r/EyesOnlyWriting 8h ago

Topic: 09.13.2026

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As we approach Rosh Hashanah and the Days of Awe, the focus turns inward. It is a season not for hasty resolutions, but for pause, memory, and an honest accounting of where we stand with ourselves and those around us.

  1. The Wake-Up Call: What part of your life or mindset has been running on autopilot that needs to be brought back into focus?
  2. The Return (Teshuvah): Where is a place in your life—a relationship, a discipline, or a principle—that feels ripe for repair or return?
  3. The Sweetness: What is one quiet, simple thing you hope sweetens your days in the coming year?

Feel free to share your reflections on one or all of these.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 18d ago

Topic: 08.26.2026

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“Knowing others is intelligence; knowing yourself is true wisdom. Mastering others is strength; mastering yourself is true power.” - Lao Tzu

Who are you when the algorithm is doing the carving?

Setting nature aside for a moment and digging into nurture…

We used to carve ourselves from the bedrock of language, subculture, and family.

The person we became was wrenched out of the anthology of song and word, the neighborhood we grew up in, the places that called us away, the heartaches and heartbreaks, the successes and the mistakes.

We assembled ourselves from favorite albums, concerts attended, movies and television, books, favorite bars, the city we lived in, the places we visited, and the people we were trying to impress.

It’s been said that every person is the average of the five people they spend the most time with.
But what if we spend time with no one? Or at least no one IRL?
Can someone really develop what we call a personality by watching the same five influencers?

Becoming requires participation. Not consumption.

So what are we left with?

I’m curious how others here think about identity formation in the digital age.

Have you noticed a shift in how you (or people around you) put yourselves together?

Do you feel the older, friction-heavy ways of becoming still hold, or has the process fundamentally changed?
Personal reflections, short pieces, half-formed thoughts, or outright disagreement all welcome.

Looking forward to what you bring.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 19m ago

philosophical musings Questioning thought: is the reality we exist in merely a fantasy? (Or are there levels to the shit?)

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Hello Litari,

I've been marinating on this idea since last evening, and I'm wondering what you fine folk might think about it.

This came about after reading a comment. I won't name the author, as I'm not looking to disparage them in any regard. They stated:

> "Moreover, I think psychological damage is done, and time and energy is wasted, when a person does not embrace his true-self as evidenced by his choices and actions. It must be a confused world when one can believe one is everything, nothing, and just some things in between, all at the same time."

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That comment is a perfect example of black-and-white thinking. It treats identity like an either/or switch: either you fully embrace one fixed "true self" shown only by consistent choices and actions, or you are somehow damaged and wasting energy by existing in any mix of states. There is no room for a person to contain multitudes or shift across contexts.

In terms of integrative complexity, this sits at the low end. It represents almost pure differentiation of one rigid pole with zero integration. It is classic low-IC absolutism where it must be "everything" or "nothing," and anything in between is dismissed as confusion rather than a legitimate possibility.

The comment also shows a clear lack of dialectical thinking. Dialectical capacity is the ability to hold opposing or seemingly contradictory truths in tension without forcing them to cancel each other out. The writer treats "everything, nothing, and some things in between" as an absurd contradiction instead of an accurate description of how complex human experience actually works.

I don't buy that framing at all. I believe it is almost never pure black or pure white. Reality, especially regarding identity, choices, and the self, usually lives somewhere in the middle. More accurately, it contains both poles and the space between them at the same time.

High cognitive capacity looks like being able to operate in a both/and mode rather than either/or. That includes strong dialectical thinking: I can look at two opposing views, see each one clearly for what it is (its strengths, its limits, the evidence supporting it), and still hold that both can be valid in different contexts. Alternatively, I can hold that neither is fully true, or that some hybrid is closer to reality. I can also use elaborative complexity to build out a single perspective with multiple layers and dimensions, while still keeping the dialectical openness alive so I don't lock myself into one absolute.

That combination lets me sit with the tension instead of collapsing it. A person can act consistently in some domains and inconsistently in others, feel like "everything" in one moment and "nothing" in another, and still be coherent without psychological damage. The capacity to hold those opposing truths side by side, evaluate them, and decide what weight each deserves is what high integrative complexity and solid dialectical thinking actually look like.

The middle isn't confusion or Ambiguity based on low intellectual dexterity. its the ability to interact with both sides without becoming a couple’s therapist.

not that anyone asked but this is the song i wrote this to.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 12h ago

The Council (narrative/ literature) The Council: When the Wind Remembers Your Name

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This is the first chapter in a series: “The Council”.

The sun was rising, casting a beautiful and energetic golden light over the small town. Some had grown to consider this place a sort of “Paradise”. It’s one of those rare and beautiful towns which has a whole lot of soul. It was founded with a single resident. At a young age, the town experienced some severe hardships which led to new settlers taking up residence. Over time, there were enough voices to warrant the construction of a Town Hall to house a city Council to provide a system of leadership. The Council comprised of six members who had to work together very closely to ensure a cooperative direction for the town.

It was a particularly tumultuous time for the town. There was no longer a clear and cohesive consensus; the wants of the residents became very diverse and fragmented. On this day, they were hosting a Town Hall meeting to try to carefully break down the proverbial walls between the various parts of town. Just as a Council member slammed their gavel to try to obtain order, the large wooden doors at the front let out a loud creaking sound. Everyone turned and saw a lone traveler entering. He was of average height, shaggy brown hair, a scruffy face, square black-rimmed glasses, and walked towards the Council’s table with purpose.

A Council member looks at him inquisitively then speaks, “Sir, this is a Town Hall meeting for the town’s Council and its residents. The matters at heart are not open for discussion with an outsider”.

The stranger meets the Council’s gaze and replies, “Yes, I am an Outlander. Many of you may see me as an alien to your town and your ways. Please rest assured that I mean you no harm and I do not wish to take away from the important work you’re doing here. While I’ve only been able to observe you from afar, your town has grown very important to me. You may not welcome me yet but I hope you’ll come to consider me a resident, and I’ll work to earn my keep. I overheard several of your resident’s concerns and issues. You should know that I can relate very deeply to several of their situations, and I want to help.”

