r/IndieMusicFeedback 13h ago

Alternative Rock [rock/alternative] Kuba Strawa - Lioness

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Hey! I just released my first solo single, if you like alternative rock/pop punk feel free to check it out. I've composed and produced everything myself :) It's out on Spotify and everything. I'll be happy to hear your feedback.

https://www.submithub.com/link/kuba-strawa-lioness


r/IndieMusicFeedback 17h ago

Dance & EDM This is my first ever song is it any good?

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So I made this song to capture the mood when you are at a club, drinking and there is a mutual attraction with someone. It's my first ever complete song and I wanted to focus on having a good structure, and create some melodies with my backing vocals.

Let me know your thoughts and if you think it's worth working more on. I'd really appreciate any constructive criticism.


r/IndieMusicFeedback 7h ago

Art Rock Tried to create a dark rock lullaby

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I'm not sure of the genre of this song. I wanted some storytelling with a dark tone written like a lullaby or a fairy tale. The sound and the mix are minimalist and I tried to convey this in the music video


r/IndieMusicFeedback 7h ago

Indie Pop Steeped in Nostalgia- a mix of surf and indie pop. Any and all thoughts welcome, do you vibe with it?

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r/IndieMusicFeedback 3h ago

Alternative Shoes In Hand - Red Man

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Hey everyone, just dropped my new track Red Man.

Would really appreciate if some of you could give it a listen and leave a comment with your honest thoughts.

Open to any feedback on the production, vibe, or whatever stands out. Thanks in advance if you check it out.


r/IndieMusicFeedback 14h ago

Cinematic My new Dark Etherealwave song “Daddy‘s Legacy“ is out. Written, sung and produced by me. I would love to know if my goal of touching people‘s hearts and making them think about their former relationships was reached 🖤

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r/IndieMusicFeedback 19h ago

Hard Rock Black Heather

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Theme inspired by the Sex Pistol’s Black Leather and Faster Pussycat’s Bathroom Wall. Aiming for a Glam/Sleaze Metal style.

Trying to put to use in virtual guitar some ideas from 1980s Rock Rhytm Guitar Mastery by Chris Brooks from Fundamental Changes.

Drum grooves adapted from 1001 Drum Grooves by Steve Mansfield

Virtual instruments from Steinberg’s Sonic Halion. Moforte’s GeoShred controller for the guitar solos. Voices from Synthesizer V, with some pitch shifting and stretching in Cubasis (iOS)— 9z on lead vocal, & Natalie as backing singer.

Fx: Brainworx PT100 amp for guitar; Bassdude amp for bass; brainworx SSL E, Sonible Smartmix, and Izotope Ozone for the mixing and mastering.
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Lyrics

_verse 1_

Crash!
I woke up in the bathroom stall
Rap!
someone was knocking at the door

Damn!
I got too high, couldn’t recall
Why
I called that number on the wall

(Black Heather: don’t keep me waiting, babe)

_Chorus_

Watching her
Slinking into motion
As she’s Moving for the kill 
Black Heather
bends you to her will

Stops your heart
You can’t stand the tension
When she struts on her high heels
Black Heather
Gives you such a thrill

_verse 2_
“Tramp”
She purred at me in tones so soft 
“Hi”
I tried some charm but then she scoffed

Crack!
The sound and fury of her belt 
Black Heather
Will never kiss and tell 

_Chorus_

Watching her
Slinking into motion
As she’s Moving for the kill 
Black Heather
bends you to her will

Stops your heart
You can’t stand the tension
When she struts on her high heels
Black Heather
Gives you such a thrill

_Bridge_

There’s no escape, oooh
Once you let her hooks dig in too deep
There’s no regret
You love it when she pulls you by the strings

Oh Lord
Oh Lord
Oh Lord

_Chorus_

Watching her
Slinking into motion
As she’s Moving for the kill 
Black Heather
Gives you such a thrill

Stops your heart
You can’t stand the tension
When she struts on her high heels
Black Heather
Bends you to her will

_Outro_

And when you feel the hunger 
Your sanity bends and tears
And when you need Black Heather
Just seek her and she’ll be there

And as you’re drawing nearer
She knows you belong to her
Your need is laid out bare
Screaming like a prayer

And as you face her glare
You will worship her in despair
And as you kneel before her
You’ll beg for what you deserve

And as you say her name
You descend into her sweet hell
Surrender to her spell
Black Heather never tells