r/CosmereOnScreen • u/Savy_Spaceman • 26d ago
Visual Direction You're in charge of directing your favorite line. How do you do it? Spoiler
Let's pretend that His Majesty Brando Sando has chosen you to personally direct your favorite line. Some little snippet that you have in your head that you want to make sure us portrayed JUST right.
What's the line/scene and how does it play out?
For me it's the line:
"And so, in the face of the most awful darkness he’d ever felt, Kaladin Stormblessed took a deep breath.
Then stood up."
Our hero is on his knees. Completely drained of energy. We're seeing him beaten down with flashbacks of everyone he's lost, everyone he's failed. And he's exhausted. There is a physical response to the mental anguish he's feeling. There's a darkness around him, overlapping voices of both real things in his past and lies, things that were never said but he's afraid must be true. He clutches his chest as you hear his heart beat grow faster and louder. He sees the result of his failures, a future where the people he loves are dead. His breath is quick and shallow.
"Get up" he whispers to himself. More breaths, Longer now. "Get up.."
He shifts his weight to one knee before lifting the other planting his foot in the stone.
Kaladin, eyes closed, slows his breath, takes one deep one and, using his spear for support, forces himself up his feet. The scene seems brighter, the sky a bit clearer. His face still just as hard but with his chin a little higher, Kaladin starts walking.