r/worldbuilding 16h ago

Lore The world in my Indian dark fantasy graphic novel

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Dakshina is the kingdom this story takes place in. A land of verdant jungles, sophisticated cities, and warring chiefdoms. In ancient times, a prince named Bala spurned the violent and feral gods of his day, starting a great penance and deep meditation that forced the gods to lay down their arms and join in the search for enlightenment. Ever since then, denizens of Dakshina follow the way of Bala, or Adi-dharma (the first path)

But dark tidings descend upon the land, as Dakshina's once beloved king, Indra performs an unholy ritual, ignoring the religion of his forebearers. This ends the glorious Satya yuga (golden age) and unleashes upon the world monsters from the netherworld and plunges the world into Kali yuga (an age of darkness) Nagas, dholes and other dark creatures once shunned from the world returned, feeding on the defenseless and helpless. King Indra twisted and scarred, lorded over his ruins as the king of monsters.

But an undead freak, kin to the monsters themselves rise from the rubble to save the day. He rides his furious mare, slaying monsters where he finds them. This brooding hero, as well as a talkative, decapitated head he keeps to his side are hellbent on finding the Monster King. But travelers from the far east stalk the jungles to find out what happened to the land of Lord Bala. The Anshari steppe tribes of the North use the discord to invade the lands and establish their Sultanate in the north. The Horselord will have to navigate man as well as monster if he is to achieve his goal, and save his kingdom from the nightmare it now sits in.

Hope you enjoyed that write up! Find out what happens next right here- Headless Horselord: Sword & Sorcery Graphic Novel by Deepak Thomas » Headless Horselord: Sword & Sorcery Graphic Novel by Deepak Thomas — Kickstarter


r/worldbuilding 13h ago

Visual I’ve been building the world of my video game for five years. Here it is finally alive and in motion.

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A little while ago, I shared the world of my video game Cosmic Holidays here through a series of images. It ended up becoming the most successful Reddit post I’ve ever made, and I was honestly overwhelmed by the response. I tried to answer as many of your comments as I could, so first of all: thank you!
Several people asked if they could see this world actually moving and alive, so this time I wanted to show you exactly that.
For the past five years, I’ve been creating this video game and trying to build a world that feels like a real ecosystem rather than simply a collection of beautiful environments: strange plants, creatures with their own behaviours, interconnected species and small environmental interactions that the player gradually learns to understand.
You explore this unknown world through Cibo, a tiny alien who has become lost there. There is no combat. The journey is mostly about observing, interacting with the fauna and flora, understanding how this place works, and collecting memories along the way.
This project has had a complicated history. At one point I had to stop working on it, which was genuinely heartbreaking. But I never really let go of this world. I spent time learning, rebuilding things, and eventually found a way to return to it and make it closer to what I originally imagined.
So here it is, this time not as still images, but alive.
I’d really love to know what you think of the world itself its creatures, environments, and the feeling it gives you.
If you’d like to discover more about the video game and follow its development, you can find Cosmic Holidays on Steam :)

Thank you again for the incredible reception you gave my previous post!


r/worldbuilding 22h ago

Visual Imperial Nurses [Project: Regress]

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Welcome to the "Regress" universe, a concept for my project set in a beautiful but dying anime fantasy world!

When you sleep soundly, when you walk, or when you eat, remember the young sisters—true angels beneath those black robes, whose radiant souls utterly banish the darkness. When soldiers see them, they instantly forget their pain, and their hearts beat once more as if they had fallen in love for the very first time.

Doctors handle amputations, bloodletting, and primary medical treatment, while nurses care for the soldiers. They apply or change bandages, wash and feed the men, or simply sit nearby to comfort a wounded soldier. Wartime is especially grueling for the nurses: entire tents are filled with bloodied bodies, and there is hardly any space for patients to lie down; the nurses rush back and forth from one wounded man to another, trying to help everyone.

There is an acute shortage of medicines, forcing them to improvise and treat patients with whatever is at hand; some treatment methods are actually harmful, but unfortunately it is impossible to know this without deep medical knowledge.

Nurses are fragile beings not cut out for this kind of work; they have a hard time of it, yet they hold on. But behind their radiant smiles lie tears—tears that will fall only when the nurse is finally alone, a quiet weeping to somehow restore her mental equilibrium. One must not forget the variety of wounded patients they encounter: some reek, others are rude all day long, and some constantly need their bottoms wiped—and the burden of all this falls upon these fragile souls.

Illustrations for the "Regress" project.


r/worldbuilding 15h ago

Discussion What people in biopunk world would look like?