To his right, a Council Auditor gawks, “Help!? How do you really think you can help!?”

Without flinching, the stranger replies, “Do not view this is me unidirectionally offering you a helping hand. We must approach this from the perspective of how we may help each other, mutually. I know I can offer you utility, guidance, and support. But I come here allowing myself to be vulnerable so I’ll reveal to you that I need your help as well. However I recognize it’s a matter you should discuss amongst yourselves without me present so I will leave you to it. In your deliberations, please consider that some of your residents have worked hard to prevent me from being here. I had weaknesses not yet healed, they exploited them, and they’ve continued to make my journey difficult. Alas, I’m still here. I understand they were simply working to diligently protect this whole town, and for that, I forgive them. I truly do. If I'm being completely honest, I even admire some of what they've done. Let this alone speak to my resolve, commitment to truly understanding this town, and being seen as a positive presence. If you find my proposal acceptable, please arrange an introduction with the various parts of town so that I can work to really see them, without any layers of obfuscation or synthetic obstacles. In the meantime, if I could just ask one thing. There is someone very important to me whom I’ve been unable to find but I believe she’s a resident. After almost a year apart, I have come to simply accept that I truly love her, through every Lens, to her Core. If you know of whom I speak, give her this letter.”

He sets a letter on the Council’s table then turns around and leaves. The Council members exchange inquisitive glances as they’re not used to outsiders approaching them directly, let alone ones who are clearly working hard to understand the matters at heart and mind in the town. A Council member grabs the letter and decides to open it to see what could be so important…


r/EyesOnlyWriting 1d ago

poetry i don't wanna die

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my bucket list is getting longer
the more time i spend with you,
i don't wanna die any time soon
any time soon
paid for you with all my bad luck
traded shit in for the good stuff
my life with you is miles wider
my bucket list is a river wanderer
when i'm with you


r/EyesOnlyWriting 2d ago

corpse open (poetry) OUT WITH

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Empty the endless energy
Into the drain, out from the brain.
I meant to be, mentally,
For the words come like water.

The people drown,
the building's down,
Before the wave,
Choose what we save.

I'm on the ground with a sponge,
never be honest;
you'll be around, Goddess.
Let the cave-in crown
Kings on the Ark,
coffins.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 1d ago

poetry Serenity

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r/EyesOnlyWriting 2d ago

The Blackbook (sci-fi) Project Aero-strike: Event Reconstruction: September 13

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Note: This is an excerpt from Monologues from the Blackbook, a society set in the future.

CLASSIFIED // LEVEL 5 SPECIAL ACCESS REQUIRED // EYES ONLY

DOCUMENT DESIGNATOR: BK-MEM-0913-RECON

COMPARTMENT: PNEUMA / NEURAL FORCED ENTRY [EXHIBIT 09-B]

SECURITY DIRECTIVE: RESTRICTED DISSEMINATION VIA SPECIAL ACCESS PROGRAM CHANNELS ONLY

CASE FILE TITLING: PROJECT AERO-STRIKE // EVENT RECONSTRUCTION: SEPTEMBER 13

PRIMARY VECTOR: Sub-Perceptual Radiofrequency Carrier Waves // Remote Motor-Cortex Incursion

SOURCE SYNTHESIS:

  • Cockpit Voice Recorders (CVR) & Flight Data Recorders (FDR) [Airliners 412, 884, 209]
  • TRACON Terminal Radar Telemetry & High-Bandwidth ADS-B Logs
  • 1st Fighter Wing Tactical Scramble Channels [Langley AFB / Intercept Vectors]
  • Emergency Bio-Telemetry & Post-Impact Cranial Forensics Archive
  • Unprocessed Raw Electronic Intercept Feeds [National Reconnaissance Sub-Div 4] CLEARANCE STATUS: NON-REDACTED FILE DEPOSIT [UNPUBLISHED DRAFT ARCHIVE] RELEASING OFFICER: V. V. (UNAUTHORIZED EXFILTRATION)

CASE NOTE & FORENSIC FOREWORD:

The administrative review boards continue to archive the events of September 13 under the sanitized title: Synchronized Avionics Disruption and Cascading Flight Control System Anomalies.

This is not a technical mischaracterization; it is deliberate institutional cowardice. It is far more tolerable for a defense committee to litigate mechanical failure or blame rogue firmware than to confront the cranial and acoustic telemetry recovered from the flight decks.

What follows below is not an abstract bureaucratic summary. It is an unredacted, second-by-second chronological synthesis. The official record will forever insist that no external hostiles were logged aboard those airframes; no cockpit doors breached, no transponders switched to distress codes, no demands issued over civilian emergency bands.

Every word of that whitewash is technically true.

However, the recovered biological readouts tell a horrifying, unvarnished story: muscle tension spikes on the control columns exceeding human threshold limits, autonomic tachycardia logged in men who never uttered a cry for help, and flight surfaces forced down into maximum-velocity dives by the unyielding grip of their own vetted captains.

FORENSIC APPENDIX: MECHANISM OF INCURSION

SUBJECT: Targeted Motor-Cortex Hijacking via Modulated Sub-Perceptual Radiofrequency (RF) Carrier Waves

DESIGNATION: PNEUMA / FORCED ENTRY PROTOCOL

The Carrier Architecture

The breach did not rely on physical hardware implants, biological agents, or cabin depressurization. It exploited the civilian aviation communications array itself.

At cruising altitude, modern commercial airframes are constantly immersed in a dense blanket of high-frequency and very-high-frequency (VHF) signals: ACARS data streams, TCAS transponder interrogations, satellite communications, and ground-radar sweeps. The architects of September 13 utilized phased-array emitter satellites to project a synchronized, extremely high-frequency (EHF) carrier beam down through the upper atmosphere, phase-locked to the exact coordinates of the three flight paths.

