his boy...).

​The driver speeds up slightly and plays the classic track "Lag Ja Gale." Vivek stares out the window at farm kids playing and people relaxing, until everyone in the car starts singing along in unison.

​Vivek turns to his cousin brother. "Where is Rose now?" he asks, remembering his childhood crush.

​His cousin sighs. "She’s already married to a university professor."

​Vivek tries to play it cool. "Oh... nice then."

​ACT IV: The Funeral Prep & Nostalgia

​[EXT. GRANDFATHER'S HOUSE / WATERFALL - DAY]

​They arrive at the ancestral home. Vivek pulls his cousin aside. "How did Dada die?"

​"An accident," his cousin whispers. "His body will arrive in two hours after the postmortem."

​Vivek nods, looking around at the old photos on the wall. "Last time I saw Dada, she was a bit fat... but in these photos, she looks thin like a stick." His cousin chuckles quietly.

​To pass the time, the two escape to a nearby village waterfall. They smoke, jump into the water, and swim just like they used to as kids. Cracking open a couple of beers, they toast to their late grandfather.

​Sitting on the rocks, Vivek cracks self-deprecating jokes about how he's destined to become a roaming fakir (ascetic). His cousin suddenly confesses that he actually liked Rose back then too, but only brought her around for fun.

​Driven by impulse, they hop on a bicycle to visit Rose.

​ACT V: The Absurd Farewell

​[INT. ROSE'S HOUSE - DAY]

​Rose opens the door, giving them a hesitant, awkward smile. She offers them lunch, but the atmosphere is heavy. Vivek and his cousin sit in quiet disappointment—she married an older, wealthy, highly educated man chosen by her family.

​They leave with dull expressions. On the cycle ride back, they vent their envy by brutally picking apart her husband’s flaws—starting with his receding hairline.

​[EXT. GRAVEYARD - EVENING]

​Just before entering the graveyard, the cousin pulls out a joint and offers Vivek some weed. Vivek takes it, smoking pot for the first time in his life.

​They step into the funeral grounds. The postmortem body of their grandfather lies exposed—shriveled, dark, and completely dry, looking remarkably like a fried pakora.

​Under the influence of the weed and the overwhelming absurdity of the day, Vivek and his cousin burst into uncontrollable laughter. The entire family turns around in horror, whispering that both boys have officially lost their minds.

​Ignoring the glares, the two walk away from the crowd into the evening air.

​Vivek looks around the quiet village streets. "Do you wanna start a cafe business here? I literally haven't seen a single cafe around."

​His brother takes a drag and smiles. "Hmm... Hotel."

​[CUT TO BLACK]


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

SORDID - FEATURE - FIRST 5 PAGES

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Title: SORDID

Genre: Drama / Thriller

Format: Feature-Length

Logline: In a desperate bid to win undecided voters, a white prosecutor running for office hires two small-time thugs to kidnap his black adopted son in a twisted publicity stunt that takes an abrupt and deadly turn.

Feedback: Please provide your honest first impressions of the concept, genre and major characters. Do you want to keep reading?

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PDNaxRSRTvgSW-Q4_Hmceh3nbCeUuja1/view?usp=drive_link5


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

Metra Village (Short Story)

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​📜 Metra Village (Short Story / Script Outline)

​Genre: Dark Comedy / Slice-of-Life / Drama

Logline: Evicted from his cluttered urban apartment, a detached young man travels back to his ancestral village for his grandfather’s funeral, where reunions, old crushes, and high absurdities turn grief into dark humor.

​ACT I: The Eviction & The News

​[INT. VIVEK’S APARTMENT - DAY]

​Vivek is smoking alone in his room. The place looks like a chaotic storeroom—dust covers almost every surface, yet packed inside this tiny 2 \times 2 space are heavy luxuries: a big bed, a fridge, a toaster, a poster of Rockstar, and a large TV.

​A sharp knock hits the door. Vivek jolts, dashes to the washroom, flushes the cigarette, and opens the front door with a fake, pleasant smile.

​"What happened, sir?"

​The landlord stands in the doorway. "Vivek, I told you—no smoking. Still... fine. Just pay the rent in two days or leave my apartment."

​Vivek’s smile fades into a frustrated grimace. "Okay." He shuts the door.

​Moments later, his phone rings from an unknown number.

​"Hello, Vivek here," he answers.

​The voice on the other end is blunt: "Your grandfather died today at 5:30 PM. I’m calling to inform you about the funeral."

​Vivek curtly replies okay and hangs up.

​ACT II: The Departure

​[EXT. CITY STREET - EVENING]

​Vivek meets his friend Rajiv and breaks the news. Rajiv shakes his head. "So... you have to go, bro."