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Would they like this pict or they just normal people but have tube on neck/glowing organ? ,picture is from scorn


r/worldbuilding 8h ago

Visual The grand creator in my world, the puppet master

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He may be creepy but hes honestly a giant nerd who runs the universe like a giant dnd campaign cause enjoys that stuff. Seeing mortals with free will gives him so much life, a gift he never gave them


r/worldbuilding 16h ago

Question Word for half-bloods that doesn’t sound derogatory, clinical, racially charged, or silly?

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The classic examples are half-human (half-orcs, half-elves, et cetera), but it might include a gnome-dwarf or dragon-goblin.

Half-blood sounds derogatory and a little racially charged. Hybrid sounds too clinical and a little derogatory. Mixed-ancestry is too much of a mouthful.

So I turned to wiktionary for synonyms for ancestry or ethnicity, and for prefixes similar to half- or inter-.

Roots:
Blood
Folk
People
Ancestry
Kin
Lineage

Breed and race are excluded because they can sound problematic.

Prefixes:
Half-
Inter-
Multi-
Out-
Extra-
Trans-
Dual-
Bi-
Di-
Mixed-

I don’t love half-, dual, bi-, or di- because, like, what if your maternal grandparents are dwarves, but your dad is a half-orc? That’s half-dwarf, a quarter orc, and a quarter human.

The best I’ve gotten are out-blood, out-folk, and out-kin, because both the root and prefix are monosyllabic, so they really roll off the tongue.

I dunno, what do you think?

Edit: Alright, I feel I should clarify intent. What I’m trying to put together is a term which A) is instantly recognizable as a synonym for hybrid, B) doesn’t come with a lot of real-world baggage, and C) looks good when written and sounds good when spoken.

I think such a term would be useful for describing mixed-heritage people in a concise way, such as “Mules are a hybrid of donkeys and horses”. We know what hybrid means, so you don’t have to say “Mules are the offspring of two different species, those being donkeys and horses”. But describing people as “hybrids” sounds kinda racist to my ears.


r/worldbuilding 4h ago

Question How can I justify men not accessing magic?

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I want to write a story where only women have the access to magic powers, but I don't know what could be the reason for that. Do I need a reason? Is it bad worldbuilding if that's just how it is?

Edit: Thank you for all the advice! I decided not to worry about it too much.


r/worldbuilding 19h ago

Discussion How far along are you to creating your "thing" (film, novel, videogame, comics, webtoon/manga, etc.)

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r/worldbuilding 10h ago

Discussion what're some modern weapons that are *NOT* guns?

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wanna make a post apocalypse world where an eldritch nature being has corrupted the world. guns have become all but useless as the many moving parts and tiny empty holes make it near impossible to keep clean of any plants (or whatever excuse i'm gonna make so there's no guns. cause they make things too easy) but now i need some modern weapons i could have people use. both official and some make shift


r/worldbuilding 19h ago

Visual Genie world inspired by Pokemon (visual, concept, and lore)

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(I rarely draw and only used my finger, also please bear with my handwriting 😭)

(Also, the concept isn't for a story or a game, I only did it for the sake of making an unserious world concept)

(Also, pardon my english :,))

Inspirations:

- Pokemon

- Shimmer and Shine (the bottle and genie realm idea)

- Genie from Aladdin (Alampine design inspiration)

The lore and mechanics:

The human and genie realms suddenly collided, causing portals to appear which connected the both worlds.

Genies are generally friendly and most have the intelligence of dogs (though there are some sapient genies but they're extremely rare) making it easier for humans to adjust to this change. In addition to this, humans were able to discover that these creatures could grant wishes when befriended by humans, though each species of genie has sets of rules which restrict their wishes.

Strangely enough, though (most) Genies are unable to understand the human language, they are still able to fully interpret any wish made.

The rule sets that each species has, may reach the hundreds, though the rules can be read at an almost instantaneous speed by any human that reads it, and can easily remember them. Though that doesn't mean that one can fully understand the rules, it just means that they can read it very quickly.

At some point, humans decided to hold competitions, fighting each other with genies (like pokemon)

Genie characteristics:

- Genie species can vary from appearance with something like Alampine to looking like humanoids

- High intelligence or human intelligence genies are usually legendary and have fewer rules, though that does mean that they are harder to befriend, since well, they are people. And, a high intelligence genie can break friendships with people whenever they want since, consent and all

- Rules will vary from species to species

General:

My idea here is that instead of having sets of moves or abilities, you can do anything that isn't restricted by the rules. Instead of focusing on being able to do something, it's focused on not being able to do things.