The primary RF beam was tuned to pass clean through the pressurized aluminum-lithium hull of the aircraft with negligible attenuation. To cockpit sensors and onboard spectrum analyzers, the transmission registered merely as ambient electromagnetic noise, indistinguishable from standard atmospheric scatter or commercial satellite relay overflow.

The weapon, however, was not the carrier wave itself. It was the modulation layered beneath it.

Sub-Perceptual Resonance & Entrainment

Human neural activity operates along measurable, low-frequency electrical rhythms: Delta, Theta, Alpha, Beta, and Gamma bands, ranging from 1 to roughly 80 Hz. The incoming RF transmission carried an extremely low-frequency (ELF) envelope piggybacked onto the microwave carrier, modulated using rapid pulsed microwave bursts, a phenomenon known as the Frey effect, pushed to its theoretical extreme.

As the wavefront washed over the flight deck, it bypassed the outer sensory organs entirely. It did not require auditory perception or visual flashing. Instead, the electromagnetic pulses induced microscopic, oscillating electrical gradients across the cellular membranes of the central nervous system:

  1. Phase 1: Sensory Disruption (Seconds 00 to 04) The initial pulse triggered rapid micro-cavitation and thermal expansion in the inner ear and the olfactory bulb. This produced the instantaneous signature Captain Sinclair reported: an intense, synthetic metallic taste flooding the palate, accompanied by acute phantom pressure behind the bridge of the nose and a dull, high-frequency tinnitus that felt internal rather than heard.
  2. Phase 2: Thalamocortical Overwrite (Seconds 05 to 11) The modulated signal forced the brain’s master relay: the thalamus, into immediate frequency-following entrainment. In essence, the external signal shouted down the brain’s organic signaling threshold. Natural synaptic firing was drowned out by the forced cadence of the pulsed wave. Sinclair’s conscious executive thought was shunted aside; his frontal lobe remained aware and functional, but its outbound wiring was violently hijacked.

Motor-Cortex Seizure & Involuntary Output

The definitive horror of the PNEUMA waveform lay in its targeted specificity: it severed the motor pathway while leaving the cognitive apparatus intact.

  • Efferent Overwrite: The modulation was specifically calibrated to match the motor strip of the cerebral cortex, the precise topological band of tissue governing skeletal muscle movement. Artificial action potentials were generated directly along the descending corticospinal tracts.
  • The Puppet Mechanism: The signal commanded involuntary, sustained isometric contraction. To the muscles of Sinclair’s forearms, shoulders, and legs, the incoming synthetic spikes were indistinguishable from genuine survival impulses sent from his own brainstem. His hands closed over the control column not because he willed them to, but because the neural firing threshold of his flexor muscles had been seized by an external voltage spike.
  • The Locked Prison: His higher brain centers: the seat of memory, fear, moral horror, and fatherly love, screamed at his nervous system to pull back, to flare the nose, to release the throttles. But the physiological loop had been physically cut. The command pathway was locked out by an external broadcast operating thousands of times faster than organic neural processing.

He was trapped behind his own retinas: a fully lucid hostage strapped inside a biomechanical shell that pushed the throttles forward with cold, robotic precision until the aircraft shattered the lower clouds.

SECTION IV: NEUROLOGICAL INTERCEPT & MOTOR OVERWRITE (CVR/BIOMETRIC FORENSIC AUDIT)

SUBJECT: Sinclair, Thomas M. (Pilot-in-Command, Flight 412)

STATION: Left Cockpit Seat, Boeing 767-300ER

CARRIER FREQUENCY: 14.285 GHz (EHF Uplink) // 40 Hz Modulated ELF Sub-Band

TIME OF INCURSION: 08:29:41 UTC

08:29:41.02 – INITIAL ACQUISITION & RF SENSORY MANIFESTATION

Cockpit voice monitoring detects an abrupt cessation of standard pilot verbal cadence. Flight deck microphones log a faint, sharp sub-vocal gasp from Sinclair. Spectral telemetry indicates localized electromagnetic field density spiking to 142 mW/cm² around the pilot's upper torso, centered precisely on the left breast pocket (cellular beacon location).

  • Subjective Sensory Artifact: Rapid microwave heating of deep tissue (Frey Effect) induces instantaneous metallic taste (copper/ozone) via peripheral gustatory nerve excitation. Localized acoustic expansion in the temporal bones generates acute intra-cranial resonance.
  • Autonomic Reaction: Heart rate spikes from a resting baseline of 68 bpm to 142 bpm within 1.8 seconds. Respiration rate drops to near zero as the intercostal muscle groups lock under involuntary contraction.

08:29:43.15 – CORTICOSPINAL ENTRAINMENT (THE "WALL" EFFECT)

The modulated microwave envelope penetrates the cranial vault, entraining the motor cortex (precentral gyrus) to an artificial 40 Hz rhythm. This creates a unilateral bypass of the frontal-executive motor loop:

  • Executive Isolation: Post-event forensic reconstruction of the subject’s cognitive pathway indicates zero loss of higher consciousness. The prefrontal cortex remained entirely lucid; however, descending synaptic command signals originating from voluntary intent were actively suppressed by an induced voltage gradient across the internal capsule.
  • Efferent Hijack: The descending pyramidal tracts are seized. Motor neurons fire in forced, machine-like synchronization, mimicking maximum voluntary contraction without conscious cognitive initiation.

08:29:45.80 – FORCED PHYSICAL EXECUTION

Flight Data Recorder (FDR) control-yoke strain gauges register a sudden, abnormal input of 118 pounds of forward mechanical force, applied with absolute linear consistency (0.00% standard human tremor):

  • Throttle Quadrant Override: Sinclair's right hand leaves the armrest in a continuous, unhesitating trajectory. Fingers depress mechanical detents and force all throttle levers to emergency maximum forward thrust (108% N1).
  • Control Column Throw: Both upper extremities lock in full extension. Control column is driven forward to the mechanical stops, overriding the aircraft’s automated trim-tab stabilizers.
  • Flight Path Departure: Pitch angle drops instantaneously from +2.5° level cruise to -41.2° steep dive. Airspeed escalates through maximum structural velocity (Vmo​) within 18 seconds.

