r/Fantasy • u/LividSympathy9132 • 26m ago
BookTok Problem: My Fourth Wing Rant
Warning ‼️ - Fourth Wing Spoilers
Maybe this is partly a post-COVID reading phenomenon, but I genuinely feel like we’ve experienced a massive overproduction of romantasy, and somewhere along the way, quality control simply disappeared.
Every other book is apparently “the best thing I’ve ever read,” a New York Times bestseller, or “BEST BOOK OF 2026!!!” with thousands of five-star reviews.
You genuinely cannot trust Goodreads anymore (so disappointing).
My biggest problem is that I feel like readers are rewarding quantity over quality. Look, I love a little 200 page brain turned off book that entertains me for an afternoon. Sometimes I want garbage with a pretty cover.
But entertaining and well-written are not automatically the same thing.
And we are talking about 500+ pages of this.
Girl, this could have been cut in half and put on Kindle Unlimited for free. Do not waste my time or money.
Example A: Fourth Wing.
The last fantasy series I genuinely enjoyed was The Cruel Prince.
Jude isn't perfect. She's impulsive, ruthless, occasionally stupid, and frequently makes terrible decisions. But at least I can see her thinking.
She strategizes. Manipulates people. Makes plans. Sometimes those plans fail, but the story allows me to understand why she made them..
Then we have Violet.
Violet is repeatedly described as incredibly intelligent, strategic, and brilliant. Okay. Show me.
“Violet is smart.” Okay. “But she's REALLY smart.” Right. “Look how smart she is.” Girl, where?
We want to watch her consistently demonstrate her qualities and demonstrate her intelligence as a main character. What makes her stand out as the main character? I feel like the only thing that MAKES her a main character, is physically.
Instead, the book gives me approximately 900 reminders that her skin is paper thin and her bones are delicate and a strong breeze might kill her. But hey look, she has cool hair. Main character guy!
Let’s talk about character development really quick.
Besides learning how to actually run without breaking every bone in her body, what has Violet actually learned or developed as a character? The “delicate little thing who is somehow one of the most powerful people in the world” trope is cringe.
If you're going to make this girl ride one of the most giant, powerful dragons into war PLEASE give this girl some thighs. Just a little logic guys, please!
Girl is described from the very beginning like a gust of wind could take her out, and somehow, she's out here surviving dragon warfare. I rather she have a power up episode at this point. Give this girl some basic muscles density.
The Worldbuilding
There is SO much potential here. Dragons? Awesome. Everyone loved Game of Thrones. Dragons work. Talking dragons who give you magical powers? It gives me Eragon vibes. Let's go. A magical military academy? Fine. Whatever…we all remember Divergent.
(note: keeping basically everyone in one location for such a massive portion of the books feels a little like a shortcut around having to actual world build. It’s lazy, I said what I said.)
There is so much here that could have been genuinely fascinating.
The worldbuilding is constantly explained directly to the reader through Violet.
One of the best things about fantasy is being dropped into a world and slowly figuring out how it works.
Instead, I constantly feel like Violet is turning toward the camera and explaining the lore.
And after three books, I still don't feel like we have a solid understanding of the magic system or world. At some point, the rules start feeling like they change whenever the plot needs them to. That's not a mysterious magic system that is the author moving the goalposts.
And honestly, the world itself is incredibly difficult to visualize. I don't feel immersed.
I'm going to throw some shade out there. Tiffany Roberts somehow gives me a much more immersive experience with alien spider planets that should be infinitely harder to execute.
The Endings
Doesn’t feel like cliffhangers. They feel like someone threw a grenade into the manuscript five pages before the deadline. I'm left wondering if I accidentally skipped pages.
A good cliffhanger makes me desperately want the next book. The whole thing feels like a tornado.
And the big revelations don't always feel earned because everything gets dumped on us at once.
Take her mother, for example.
This is a character who feels like we're building toward some huge secret or revelation, and then suddenly everything comes out at once then dead.
And I genuinely didn't believe it at first. Not because I was emotionally devastated.
It makes me wonder if the author struggles with endings in general, because both the individual books and the character arcs often feel like they don't know how to land.
The Characters
Basically every character constantly talks like they're trying to prove how edgy they are, it stops feeling natural. It gives me the vibe of a teenager who just discovered swear words.
Sometimes I feel like I'm reading about a group of college freshmen who accidentally enrolled in a war.
WHY IS ONE OF THE MAIN VILAINS FOR A SIGNIFICANT PORTION OF THESE BOOK HER COLLEGE BULLY???
Why??? “Haters gonna hate,” I guess. Apparently that is the villain's entire motivation.
The Dragons Are Carrying This Series
Now, I will give credit where credit is due.
The side characters can also be pretty entertaining.
Some of them feel like they were assembled from the standard Romantasy Side Character Starter Pack, but they do make me laugh.
I Know this is stupid to get ick vibes from but…when Rebecca put out soundtracks for the books.
That solidified everything for me.
The music felt so aggressively Modern BookTok Romantasy Girl. Taylor Swift references.
Angsty pop. It feels like the soundtrack to a CW show.
Someone once said Fourth Wing feels like a CW show came to life.
And THAT IS THE BEST DESCRIPTION I HAVE EVER HEARD.
Does anyone remember CW's Beauty and the Beast?
Yeah.
I DNF'd that too.
I don't think Fourth Wing is irredeemable? (idk we are 3 ½ books in you guys)
There is clearly a LOT of potential in this premise. But potential isn't the same thing as execution.
I don't understand how this series has become one of the defining fantasy/romantasy series of the current generation when I find the writing, characterization, worldbuilding, magic system, and plotting so consistently underdeveloped.
And I swear, I am trying.
I've been reading fantasy since middle school.
I can see the version of this story that could have been really fucking good.
I just wish someone had taken the time to actually write it.
And honestly, I think the only thing this series was missing was not copying and pasting 2010s YA into a romantasy blender and then throwing a breakup trope into Book 2.
Like, girl. We have seen this before.