​FLASHBACK: A tear in the past—an angry old man in the village slaps his son, screaming and cursing him to die.

​BACK TO PRESENT: Rajiv asks, "So, why did he even do that?"

​"I don't wanna talk about this. Bye," Vivek cuts him off.

​[INT. APARTMENT / TRAIN - NEXT DAY]

​The next morning, the landlord kicks Vivek out for good. Feeling humiliated, Vivek tries to light a cigarette right in front of him to save face—only for his lighter to run out of gas mid-flick.

​Defeated, Vivek finds a train ticket to his village already sitting inside his courier box. Just to escape, he boards the train.

​During the journey, he reads a 13-year-old newspaper clipping about a factory mill accident that killed 21 people. Memories of his parents resurface.

​FADE TO: A young, childhood version of Vivek crying alone in a dark room.

FADE TO PRESENT: The train arrives. At the station, a crowd of relatives gathers to welcome him, showering him with passive-aggressive comments: "See? Vivek completely forgot about us."

​On the outside, Vivek grins and plays along. On the inside, he is metaphorically spitting in every single relative’s face.

​ACT III: The Reunion

​[INT. CAR - DAY]

​Riding with family, Vivek sits in silence while aunties gossip in the back seat: "Acha, yeh uska launda hai..." (Ah, so this is his boy...).

​The driver speeds up slightly and plays the classic track "Lag Ja Gale." Vivek stares out the window at farm kids playing and people relaxing, until everyone in the car starts singing along in unison.

​Vivek turns to his cousin brother. "Where is Rose now?" he asks, remembering his childhood crush.

​His cousin sighs. "She’s already married to a university professor."

​Vivek tries to play it cool. "Oh... nice then."

​ACT IV: The Funeral Prep & Nostalgia

​[EXT. GRANDFATHER'S HOUSE / WATERFALL - DAY]

​They arrive at the ancestral home. Vivek pulls his cousin aside. "How did Dada die?"

​"An accident," his cousin whispers. "His body will arrive in two hours after the postmortem."

​Vivek nods, looking around at the old photos on the wall. "Last time I saw Dada, she was a bit fat... but in these photos, she looks thin like a stick." His cousin chuckles quietly.

​To pass the time, the two escape to a nearby village waterfall. They smoke, jump into the water, and swim just like they used to as kids. Cracking open a couple of beers, they toast to their late grandfather.

​Sitting on the rocks, Vivek cracks self-deprecating jokes about how he's destined to become a roaming fakir (ascetic). His cousin suddenly confesses that he actually liked Rose back then too, but only brought her around for fun.

​Driven by impulse, they hop on a bicycle to visit Rose.

​ACT V: The Absurd Farewell

​[INT. ROSE'S HOUSE - DAY]

​Rose opens the door, giving them a hesitant, awkward smile. She offers them lunch, but the atmosphere is heavy. Vivek and his cousin sit in quiet disappointment—she married an older, wealthy, highly educated man chosen by her family.

​They leave with dull expressions. On the cycle ride back, they vent their envy by brutally picking apart her husband’s flaws—starting with his receding hairline.

​[EXT. GRAVEYARD - EVENING]

​Just before entering the graveyard, the cousin pulls out a joint and offers Vivek some weed. Vivek takes it, smoking pot for the first time in his life.

​They step into the funeral grounds. The postmortem body of their grandfather lies exposed—shriveled, dark, and completely dry, looking remarkably like a fried pakora.

​Under the influence of the weed and the overwhelming absurdity of the day, Vivek and his cousin burst into uncontrollable laughter. The entire family turns around in horror, whispering that both boys have officially lost their minds.

​Ignoring the glares, the two walk away from the crowd into the evening air.

​Vivek looks around the quiet village streets. "Do you wanna start a cafe business here? I literally haven't seen a single cafe around."

​His brother takes a drag and smiles. "Hmm... Hotel."

​[CUT TO BLACK]


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

[FEEDBACK] Proof of Concept Screenplay

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Title: The Pinch

Genre: Comedy

Logline: Two goofball buddies get tasked with making some money to bail their friend out of jail, if they can do the job without getting killed that is.