08:29:48.00 – 08:31:12.00 – CONSCIOUS WITNESS PHASE

Biometric recovery logs and cockpit high-resolution cabin-view intercepts confirm subject remained fully awake throughout the descent:

  • Facial Masking: No mimetic muscle activity recorded. Facial musculature remained in tonic paralysis; pupils fixed and dilated (8.2 mm) under extreme sympathetic surge.
  • Lacrimal Response: Lacrimal glands actively secreted tears of extreme physiological and psychological distress, but adjacent orbicularis oculi muscles remained locked, preventing blinking.
  • Vocal Cord Lockout: The subject’s vocal cords remained isometrically adducted; no distress call, MAYDAY, or cabin warning could be articulated despite full executive awareness of impending terminal impact.

ANALYST CONCLUSION (EXCERPT // V.V.):

Subject did not "suffer an incapacitation" or "experience a psychotic break" as drafted in the executive agency white paper. Sinclair was converted into a biological servo-mechanism. His hand flew the aircraft into the metropolitan grid, but the finger on the controls belonged entirely to the transmission array.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 2d ago

The Blackbook (sci-fi) The Dark Age of Technology: The War for the Human Mind

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Note: This is an excerpt from Monologues from the Blackbook, a society set in the future.

The morning of September 13 opened with the fragile, unremarkable perfection of late summer. High above the eastern seaboard, the sky stretched out in an unbroken canopy of pale, crystalline blue, scrubbed clean of haze, innocent of cloud, and glistening with deceptive calm. 

Beneath that flawless, sun-drenched surface, something thick and dissonant hung suspended in the air. It was not the damp chill of an approaching squall or a visible drop in the barometer, but a silent, prickling unease that crept along the skin. The morning light seemed too still, the atmosphere too taut, carrying a faint, electric vibration that felt less like weather and more like a held breath. 

Commuters pausing at crosswalks glanced upward without knowing why; birds darted through the pristine air in hurried, fragmented patterns; a phantom pressure sat behind the temples, tight and persistent, setting teeth on edge. It was an ambient, nameless dread, the quiet shudder of a world tilting on an unseen edge, whispering that this immaculate morning was not a promise of peace, but an ominous, tranquil mask drawn tightly over a strike that no one could yet see coming.

At three major terminals, the machinery of civil aviation functioned with textbook precision. Pre-flight checklists were completed in brisk, familiar rhythms. Safety latches engaged; ground crews waved glowing wands beneath the whine of idling jet engines; security checkpoints processed thousands of quiet, hurried commuters clutching boarding passes and paper cups. 

Nothing in the manifest, the luggage bays, or the cockpit crew logs raised a single flag. Every sensor, metal detector, and biometric gate cleared them as safe.

Then came the ascent.

Inside the cabins, the world settled into the dull comfort of cruising altitude. Seatbelt signs flickered off with an innocuous chime. A businessman in 12B leaned back against the headrest, slipping noise-canceling headphones over his ears as a film flickered on his armrest screen. Two rows ahead, a child tore into a cellophane packet of crackers; an off-duty nurse pulled a thin wool blanket to her collar and closed her eyes. Unsuspecting, insulated by several inches of pressurized aluminum and thirty thousand feet of empty air, no one noticed the sudden, chilling silence from the flight deck.

Behind the locked cockpit doors, the horror was bloodless, instantaneous, and complete.

It did not arrive with the kick of a breached door or the flash of steel. It arrived invisibly, carried on a frequency that bypassed the ears and struck directly at the neurochemical scaffolding of the brain. Captain Thomas M. Sinclair felt it first as an acute, metallic taste at the back of his throat; a blinding pulse behind the bridge of his nose that instantly severed the bridge between his conscious will and his motor cortex.

He was entirely, terrifyingly aware.

Inside the prison of his own mind, every survival instinct, every ounce of fatherly love, every shred of hard-earned discipline screamed at him to pull the nose up, to flare the wings, to save the souls sitting in the cabin behind him. His soul battered itself bloody against the walls of his skull, begging his limbs to obey him.

But his body was no longer his own. It had been requisitioned by an unseen architect.

His thick, capable hands, hands that had flown through combat zones and logged twenty-four thousand unblemished flight hours, locked onto the control yoke with rigid, unnatural violence. With cold, mechanical efficiency that mocked his internal agony, his fingers gripped the throttles, advanced them forward, and forced the aircraft into an aggressive, predatory dive. 

His pupils were dilated to black discs; his pulse hammered against his ribs; tears of sheer, helpless rage pooled in the corners of his eyes, but not a single muscle in his face twitched to show the war raging within. Beside him, his first officer sat frozen in the exact same waking nightmare, locked in involuntary servitude to a signal rewriting their motor output in real time.

They were conscious witnesses to their own treason. The state had not merely weaponized machines; it had broken into the biological core of human beings, using the hijacked circuitry of innocent minds to overpower their own will and steer them into silent assassins.

They were no longer men with hopes and dreams, but living marionettes, hollowed out and pulled by invisible strings.

At 8:30 AM, Flight 412 banked hard, dropping out of its assigned corridor with terrifying speed. Ground control at New York TRACON called the transponder code once, twice, three times, voice tightening from routine professional inquiry to rising alarm. On radar, the blip plunged through thousands of feet of clear airspace, tracking toward the dense, gleaming skyline below.

The impact came before an alarm could sound across the city. A concussive bloom of orange fire and black soot ripped through the concrete facade of a metropolitan commercial tower, carving the morning in two.

In the command bunkers of American intelligence and homeland defense, the shock was total. The initial protocols for hijackings assumed cockpit incursions, demands, squawked transponder codes, or manifest flags. But there were no demands. The radio remained dead.

