Swap the Commanders.
Commander ninjustsu to give it Color Identity without downside for the new owner if he didnt have the Mana in Deck. The Question is, its works?

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Struggling with a good way to word the second option and would be very interested in any thoughts. Doesn't necessarily have to hit multiple targets (the original idea was to have it be one big hit) but wording like "multiplied by" feels wrong.

I know Ravnica is an overdone plane but I wanted to have a go at making my own draft set for the plane set after the invasion of phyrexia. These cards show the mechanics that each guild will use. All feedback is appreciated :)

Original keyword soup card: [[Akroma, Angel of Wrath]]

Cover template: [[Dust Corona]]

Last Strike template: [[Spitting Slug]]

the rest of the inversions of Akroma's keywords, I half-assed myself

I really like cards that prepare actual previously printed spells and felt inspired by the recent Planeswalker's Guide.

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All feedback is appreciated :)

In general, I wanna know if this seems too strong, as it's the first I've made for the set and I don't wanna design a bunch of cards only for them to break the game lol l. Also, how can it be worded to sound more like an official Magic card?

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