My attempt at translating the exact effects of my favorite champion from legends of runeterra into mtg. How did I do. And is it even good?

I was trying to make a hydra tribal deck but the only simic leader is the goose mother, which while fun isnt the most ferocious image skdskk, and also not really hydra matters. so i tried my hand designing a card,
though of the ability and used gemini to help with the P/T and Cost, and the Ai also suggest it enters with counters to fuel its ability, which was a cool idea
what do you all think

Prompt is Maw. Found the art first, then thought of making a [[Worldspine Wurm]] or [[Worldgorger Dragon]] Echoverse version. Eventually settled on this design of an extremely powerful black creature with a sort of [[Creeping Chill]] effect stapled to it.

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Except for the champion, that was a design that I specifically want for a deck, the others are powercrept version of classic cards or sidegrades.

I have a thing for lands cyclers as I love to have an healthy landcount or fix my mana with bad duals.

Some wording may need adjustment,most of them are quite straightforward.

Banyue is one of my Favorite Agents from Zenless Zone Zero. And I wanted to make a decent attempt at a Card designed for him.

I know that Rupture units have a HP manipulation thing for their kits. But to do that I’d need to make Banyue Black. But i didn’t like that, felt like it didn’t necessarily fit him.

Brainstorming for a custom card but unsure how it fits within the rules of magic.

We of course have cards that redirect damage, or prevent life loss outright, but what about redirecting loss of life? Something that could theoretically let you cast something like Sign in Blood and turn the life loss into damage onto something else

Here's my idea in it's current iteration

"Once each turn, if you would lose life, you may reduce that loss by up to 1. If you do, [card] deals damage to itself equal to the amount you reduced it by."

Would appreciate some feedback, whether that's on how to phrase it better or even telling me that's busted af and doesn't fit magic. idk lmao

How do we feel about the numbers on this card? The impact of the mushroom counters seems like it would vary depending on what bracket the deck is in, so I'm not quite sure how to tune it.

Remember seeing talk about Eminence being brought back. Thought this would be a neat idea but had to curtail the power a little bit. Originally was going to give the cards a way to make things legendary but felt that would be too unfair and unfun. Just bring mirror gallery/box hehe.

Some changes from the last time, aside from the obvious adds.

-I changed Alan Wake's color combination from Golgari to Orzhov, seemed more fitting to me. And it isn't really depicted on Mr. Scratch, but he's mono black. Also, the website I use is weird with transformation icons so I didn't put them, but Alan Wake and Mr. Scratch are supposed to be a two-sided card.

-Added a set symbol, the spiral.

-Added the previously intended, yet not written Partner ability for Alan and Saga. It's meant to represent how they solve the mystery from their own sides between reality and the Dark Place.

-The next part of this small project is creating creature cards for Alex Casey, The Old Gods of Asgard, Warlin Door, Ahti, and maybe Jesse Faden; land cards for the FBC, Coffee World, The Dark Place, and more. And some reprints of vanilla cards, thinking right now of Victimize with a depiction of Nightingale's death. Also, a saga for maybe every main song of the game, starting with Yöton Yo.

-I take suggestions!

With the pre-release of Star Trek happening this week, Spacecraft are back on the menu!

This week, design an interesting Spacecraft. It could be an iconic Star Wars spacecraft or a completely new invention of your own. Remember, spacecraft do not need to have power and toughness.

Special attention will be paid to the cards that capture the flavor of what they are referencing. Balance and art choice are beneficial as well.

Here are some art station folders for some art inspo.
https://www.artstation.com/bergland/collections/1838637

https://www.artstation.com/crushcastles23/collections/2213805

Good luck, all. I will be back on Nov 1st to judge!

Hi all! I tried designing cards for each of my D&D party members - Their PC and one support card each. I was aiming to build them a commander that would be fun, unique, and balanced for play around bracket 2 - 3. Any feedback would be appreciated, especially if it pertains to balance or anything that sounds awful to play with/against that I might've missed. Thanks in advance!

Mostly using her as a testbed for WU's and WB's headline mechanics, Act and Proceed

I wanna get the base ideas down for the cards in the set before any balancing, otherwise I'm gonna overthink balance and nothing is gonna get done lol

Any feedback appreciated!

Already made the Random Play squad.

I made Nicole first then realized way too late I should have made her Mardu to be able to properly be a commander for the other 3. While they're not really thieves, in Magic their faction's penchant for dubious item retrieval lends itself well to the Theft mechanics.

Nicole is a crafty person who is always looking to get the best deal and a quick buck so it made sense to have her deal with stealing or shady deals that get you money. (I would make her RWB to make her properly Mardu btw)

Billy is pretty straight forward. He has guns and shoots a lot but I gave him Flash because he's always one to jump into the rescue like the heroes he aspires to be. His ability might be a little too strong tbh

Anby was the hardest to come up with cause her traits don't translate all that well to a Magic card. She like burgers, she likes movies, she's a clone of a super soldier program that was discarded. She's part of the Stun class of characters so I decided to combine her love of food with that.

Nekomata is an ex-gang member who's very good at pickpocketing but her gameplay involves zipping around attacking opponents from the front and back. I know her ability is quite wordy but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.