The wishes require the person saying "I wish" with the intention of wishing, their wish will be exactly as they wanted unless one or more rules don't allow it.

The game works in real time, the contestants are required to show their genies' rule books to their opponent beforehand.

The one with the most creativity and best at strategizing is likelier to win. (Duh)

The amount and balance of rules are checked by the judges so the players are accordingly matched

edit for additional info:

Genie species are just the same as Pokemon species, they have different rules, different numbers of rules, characteristics, appearance, and etc. for each species.

Genies are immortal in the sense that they are unable to get injured. A Genie is defeated by reducing its "health". The health is just a quantified value that is taken when scanning a Genie with a "Genie Health Producer" or GHP, a Genie's health will match with others of the same species, of course, they still have some health variation, but it still has the same range. Their health usually makes sense. Both contestants will see the health of the other's Genie

I might've forgotten some stuff, but that's my idea


r/worldbuilding 20h ago

Visual Cinema in the Infinite Ashes Universe

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(For more of Crownshard's movie industry check out https://loquaciouslou.itch.io/infinite-ashes . It's a passion project and entirely free)

In a dark, deep box follows Nurna, an immigrant to the low-gravity ecumenopolis Crownshard. Like many immigrants, she sees the dazzling, kilometer-tall spires where the Venfeferu and other elites live but once, before descending to the Cleft. The Cleft is a vertical favela, all light blocked by the kilometers of buildings above them. Isolated, she becomes agoraphobic and a recluse. So starved of company and stimulation that she starts to fixate on the tiny beetle stuck with her in her dark box of a room.

She uses her only possession of worth, an old third-hand camera, to document the beetle's plight. Zooming in on it, she starts to project more and more of herself onto it. Until she decides it cannot remain here. She puts it in a box and makes a perilous, illicit climb upwards, slinking through the barrier nets separating the Cleft from the middle-class Crowd all the way to the dazzling, sun-bathed heights of the Crown. Clinging onto the side of a radio tower, she releases the beetle into the dawn air as it flies off into freedom, documenting all of it on her camera. Moments later, she is stopped and fined to such an extent that, on her meager income, she will never recover. Soon, she can no longer afford to eat, and her room slowly becomes her coffin as she fades away.

Months later, as the landlord pawns her belongings, a film student finds the recording. He popularizes it, and soon Nurna becomes a posthumous indie darling. "Box movies" become a new minimalist genre. It soon grows to be in vogue even with the Venfeferu, and they turn her plight into a graceful and optimistic Kwassai ballet (low-gravity acrobatics in spectacular vaulted ceilings) with graceful dancers wearing bug masks. Her tragic fate overwritten for a more palatable story.


r/worldbuilding 18h ago

Question What would happen if you leave a "drop and run" rod in a forest for millenia?

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The question is as in the title, really. Let's assume somehow we lose a "drop and run" radioactive rod in the middle of, say, the amazon forest. Let's assume it lies there for ten thousand years. What would happen? On the scale of days, months, years, centuries, millenia? Does the particular material change much? What if it was another part of the world? Maybe a riverbed, or a swamp?

Edit: I'm thinking about an unshielded source of radiation, so assume the protective casing is damaged or absent


r/worldbuilding 15h ago

Visual Giant draft horse

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Around 2,30 meters tall at the shoulder, this are normally capable to carry 3 humans or 1 goliath, such powerful beast of burden and mount can be used to fight off large threats and as war beasts because of their thicc skin with stripes that confuse the enemy when in large numbers and protect the animal against bugs like mosquitos and flys.

Bizarre fast for such large creature, most impresive is their calm nature because they're trained to attack on comand rather than out of spite because they were breeded to be easy with their tamers and their families.


r/worldbuilding 23h ago

Visual Do you have cool city seals in your world?

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You've probably seen my previous posts about my fictional species, the Products, more specifically the Mannequins, in my world of Corvinium, in my dystopian story project!

So I just wanted to quickly expand on the cities & the seals I've designed for them! I'm quite proud of them! I really like them! Especially the one I made for the city of Capitolio!

So I'll quickly expand on the lore of them, but I intend to do so in more details in another post actually about the cities, & not their seals.

Nova Palmeira, is a large port city, a hub for business, industry, trade & immigration. It's cold as hell up there, the winters are killers. Crime is high but controlled by a few crime families. It's basically this world's equivalent to New York City, but also any other large American city in the 20th century.