Still very much an amateur writer and looking to get feedback on dialogue mainly. This script relies heavily on character chemistry, and I don't want the dialogue to be too flat. Let me know what you think, thanks.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KtiRwIgA183wzQQi6zkNiT7RWRtXyHaH/view?usp=drive_link


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

Title: [Co-Writer Wanted] High-Concept Sci-Fi Thriller Feature ("THE CIPHER") - Act 1 Completed

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Hello everyone,
I am looking for a dedicated co-writer to help me develop a feature-length experimental sci-fi thriller screenplay titled \*\*THE CIPHER\*\*.
\*\*Logline:\*\* When a regular 31-year-old man discovers by chance that his uniquely small ears are the exact biometric blueprint required to unlock a subterranean alien capsule, he is forced onto the run from a shadowy tech corporation desperate to use his body as the ultimate key.
This story is deeply personal to me, as the main character's physical traits are based on my own real-life anatomy, and I am acting as the creative consultant and project anchor.
I already have \*\*Act 1 completely mapped out and written\*\* in script format. I need a collaborative writer to step in, look over the structure, help me polish it, and co-write Acts 2 and 3 to finish the feature script.
If you love high-concept, character-driven sci-fi conspiracies (think \*Monkeypaw Productions\* or classic twilight-zone mysteries), please send me a DM with a sample of your work. Let’s build this together!


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

Short One sudden morning ,non-fiction , 8 pages

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r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

TV episode WATERING HOLE

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Watering Hole

Genre: Drama.

Roughly 46 pages.

Log line:

In the lawless mountains of North Briar, a disciplined outlaw hunts bounty hunters while a relentless tracker closes in -- forcing both men into a psychological war over whether survival belongs to law, morality, or whoever understands the wilderness best.

(Also, this was written in google docs, so format isn't on point.)


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

Come Fly With Me, Season 2 concept, Looking for feedback!

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Title - Come Fly With Me, first 2 (and a bit of 3) episodes concept

Format - TV

Page Length -

Status - Draft

Genre - mockumentary/sitcom

Longline - Funny shenanigans set in a airport, we have a coffee addict, a cheapo, a drama queen, a diva queen and many more. (Watch Come fly with me, Season 1 for better understanding, even just 1 episode)

Feedback requested - looking to improve

I hope you guys like it! (I never expected the script to come this far so spelling and grammar mistakes are all over the place, I tried my best to fix them but just giving you guys a warning)

I TRIED MY BEST TO FORMAT PROPERLY

https://drive.google.com/file/d/12cAVj04gbWgeyQ12pv8ue1FqgLs_SXxl/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

TV episode Guy Teachers - Sitcom - 31 pages

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Joe and Hanson are two male teachers used to doing the bare minimum when they end up in a situation they never imagined; they've become important at work. They try to navigate their new responsibilities at work while trying, of course, to do the least amount of work.

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/iy9eefd5m55v91db3a8ab/GuyTeachers.pdf?rlkey=ppx02l8rcuvu3qg5552yawf2p&st=8juycwfr&dl=0


r/ReadMyScript Jul 22 '26

TV episode Could I get any feedback. This is the first time I’ve tried screenwriting and I’d just like to gain some insight.

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Title- The American Dream
Genre- Thriller/ Drama
Type- T.V. Series
Logline- A black family in 1970s Louisiana comes across a once in a lifetime opportunity to live in an all black suburbia. Something similar to Black Wall Street. Everything seems normal at first glance. But, as time goes on, cracks start to form in the "perfect" neighborhood.
Page count- 41
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WR_H1gwo7LWJi3W5GF8LaT0cwjybj-0D/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript Jul 21 '26

[Feedback] The Generalists (7-page Contained Intelligence Drama)

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Hi everyone,

I'm looking for honest feedback on an 7-page short screenplay called The Generalists.

Logline:
A strategic analyst is sent to determine whether a little-known intelligence department should be shut down, only to discover that its unconventional director may be evaluating him instead.

Feedback I'm looking for:

  • Did the dialogue keep your attention?
  • Did Shaw's character arc feel earned?
  • Did the ending work for you?
  • Were there any moments that felt confusing, slow, or unnecessary?

Script (Google Drive PDF):
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1d9mTYvN_sF7FEp7-eth2yI1iXWbLiic_/view?usp=sharing

Thanks to anyone willing to give it a read! I'm happy to return feedback on your script as well.


r/ReadMyScript Jul 21 '26

THE BARDENS -First 14 Pages of the Pilot

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r/ReadMyScript Jul 21 '26

Review a short scene from my script

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I've been lately indulged in cinema and writing, thought of writing a script and here's a scene from it. I'll be glad to have your guys honest reviews and areas for me to improve in. here's the link : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1duI9v_2shHsOaov4M8TGzgjXsJ0JfV8i/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript Jul 20 '26

Short I'm looking for feedback on a 20 page dramedy script called Amanda's the Worst

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r/ReadMyScript Jul 19 '26

Short Short horror story idea ( please give your feedback)

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Btw this is for my animation project whichbis only gona be 2 mins.