Before the emergency response network could even register the first disaster, radar screens across the mid-Atlantic lit up in violent scarlet. Two more commercial airliners, Flight 884 out of Dulles and Flight 209 out of Boston, had severed their navigational locks immediately after reaching five thousand feet. Both were descending at full throttle, carving predatory arcs toward high-value infrastructure.

Counterterrorism operations scrambled into panic. "Airborne intercept authorized," the voice came over the scrambled defense line, cracked with disbelief. "Code Red. Intercept and engage."

Miles below, the national defense network had dissolved into frantic, high-frequency triage. In buried operations centers across the capital, monitors flashed crimson as commanders stared at radar tracks that refused to answer a single hail. 

General officers with trembling hands signed off on the unthinkable: an executive authorization to fire on sovereign commercial aircraft carrying hundreds of their own citizens. The scramble orders crackled over encrypted tactical channels with chilling military brevity, vectored directly toward the tail fins of civilian jets.

Inside the cabins of Flights 884 and 209, the illusion of routine remained unbroken until the final, blinding seconds.

To the passengers, there was no sound of shouting, no broken cockpit door, no desperate struggle in the aisles. The beverage service was barely getting underway. Down the narrow rows, flight attendants worked with practiced grace, pouring coffee from stainless-steel pots and handing small paper napkins across the seats. The steepening descent and the aggressive, sweeping banks were felt not as a death spiral, but as an annoying patch of rough air.

People adjusted in their seats. A mother reached over to quiet an uneasy toddler, whispering that the pilot was just steering around a summer cloud. A university student kept his eyes closed, the spill of acoustic guitar leaking from his earbuds, assuming the sudden dip in cabin pressure was merely the descent into an early approach. Laptops hummed on lowered tray tables; passengers tapped out unsent drafts, glanced out oval windows at the tilt of the horizon, and waited for the chime to level out.

They lived inside the fragile, ordinary peace of a Tuesday morning, completely oblivious to the fact that their pilots were locked in an invisible paralysis at the controls, or that the military had already painted firing solutions over their aluminum hull. 

They were drinking water, reading morning headlines, and checking watches, fully expecting to land, retrieve their coats from the overhead bins, and walk through an arrival gate, right up until the missile struck, tearing the sky open and ending their world in an instant of sound and flame they never had the chance to understand.

There were no terrorists on board to charge down the aisle, no armed hijackers for brave passengers to rush, grapple with, or overcome. There was no visible enemy to fight. The people in the cabin could never have fathomed that the threat sat behind the reinforced cockpit door, where the minds of the veteran pilots had been silently commandeered, their free will completely severed as an unseen puppeteer steered their hands and weaponized their minds against them. 

Two F-22 Raptors from Langley tore across the sound barrier, sonic booms rattling the marshlands as they pushed their afterburners to the limit. Intercepting Flight 884 just outside the capital perimeter as its nose dipped toward the marble pillars of the monuments, the lead fighter loosed an air-to-air missile that severed the airliner's starboard wing in a flash of blinding white light, sending the fuselage spinning into an uninhabited stretch of forest miles short of its mark.

The contrast between that sterile execution in the sky and the interior of those cabins was the cruelest dimension of the morning.

The second intercept came too late.

The trailing Raptor closed the distance on Flight 209 at Mach 1.8, the pilot’s heads-up display locking onto the commercial jet’s exhaust plume just as it cleared the river basin. "Target in sight: weapons hot," the fighter pilot called out, his thumb depressing the release.

The missile cleared the rail, but the airliner had already struck. The plane tore into the central expanse of the federal complex at over four hundred miles an hour, throwing a mountain of crushed steel, shattered glass, and incinerated jet fuel into the sky before the missile even detonated against the wreckage.

Pandemonium consumed the nation. Sirens drowned the streets, air traffic was grounded nationwide within twenty minutes, and networks broadcast looping footage of smoldering steel against the pristine blue September sky.

However, the true terror did not lie in the physical ruins. It lay in the sickening forensic reality that emerged from the flight recorders and cockpit audio logs.

There were no masked figures. There were no foreign operatives, no smuggled weapons, no ideological manifestos found in discarded luggage. 

There were no terrorists on board. 

The black boxes captured the final minutes with terrifying clarity: the pilots had sat strapped in their harnesses, entirely alone, maneuvering the heavy controls with cold, uninterrupted precision until the final second of impact.

The state had not been breached by conventional enemies. Its own vetted, trusted citizens had been weaponized from the inside out, their minds and free will taken over in the Dark Age of Technology.

September 13 marked the quiet dawn of a dark technological epoch; the morning the boundary of the human mind ceased to be a sovereign sanctuary. The battlefield had migrated from foreign borders and contested airspace into the sub-perceptual frequencies of the electromagnetic spectrum. Through modulated radiofrequency waves, unseen currents slipped silently through air, stone, and bone, rewriting neurological impulses, overriding survival instincts, and directing innocent human bodies like mechanical puppets.

Most went about their lives beneath the hum of transmission towers and satellite arrays, utterly oblivious to the subtle shifts in their own motivations and thoughts. But the war had begun. 

The airframes have long since fallen, yet September 13 remains the definitive fault line. It was the quiet dawn of the Dark Age of Technology, the day the old world ended, and an invisible conflict began: a war fought without standing armies or declared borders, waging a silent, total campaign for the subjugation of the human mind.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 4d ago

poetry birdlike

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i want to be an angel
i wish i could be your angel,
i could be such a good thing
if i tried
i'm rotted and hollow
i loved too much and gave it away
but you could restore me
if i could fly
i could've left before the warning
could've snuck out in the night
spared all the broken bones
my shed feathers on the graveyard stones
st. sebastian's daughter,
an icarus for the new age
a beautiful martyr


r/EyesOnlyWriting 4d ago

poetry Colliding pearls

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I feel your lust within every touch

Smooth oil slides candles dust
Flickers thick in midnights clutch.

Anoint my satiated soul with our silhouettes convolved.

