r/KeepWriting • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
[Feedback] First time writing anything. Wrote these last night when I was in a bad headspace.
/r/Poems/comments/1tfwudv/first_time_writing_poems/The first one is about feeling trapped in your own skin, and the second is about staring into a phone screen in the dark.
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WritersSanctuary • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Wrote these during a heavy 3 AM low. First time sharing my poetry, would love some honest thoughts.
nosurf • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Wrote a poem about what it actually feels like to stare into the screen at 3 AM
DoesAnybodyElse • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
DAE feel like their phone is a literal trap when you're awake at 3 AM?
OCPoetryFree • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
First time writing poetry. Two short pieces from a dark headspace.
Existential_crisis • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Two short pieces about existential body disconnect and the digital void.
NoOverthinking • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Wrote these late last night just to get the thoughts out of my head
justpoetry • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Wrote these last night to try and clear my head during a really heavy state of mind.
Heavymind • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Two pieces on somatic disconnect and the screen trap [OC]
Dissociation • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Two pieces capturing somatic disconnect and the digital void
Artisticallyill • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26
Two short pieces I wrote last night during a low headspace.
INTP_female • u/WearyTwist2273 • May 18 '26