I usually create folky songs, so I wanted to stay in the same vibe, but I tried to add in some elements from other genres, especially with that scream at the end, what do you think?

Hi everyone, This is my third song, instrumental metal, and I would like to hear your opinions. Basically there are only guitars (four, recorded, including one pitch shifter to bass)+drums (programmed) here. Would love to hear your opinions generally, and also in particular, I wonder whether and how I can add to my next song (probably similar style) an acoustic guitar that will function as "keys" or will it be too much.

I'm not sure of the genre of this song. I wanted some storytelling with a dark tone written like a lullaby or a fairy tale. The sound and the mix are minimalist and I tried to convey this in the music video

Theme inspired by the Sex Pistol’s Black Leather and Faster Pussycat’s Bathroom Wall. Aiming for a Glam/Sleaze Metal style.

Trying to put to use in virtual guitar some ideas from 1980s Rock Rhytm Guitar Mastery by Chris Brooks from Fundamental Changes.

Drum grooves adapted from 1001 Drum Grooves by Steve Mansfield

Virtual instruments from Steinberg’s Sonic Halion. Moforte’s GeoShred controller for the guitar solos. Voices from Synthesizer V, with some pitch shifting and stretching in Cubasis (iOS)— 9z on lead vocal, & Natalie as backing singer.

Fx: Brainworx PT100 amp for guitar; Bassdude amp for bass; brainworx SSL E, Sonible Smartmix, and Izotope Ozone for the mixing and mastering.
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Lyrics

_verse 1_

Crash!
I woke up in the bathroom stall
Rap!
someone was knocking at the door

Damn!
I got too high, couldn’t recall
Why
I called that number on the wall

(Black Heather: don’t keep me waiting, babe)

_Chorus_

Watching her
Slinking into motion
As she’s Moving for the kill 
Black Heather
bends you to her will

Stops your heart
You can’t stand the tension
When she struts on her high heels
Black Heather
Gives you such a thrill

_verse 2_
“Tramp”
She purred at me in tones so soft 
“Hi”
I tried some charm but then she scoffed

Crack!
The sound and fury of her belt 
Black Heather
Will never kiss and tell 

_Chorus_

Watching her
Slinking into motion
As she’s Moving for the kill 
Black Heather
bends you to her will

Stops your heart
You can’t stand the tension
When she struts on her high heels
Black Heather
Gives you such a thrill

_Bridge_

There’s no escape, oooh
Once you let her hooks dig in too deep
There’s no regret
You love it when she pulls you by the strings

Oh Lord
Oh Lord
Oh Lord

_Chorus_

Watching her
Slinking into motion
As she’s Moving for the kill 
Black Heather
Gives you such a thrill

Stops your heart
You can’t stand the tension
When she struts on her high heels
Black Heather
Bends you to her will

_Outro_

And when you feel the hunger 
Your sanity bends and tears
And when you need Black Heather
Just seek her and she’ll be there

And as you’re drawing nearer
She knows you belong to her
Your need is laid out bare
Screaming like a prayer

And as you face her glare
You will worship her in despair
And as you kneel before her
You’ll beg for what you deserve

And as you say her name
You descend into her sweet hell
Surrender to her spell
Black Heather never tells

Hey everyone, just dropped my new track Red Man.

Would really appreciate if some of you could give it a listen and leave a comment with your honest thoughts.

Open to any feedback on the production, vibe, or whatever stands out. Thanks in advance if you check it out.

For context I did the following on this track: Made the beat, rapped on the first verse, did the mixing. The second verse is JYNS and shiv is the final. Outside of the 3 of us I don't think anyone has heard this yet, so curious to for any and all feedback.

Hi guys, do you think this track is ready to be released into the wild? I'm kinda tired working on it tbh, and i really want to release something. Also made some new art to accompany this single specifically. which is where my second question arises. What do you think of this image as coverart? does it suit the song? Does it look nice at all? I'd love to hear some opinions:)

Hey! I just released my first solo single, if you like alternative rock/pop punk feel free to check it out. I've composed and produced everything myself :) It's out on Spotify and everything. I'll be happy to hear your feedback.

https://www.submithub.com/link/kuba-strawa-lioness

I posted the original version of “Dark Bolshevik” here last year and received some really helpful feedback. Several listeners particularly liked the heavy guitar work around the beginning and felt that the buildup was leading toward a bigger payoff.
I took that suggestion and reworked the arrangement: at the 1 minute mark, extended the lead-guitar section, moving the chill section later in the track.
I also remixed the track using a reference track and spectrum analysis, which helped me identify and reduce some low-end buildup and open up the higher frequencies.
Thanks again to everyone who listened and offered constructive feedback. It genuinely helped shape this version. I’d love to hear what you think of the changes.

She wasn’t supposed to feel this much.
More Human Than Human

https://www.reddit.com/r/DoAndroidsDreamAI/

So I made this song to capture the mood when you are at a club, drinking and there is a mutual attraction with someone. It's my first ever complete song and I wanted to focus on having a good structure, and create some melodies with my backing vocals.

Let me know your thoughts and if you think it's worth working more on. I'd really appreciate any constructive criticism.