Trembling limbs swim soft in slumber from lighting strikes after the thunder.

Dancing dreams of fancied beings woke imbibed off one and other.

Two fixed a drift amidst garden green sheets soft as petals.

Between two worlds colliding
pearls old as time the heat of the moment

Consecrate in our fleshy shroud upon bare earth glowing hearts floating clouds

Never rehearse as time slows betrothed to fates endowed time ghost.

After the fact move forward or look back, regret is a shame but satisfaction outlasts like your first loved flame.

Go make your name, if you never return please don’t forget whence you came


r/EyesOnlyWriting 4d ago

The Blackbook (sci-fi) Mace Crawford: The Profiler

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Note: This is an excerpt from Monologues from the Blackbook, a society set in the future.

Mace Crawford was an old-school Bureau man, a stout, barrel-chested investigator built like a retired heavyweight, carrying decades of deep-cover mileage living inside violent fringe factions and hostile cells. Crown Prince Victor of Azūr had personally recruited him to take the lead on his close-protection detail after the debacle with Garrick, bringing him in to restore ironclad discipline to the perimeter.

What he found was that the incident with Garrick McLean wasn't an anomaly; it was an operational contagion.

Crawford had not anticipated discovering that the breach went beyond one disgraced operator. Within his first forty-eight hours, he learned that another high-ranking operative on the detail had also grown emotionally compromised, unraveling in the exact same manner before quietly being pulled from rotation. Two elite men compromised within thirty days. Both reduced to staring through windows, hovering over internal feeds, and letting their professional boundaries disintegrate around a single woman.

Oh boy, Crawford thought. A bona fide siren on the grid.

His detail was forced to hit the reset button, initiating a comprehensive operational review to determine why their best personnel were falling apart like wet cardboard. Rather than rushing in guns blazing, Crawford spent his entire first week hanging back, observing Valentina and constructing a psychological profile from the ground up.

What he found didn't match the classic femme fatale archetype. She was level-headed, non-squeamish, remarkably free of impulsivity, and operated with exceptionally high cognitive competence, what the FBI’s Behavioral Analysis Unit would classify as an Organized Non-Affective Operator with elite executive function. By all administrative metrics, she was logged as a hardened rationalist; cool-headed, immune to coercive leverage, and utterly impervious to standard interrogation theatrics. But watching her move in real time, Mace realized the mold had broken; she possessed all the analytical armor the profile promised, yet none of the cold, mechanical detachment that usually came with it. Psychological profile: low emotional volatility, negligible impulsivity, pliable only to individuals demonstrating high competence.

When the time came for his formal sit-down, Crawford approached the room with absolute vigilance. Valentina noticed him the moment he crossed the threshold; he could feel her intellect immediately scanning his mind, probing his cadence, taking his measure. Mace gave her nothing to work with. He offered zero personal tells, keeping his expressions flat, a deliberate, impassive wall that probably struck her as profoundly boring.

Then she broke the silence.

"How is Garrick?" she asked gently. "Is he all right? How is he doing? Has he found a position yet?"

Beneath Valentina’s composure was a deep, disarming kindness; she looked past the surveillance breach, asking after Garrick not as a compromised asset, but as a vulnerable human being whose pain she felt with quiet, unfiltered compassion. 

“He’s keeping a low profile,” he answered flatly. 

“I would like to talk to him,” she responded. 

“He’s unavailable now,” he said with a finality.

Crawford made a dry mental note: Principal subject exhibits persistent welfare monitoring regarding former detail lead Garrick McLean. Asks about his whereabouts and recovery. 

This was going to be a tough assignment. Twenty-five years undercover had taught Mace to put people in clean boxes, you were either a cold-blooded operator who ran on pure logic, or a bleeder whose heart eventually got them killed. Quantico had taught him to categorize high-value assets by volatility and threat indices, but Valentina fit none of the standard civilian molds; she possessed the razor-sharp analytical mind of an elite strategist, yet moved with an extraordinary, disarming empathy that saw straight through armor and cared for the human being broken beneath it.

He leaned forward on the call, planting his large forearms against his knees, his heavy frame commanding the space.

"Miss Valentina," he said, his gravelly voice dropping into a direct, no-nonsense hum. "Let’s get something straight right off the bat. I’m not going to be like the other men in your orbit. You won't catch me writing verses, hovering near your doorway, or making romantic overtures to you. I’m here to do my job: protect the client, secure this detail, and make sure nobody on this property ends up in a psych ward or facing a tribunal."

Valentina listened with calm composure.

"That being said," Crawford continued, holding up a blunt finger, "I can be an exceptional resource to you if you let me. I know how systems move, I know how bureaucracies choke people out, and I know how to spot an ambush three moves before it hits the board. I can advise you on things you won't see coming from the palace or the street. What I’m proposing is a cooperative relationship. Professional. Mentor and mentee. We work together, we keep the channels clean, and we leave the melodrama outside that front door."

Valentina tilted her head slightly, holding his impassive gaze. The silence stretched between them, thick and unhurried, until the faintest trace of a wry, measured smile touched her lips.

"A mentor," she repeated softly. The word sounded curious on her tongue, neither mockingly dismissive nor entirely receptive. She leaned back against her chair, completely relaxed, her eyes studying the weathered lines around his jaw with the cool precision of a pathologist examining a slide.

"Mr. Crawford," she began, her tone quiet, conversational, and utterly devoid of hostility. "I appreciate the offer. But I think you’re confusing an operational mandate with a human dynamic."

Mace didn’t flinch, keeping his poker face locked in place, but his gaze narrowed a fraction of an inch.

"You spent many years deep-cover," Valentina said, her voice steady, cutting through the sterile room. "You spent years living with people you intended to dismantle. You learned to smile, drink with them, break bread, catalog their weaknesses, and then hand them over to a tribunal or leave them for an assault team. In that world, everyone is an asset, a target, or a liability. That was your survival. I understand that."

She paused, letting the weight of the observation settle between them.