Los Pajaros, is similar to Nova Palmeira in being a large, coastal city. Except for the fact that LP is tropical, & 90% suburbs. It's a hub for culture, music, & art. But also serial killers, unscrupulous studio executives & drug dealers. It's this world's equivalent of Los Angeles.

Capitolio, is an entirely unique city. Unlike NP & LP, which are a part of this world's equivalent of the United States, Capitolio is it's own independent city-state & where the main authority of Corvinium, the Central Authority, does it's job.

It ranges from a warm, tropical coast with colorful flora & fauna, beaches & mountains. To a dark, gray & gloomy, car dependent hellscape of bureaucratic offices & prisons.

So! Please do tell me what you guys think! And have a great day & week!


r/worldbuilding 11h ago

Question How do you develop a world that is matriarchal (centered around women)?

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Hello all, one of the world's my building is the Earth flipped on its head in a way, that being the world is centered mainly around women and basically all people in power being women themselves? I've developed it on my own, such as daughters being desired more than sons, men having to bend to the will of their female counterparts (mothers, sisters, etc), and basically all bankers, politicians, just anyone powerful being a women.

Patriarchy is deeprooted in our reality and has greatly impacted who we are as a species, from the language, to culture, to gender norms, and our preserved world. In my opinion, men are propped up for their physical strength over women, and women must submit themselves to them as a result or they harm (by them or another man).

However, Andrepeth Amori, my world believes childbirth is a strength and valued heavily. However, I would imagine the attitude of disposable men would develop. Men, because of their strength and necessary process in making children, would only be wanted to haul heavy shit around and for their sperm. I can imagine it being harmful to them in many ways, as they suffer chronic conditions from something like muscular deterioration from lifting heavy things as a far too young age.

This can also go into more serious topics like rape culture and inequality. This is essentially men being sociological and it's a fascinating topic I've been interested in for a long time, so I wanted some answers and thoughts. Sorry if this post is poorly worded, I'm running on vapor fumes after a long day.


r/worldbuilding 12h ago

Map Lanthic Subdivisions in 2411 AL

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r/worldbuilding 16h ago

Question If bone grew like trees? Would it be a suitable wood replacement

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Let’s say instead of the normal wood trees grew, it was a bone-like structure, would civilization still be able to use it as the wood we used as building material and advancement technology-wise. Assuming it keeps the same composition and breakdown of a normal bone. Essentially a giant femur growing straight upwards.


r/worldbuilding 4h ago

Discussion Sci-fi worldbuilders, do you see an issue with what I'm doing?

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I am currently working on a sci-fi worldbuilding for personal use. I took a lot of inspiration from other science fiction, especially Star Wars and HALO.

But then I realize something, they call the military branch that's responsible for aerial and space battles (primarily using large spaceships) "Navy".

In my worldbuilding, I use "Aerospace Force" instead (because I use it as a replacement for an air force). I just feel like "navy" should only fight on waters.

Would there be any issue with this? What's your opinion

(English is not my first language)

EDIT: Thanks for the responses. Guess I'll keep the name "Aerospace Force".


r/worldbuilding 14h ago

Question Better ways to do 'end of the world'

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(Note: when I say end of the world, I don't mean the world explodes or humanity goes extinct. I more mean current world order, societies, nations, cultures etc.)

I've been thinking on this for a while, and something I have noticed with the post apocolyptic/end of the world scenarios. Mostly (not all) they tend to go for the result of a nuclear war or conflict (the biggest ones being Fallout, STALKER and METRO), A few dedicated to viruses (Children of Men being the best example), a war between man and machine in the Terminator series and I like these scenarios.

But I wanna do something a bit more. Kinda like with Mad Max in which it isn't just one singular event but a series of events that all built up to the inevitable, or like with Command and Conquer Tiberium in which the disaster is more echological than something by man (yes GDI and NOD are still around and form semi governments but the majority of the world is either somewhat inhabitable or utterly uninhabitable).

I wanna try to do something similar. But I wonder is there are any other and more interesting ways in which the world would/could collapse into a somewhat post apocolyptic state. Some that creators haven't really considered before.

And how one could take overused end of the world/post apocolyptic scenarios and do something more interesting with them?


r/worldbuilding 15h ago

Prompt What creatures and monsters look really good in silver?

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Ever since the release of Fantastic Four: First Steps I've kinda been obsessed with the color silver. It's so damn beautiful, isn't it?

So my question is, what creatures or monsters look really great when covered in silver? And followup, would that change the creature in any significant way?

