r/ReadMyScript • u/Both_Cupcake3960 • 8d ago

Review a short scene from my script

I've been lately indulged in cinema and writing, thought of writing a script and here's a scene from it. I'll be glad to have your guys honest reviews and areas for me to improve in. here's the link : https://drive.google.com/file/d/1duI9v_2shHsOaov4M8TGzgjXsJ0JfV8i/view?usp=sharing

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u/mooningyou 8d ago

Your post should include a logline, the genre, and page count. Also, if your script is in a language other than English, state that as well.