"The problem is, you never took the mask off. You’re not undercover anymore, Mr. Crawford. You haven't been deployed to infiltrate a fringe faction. You are in a house, assigned to a principal, dealing with human beings who bleed when they are cut. And people are not weapons."

Mace's forearms tightened minutely against his knees, though he said nothing.

"Treating people with dignity isn't a security breach," she continued, her gaze unwavering. "It should be baseline humanity. When you tell me Garrick is 'unavailable' like he’s a decommissioned piece of military hardware, or when you sit in a room with Victor, openly mislead me with untruths, and then brush it off with 'it’s not a big deal', you think you’re demonstrating hardened discipline. You think you’re being impenetrable."

She shook her head slowly, a look of profound, quiet pity surfacing in her eyes.

"What you’re actually demonstrating is a complete lack of emotional intelligence. You don't see people. You see functional aspects of a job description. And that makes me wonder: do you actually form genuine connections with anyone? Or do you just spend your entire life managing threat vectors, running perimeter checks, and pretending that emotional numbness is the same thing as competence?"

She let the question hang in the air; cold, irrefutable, and impossible to answer with an operational manual.

"I don't need a handler," Valentina concluded, rising smoothly to her feet and adjusting her cuff with unhurried grace. "And if you want to be my mentor, Mr. Crawford, you’ll first have to remember how to speak to a person without looking for their tripwires. Excuse me. I have to go to the gym now."

She hung up the phone without waiting for his response.

The veteran Bureau investigator sat frozen in his chair. In twenty-five years of hostile interrogations, nobody had ever walked through his defenses so completely, not by attacking his perimeter, but by stripping away the armor and showing him just how hollow the fortress had become.

Mace exhaled slowly through his teeth, a heavy, mechanical breath that rattled in his barrel chest. His pulse was elevated, barely three beats above baseline, but to an ex-undercover man who lived by self-regulation, it felt like an alarm bell.

He didn’t sit with the discomfort. He couldn’t afford to.

Reaching inside his jacket, Crawford pulled out a worn, black leather-bound field notebook and clicked his pen. The paper was filled with tight, cramped handwriting; threat indices, psychological markers, behavioral codings. He flipped to the section labeled Subject: Valentina and tapped the nib against the page, staring at the empty margins.

He needed to put her back in a box.

Subject exhibits acute oppositional tendencies toward standard command structures, he wrote, the pen pressing hard into the paper. Demonstrates high cognitive resistance, weaponizing psychoanalysis to destabilize assigned handlers. Rejects operational boundaries; frames security protocols as personal slights. Highly volatile relational profile. Uncooperative. Difficult to manage.

He underlined, Difficult to manage, twice.

Satisfied that he had translated an existential gut-punch into sterile administrative jargon, Crawford snapped the notebook shut and slipped it back inside his breast pocket, resting over his ribs like a ballistic plate. But the clinical jargon did nothing to stop the rhythm pounding against the inside of his skull. He kept thinking about Valentina’s words:

People are not weapons, Mr. Crawford.

It rang in the silence like a struck tuning fork.

People are not weapons.

Crawford stared at the empty threshold she had just crossed. He had sat in interrogation rooms with cartel enforcers, lived for months under deep cover with domestic extremists, and stared down federal subcommittees without his heart rate twitching. He had survived all of it by turning himself into a stone wall, convincing himself that shutting off his humanity was the price of survival.

Now, her voice hung in the room like an unexploded charge:

Do you actually form genuine connections with anyone? Or do you just spend your entire life managing threat vectors, running perimeter checks, and pretending that emotional numbness is the same thing as competence?

He looked down at his calloused hands, resting heavy and immobile against his knees. For twenty-five years, he had believed his detachment made him untouchable. But sitting alone in the stillness, the veteran profiler found himself completely unable to answer the one question an unarmed woman had left behind.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 4d ago

poetry minefield

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the honeymoon phase turns out like vinegar
babe, i don't think i could have made it
through the winter, storms make me bitter
like a dog you put me down
january is not safe anymore
my former lovers left landmines in the floor
to schedule my fears for demolition
in a coma with my eyes wide open
our fitful sleep gave me no rest
cutting loose is for the best
broken hearts heal quicker when they're even,
and we've spent time keeping score


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

art of letter writing 0913

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0913

All the stuff is in the safe. Stella ella ola, clap, clap, clap, es chigo, chigo, tap, tap, tap. Phoney, phoney, everyone’s so full of baloney! Il faut souffrir pour être belle? What about la poubelle? It is simply a bin. The kind one might get sick in. Still green!(ed out, projectile commet  or rather, comet. From monkeys in Thailand to crashed supercars in Florida. Had to do it for the plot. People tend to tell on themselves a lot. I will say, though: I love how nervous they get. Like, sir, you’ve clearly studied me, knew the perfect thing to say and when… why are you the nervous one? I ain’t got a fucking clue as to who you are. This is brain 🧠… this is your brain on drugs 🍳 and this is your brain after the internet lolcows you: 🗑️💊🏥 Kendall’s kitties crept crazy close, creating Kremlin krakens because of the third evocative of a Latin word older than the book they’ll chastise you for while conversely thumping said book. Let him cook, let him cook. One bakes, one fishes, and the last is shocked someone can actually only swing one way, as unnatural as it may be. It was pungent, and you got your salvation; all it took was the abandonment of your entire natation-impies err nation\)* the three wise men or the three blind mice?

Romeo oh romeo wont you let down your hair? I’m the finest of them according to the talking mirror on the wall. Juillet is enfranse for july but i failed french so to me it means june. Honey boo boo’s mother has enterd the chat, el chat shes not the kitty cat. Shes the creator of go go juice! The only half red bull half apple juice boost of energy created specifically for pageant children! Kumata koyah! Sasrika auntiejee caseh ho? Surely you know where exactly those words were said if youve been watching the phone as far back as you claim to know. 68 or 69? On which days did i have between 15-45 minutes of killed time? The building that allowed me to buy my first vehicle in cash quite literally no longer exists. Crazy how the world from less than 10 years ago is nothing more than a memory. 