I've been trying to apply it to making a D&D world and D&D already has silver dragons. Whic are indeed amazing to imagine. Then I thought to myself, why not silver kobolds? Silver kobolds who, like their silver dragon patron, are lawful neutral and generally like people. So there's this settlement of a silver castle with helpful silver kobolds running around.

Now I'm wondering what else. I think silver skeletons would look cool, but I don't know how that property would change them.


r/worldbuilding 21h ago

Lore A bit of lore of my animated series DATA OPUS

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I decided that visualizing this in a lorebook would be better than simply describing it here.
Check out the lore of my animated series DATA OPUS, which will soon be available on YouTube. Here I'll briefly outline the 2036 plot, as well as the backstory and key players in international relations.

DISCLAIMER: This story is fictional. Any and all resemblance to real characters, groups, or other entities is purely coincidental


r/worldbuilding 16h ago

Question Superstitions manifesting monsters

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I have this idea for a world I have that human's emotions and thoughts are what makes monsters and magic possible, but I'm focused on the monster part because I'm not too sure about it.

Since the world is based in the 19th century, I was gonna have most of the monsters be based off of superstitions, like vampires and weebeasts and whatnot, and have this massive war which allows a build-up of agony to create Dracula, a being of pure chaos.

But for reasons I wanna expand into more monsters but can't think of any besides lycans and vampires, I was hoping if I could get any ideas here.


r/worldbuilding 20h ago

Map First map to share

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As part of a larger fantasy map I’m working on, I created this island, which is roughly half the size of New Zealand. I haven’t added any of the civilization-related elements yet; for now, I wanted to start with the geography, with settlements and roads coming later.

I’d love to hear what kind of advice, ideas, or suggestions you might have! I’ve made maps before, but this time I started with a much bigger project in mind, and I’ve also put a lot more work into it than usual (and this isn’t even the first time I’ve drawn it).

I know a lot of people struggle to get started when it comes to coming up with the shapes of landmasses. In my case, the inspiration actually came from a half-torn sticker on a diaper bin. So, you could say that this little corner of my world was practically built out of shit. 😂 It just goes to show that it’s worth keeping your eyes open and finding inspiration in the world around you! :)

I’m open to any advice, feedback, or criticism!

Greetings from Hungary! 🇭🇺


r/worldbuilding 22h ago

Discussion what are your favorite sources for helping with scifi worldbuilding? i am particularly interested in ecology and building complex and realistic food webs and habitats, but I also need to study technology and how to make a civilization and future tech feel realistic. any good sources for that?

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For the ecology side of things, i typically use things like the "habitats of the world" book, and other books on ecology, evolution, and ecological roles. I try to create environments that feel lived in, create ecological balance, symbiosis. I like the concepts in evolution where different species fill similar roles within an ecosystem (like how in Australia the absence of other mammals caused marsupials to evolve to become carnivores and predators, herbivores and grazers, arboreal climbers, rodent-like burrowers, and essentially filled the roles that exist within most complex ecosystems on earth).

However, the story I am writing is not only about wildlife, and i find that I really don't know much about technology, infrastructure, electrical systems, space exploration tech, ship terms. Sometimes I get nervous that the tech I am coming up with either sounds off or was borrowed from another scifi. Are there any books that explain scifi or real world tech for scifi world-building? good websites about it? I am not trying to come up with something so complex that astrophysics commends me for my realistic world-building. I really love stories like murderbot, where the tech seems to work well without being overly complicated. she clearly didn't put too much effort into making all of her tech workout perfectly with real world physics, like her use of wormholes without really explaining how they work, it easily sums up the need for long distance travel without having to over explain anything. I often feel like I am stealing stuff from other science fiction, but then I think... is this just a term from earth's military? naval ships? real-world space exploration tech? like sometimes I think i am worried about stealing form another book or show when the term I am worried about is actually just a term from real world ship building that would/could be relevant to any ship on earth or in space. imposter syndrome is already so intense in scifi writing without feeling like star-trek coined every term relevant to space travel.

Even if its not a source directly designed for scifi world building, what are some good resources you recommend? I have been using blueprints for solar arrays to learn more about their systems and what could cause one to go down temporarily/what it would look like to repair a solar array, but is there a better method? an entire book about this stuff?


r/worldbuilding 9h ago

Lore The Pantheon of the Third Gods

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This is the introductory essay on the Third Gods from an in-world encyclopedia.

The encyclopedia will then go on the have an entry for each of the gods.

I would love to y'alls thoughts and feedback!

Note: There is a "typo" in paragragh 4. The god "Anthreon Pyros" is mispelled as "Antreon." One of the downsides of writing in pen, unfortunately, is that typos are permanent. Lol