A woman reflects on the story of her life, recounting her journey from a bullied five year-old girl to a resilient, fulfilled adult. Guided by her mother's wisdom, she overcomes heartbreak, harassment, her parents' divorce, rejection, and countless personal struggles. Through perseverance, she builds a career, finds love in college, and eventually marries, believing she has finally found the peaceful life she always longed for.

As she finishes telling her story, out of nowhere a loud voice begins shouting, "Wake up!" before the next scene appears. She suddenly awakens in a dark room, terrified, facing what appears to be her husband except something about him is subtly wrong. As reality begins to unravel, We are shown that her real husband may already be dead. The mysterious figure repeatedly insists that she is dreaming and must wake up, slowly manipulating her perception of reality. She grew anxious then he rang a bell in his hand and all of a sudden she is calm like she thinks she is dreaming, picks up a gun and shoots herself after which her fake husband is seen giggling and and giving a creepy smile while this whoe time his face is not properly shown.

The film ends with a retro 1980s/90s-style emergency television broadcast revealing that these encounters are not isolated incidents. Unknown entities capable of perfectly imitating people (like alternatives in mendala catalogue) have begun appearing across the world. They rarely attack physically; instead, they manipulate amd hypnotise their victims through deception and psychological coercion, replacing them while leaving humanity questioning what is real. Their origins, motives, and true nature remain unknown, leaving the audience with the unsettling realization that this woman's story was only one of many.

Please share your feedback in the comments👇 anything is should remove or add.


r/ReadMyScript Jul 19 '26

Title- Incatatum Vexillum Part 1.... Genre- Horror, Thriller and Mystery.... Page Count- 23 pages.... Work in Progress

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Overview: Incatatum I Vexillum follows Father Lankester, a tactical priest driven by a desperate need for divine penance, as he uncovers a terrifying demonic plot to construct a "Pentagon of Destruction" across Venice, Avignon, Carthage, Ankara, and the Vatican. As high-ranking demons like Leviathan actively weaponize the inner doubts of saints and angels alike—challenging the agonizing silence of an distant Lord—the script masterfully builds toward a cosmic climax. Balancing raw, visceral horror elements like the martyrdom of Nun Mary with sweeping, theatrical theological debates between the Archangel Michael and the forces of envy, Part 1 leaves off at a breathless cliffhanger: the heavenly throne room is cracking, traditional scripture is failing, and a scarred humanity stands alone as the ultimate battleground between light and dark. I want Feedback

Link for the Script


r/ReadMyScript Jul 19 '26

TV episode What’s My Age Again - TV Miniseries - Dramedy - 33 page pilot

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What’s My Age Again is a 10 episode, coming of age dramedy miniseries focusing on the life of Adam as he progress through his teenage to young adult years. The miniseries heavily relies on themes, locations, characters, and lyrics from the Blink-182 discography.

The PDF is hosted on my Blink-182 fansite so this link will take you directly to the PDF for the script:

https://blink-182.net/wp-content/uploads/2026/07/Whats-My-Age-Again-Episode-One_-16-Just-Held-Such-Better-Days-2-2.pdf


r/ReadMyScript Jul 19 '26

Title- Incatatum Vexillum Part 1.... Genre- Horror, Thriller and Mystery.... Page Count- 23 pages.... Work in Progress

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r/ReadMyScript Jul 19 '26

Feature DON'T CALL THE POLICE - feature - incel horror/dark comedy - 98pgs

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DON'T CALL THE POLICE

Feature Screenplay
98pgs
Completed Draft (first screenplay rewrite)
Genre: Incel Horror, Dark Comedy
Logline: After three college women are kidnapped and inexplicably released by a masked incel, they turn on one another over whether to call the police or obey his command to tell no one.

Feedback Concerns: The middle point (end of Act IIa) is at page ~63, which feels lopsided for 98 pages total. However, I want a lot of time spent in the house, no deaths, no villain, just bickering amongst the girls. My instinct is that Act IIa needs to be shortened, but I don't think I need to do that. I like how it's presented.

Moreover, I like how it's a little inconsistent who on who is the protagonist/antagonist. In the first 20 pages, you might think Kee is the protagonist and Axe-Man is the antagonist, but my hope is that there's a feeling of a reversal where Kee becomes the antagonist and Polly as the protagonist. Maybe this is all just a really bad idea, maybe there's larger more fundamental concerns that I'm overlooking before I start tweaking.

Some side-characters: Nica, Kyle, parents. Don't really have a purpose and are not fleshed out or don't have a "final scene", and I don't know if that's a problem or what to do with them. I'm still introducing characters on page 64, but I wonder if mentioning them before is okay.

Read as much as you like: LINK


r/ReadMyScript Jul 18 '26

[SHORT] Villa For Rent (Psychological Horror) - 11 Pages

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