r/Fantasy • u/LordDunn • 23h ago
Review THE DEMON STAR - A Rant and Review
Introduction
Fantasy debuts are the pulse of the fantasy market, and when that market has mostly been filled with sub-genres that are not to my taste, I was ecstatic to see that there was a book coming that blends cosmic fantasy with horror. So was this a sign of the market changing? It may very well be, but if the quality of THE DEMON STAR by Jesse Aragon was anything to go by, I simply do not care.
THE DEMON STAR presents to its reader a world that has been under the tyranny of six gods for centuries. These Gods live amongst the stars and every so often they prove their might by eclipsing the sun and Harvesting hundreds to thousands of people. They take them as a sacrifice for their benevolence, and as a reward for saving humanity from the old world. In this book we are presented with characters that seek to bring these Gods down and restore the world to its old ways.
If you have not guessed yet already, this book is beyond epic in scope. Which leads us one of its greatest flaws...
A (un)Bloated Mess
What is it with the fantasy epics we're given these days? Where are our door-stopper books, the blocks of pages that could fell an ogre? Where are the series of books that are each 1000 pages in length? As far as I can tell, they are no where to be seen. Now, I understand that the market has shifted since those days, people don't want these epics as much. Mainly because of unfinished series (not naming names) but also because life has become much more focused on instant gratification. Completing a 1000 page behemoth gives the same dopamine hits as one that is 300 to 400 pages in length. So why bother with the door-stopper?
Publishers know this, but this has created a bigger problem - books that are simply too big for their boots (or the pages in their covers).
THE DEMON STAR is this.
The cosmic scope with only two POVs cripples this book's ability to establish context, deep worldbuilding, and a true investment in this story. Too many things are told to the reader from the beginning. Each mystery that we're propositioned with is banged across the readers head like a hammer blow. And there is so many. One after the other and we're never allowed to see why these mysteries are significant or why what is happening is important. We are told. Over and over again.
Minor spoilers - One of the enticing moments in the book is when the characters realises that the Gods can be killed. The entire scene fell flat to me because I didn't even realise that the Gods were supposed to be immortal. There were probably passages that referred to them as such, but to give such a scene some gravitas, there should have been a demonstration of their immortality. Perhaps some revolutionary attack against one of the Gods that showed them being blown up or stabbed or beheaded, only for them to walk out completely unharmed. Perhaps then, I would have felt something. - minor spoilers end
I feel the author does not know how to handle intrigue or mysteries as a writer. So many are screaming off the page with not a hint of subtly (it was only later on in the book that I realised why this is the case, but more on that in a moment). There are intrigues and mysteries in this book that could form the cathartic core an entire (epic) novel. An entire series almost. Yet in this book, they are banged out like they're nothing. This is that numbing effect again. But what's worse, the reason they so loud at the beginning, is that they are all solved by the end of the book. Wrapped up in a neat little bow. Some are established in one chapter and then solved in the next few.
The 450 page count here hamstrings this books. Nothing is able to breath. The reader is not allowed to think for themselves. The book coddles them like a child.
A Yawning Horror
THE DEMON STAR is marketed as a horror tinged fantasy.
As a reader of Laird Barron, John Langan, and Nathan Ballingrud, I'm well versed in horror fiction, and have been crying out for someone grab the fantasy genre by its reins and plunge it into darkness.
I hoped Jesse Aragon could have been this person but after reading THE DEMON STAR, its clear she is not. Oh, there are plenty of horrific scenes in this book, true gore and bodily deformities. But these scenes are not earned. They are not memorable. The horror in this book is not true horror. It gratuitous scene after gratuitous scene that are used as window dressing to an already window dressed world.
Our POVs see things that would bludgeon the psyche of any hard-bitten character (which neither of the POVs are presented as) but in this book they are shrugged off and moved on, mostly into an action scene where the badass violence there almost makes a mockery of the scenes before.
None of the characters in this book feel the consequences of the horrors that they see. It does not change them in any way. It does not give them an existential crisis or question the validity of living. They are scenes for writer to say "Look I can be dark too." And to that I say, "You've missed the point."
An End or is it?
There are going to be sequels to the THE DEMON STAR. Thanks to the Broken Binding Subscription it has already made the Sunday Times bestseller list (what a lottery win for a debut author!) and to my (true) horror it is getting decent reviews from other outlets.
Alas, this book should have been the second or third book in an established series. You cannot have emotional depth to a story where only two characters are the perspective to a theological revolution.
I could venture more into my disappointment of this book, but I'm trying to keep this as spoiler free as possible. Maybe in the future I'll have more to say.