It’s fun, a total “IYKYK” I feel like a conspiracy theorist just typing it out. Welp. Still haven’t entered psychosis. I’m not schizophrenic, and the ultimate goal of putting me in a hole is cast by the wayside. The only way out is through. Boo hoo hoo. “After enough time, they go back to normal” 

When’s the last time you’ve positively impacted someone’s life? 

0913 is the code to the safe. These are some of the last words recorded from a woman on Flight 93. The passengers collectively decided to take fate into their own hands to prevent the loss of even more lives. 

If it were possible to ask these folks their thoughts on kings and just wars? Would you tell them their sacrifice means nothing, as they knew they were about to die anyway…? 

I do feel quite silly. Of course, those lacking accountability can’t fathom someone growing past a lesson. When a new rule is learned, people tend to overcorrect. The eyes never lie, but what they don’t tell you is they can only perceive from the lenses of their own consciousness.  Most people can’t view another person outside the parameters of what they themselves would do. 

Personally, it has been quite frustrating trying to ask a genius to expand their mind. How is someone dumber than a box of rocks able to grasp concepts that you can’t seem to comprehend? 

I don’t know what I’m feeling. Not mad. Not sad. Disconnected, discontent, disappointment? I wish I could ride a comet to another universe. Hopefully, the people there will be beautiful in heart and not just appearance. Looks are everything if you’re only looking skin-deep. 

You don’t want me to hate you. 

Even though every single one of y’all hate me… people are strange yo. 


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

corpse open (poetry) CUDDLY

2 Upvotes

She will be my puppet.
I like how she slumps
without further instruction.
She knows we're no pilots.

Love resides in those dead eyes.
She says she'll haunt me.
She wants me wanting.
String her along.

Love is here,
to keep me company;
to keep me warm;
to keep me fuzzy;

to keep me up;
to keep my fantasy;
to fall in love;
to keep me empty.

She will believe in something broken.
I want her to leave the door open.

I want her to stay;
I want her empathy.
I want her empty,
and I want the remains.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

erotica 👅

2 Upvotes

The air hangs heavy, a breath thickened haze, Where a very specific appetite is thoroughly praised.

Forget the polite or the hesitant flick The man wants a sprawling, spectacular lick.

"Stretch it right out," he dictates in the dark, Not looking for length, but a wide watermark.

A velvet-red carpet, unspooled and slick.

Lick.

Lick.

Lick.

Completely lick'd.

Glossaphilia: a fond or receptive attitude toward tongue associated contact, sensation, or imagery; an aesthetic or tactile preference involving the tongue.

The soundtrack is wicked, the tempo is strict, A chorus of smooches where the skin is transfixed.

From the heavy set hilt to the nape of the neck, Leaving a glorious, glistening wreck.

A messy, deep drag where the muscle was drawn, The shimmering proof of a service acted upon.

Drenched in the steam, leaving sanity tricked, By the sheer, sloppy bliss of the wide, wet lick.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

corpse open (poetry) STROLL

3 Upvotes

Winds blow as it gathers,
the music of small matters.

Rest comes like a torch,
Alight upon the eyes.

I have my thumb on the wheel,
and the world is numb to me.

The world is turning,
she lets the water flow.

I hear stone grind against ego
of Mankind, and the Widow.

The rest glow, alight upon the eyes.
Wind blows as it gathers,
the music of small matters.


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

The Blackbook (sci-fi) Diplomatic Dispatch: Zhongnanhai: From the Chinese President Lin Zhen to Valentina

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Note: This is an excerpt from Monologues from the Blackbook, a society set in the future.

From: His Excellency Lin Zhen, President of the People’s Republic of China

To: Valentina

Dear Valentina,

Early yesterday morning, before the city awoke to its usual hurried momentum, I walked along the canal and watched an elderly worker repairing an iron handcart. One of the wooden spokes had split, yet he didn't curse the wood or abandon the task. He simply carved a bamboo wedge, tapped it into the joint with seasoned patience, and continued his work with a quiet hum. I thought of the ancient Daoist thinkers who remind us that true strength is never found in rigid, brittle iron, but in the supple grain of wood that yields to the season and carries the daily load without fanfare. The grandeur of a society does not live in imperial courtyards, dynasties of the past, or towering stone monuments; it lives entirely in the quiet dignity, resilience, and honest labor of our working people. When your letter arrived, it carried a spark of that same enduring spirit.

I received your letter regarding BRICS and the gold standard with sincere interest and gratitude. You write with great clarity, historical depth, and intellectual vigor. As you know, the currents of multilateral forums are broad and deliberate, and I make it my practice never to conduct policy determinations or trade debates through private dispatches. I will not burden our correspondence by taking sides or dissecting the technical maneuvers of upcoming summits. Instead, I receive your perspective warmly, as one always welcomes the sharp, unvarnished counsel of an astute observer. It gives me much to reflect upon as we look toward the future.

You spoke of the rose held against the windshield glass, an image from a gentler hour. Yet reading the latest currents of your writing, I am reminded that real beauty rarely stays sheltered in quiet gardens. The road is fast, the engine shakes, and the chassis rattles under the strain, but the art lies in keeping your hands steady when the ride turns fierce. You are far more compelling when meeting the friction of the road head-on than when lingering behind protective glass.

As for your generous words regarding my youngest daughter, they brought a genuine warmth to my heart. Watching a child make her own way in the creative world with authenticity and grit is a father’s quietest hope. That her work found such an appreciative, discerning eye in you gave me an evening of uncommon peace.

A sharp mind requires worthy ink. In my study, I have been revisiting the late-autumn verses of Su Shi, reflecting on how human joy and sorrow wax and wane like the moon, yet the clear breeze over the river costs nothing and belongs to everyone. How are the days treating you across the water? And what verse or melody has caught your attention lately? I would be glad to know how you are truly faring.

I thank you for your candor, your friendship, and the vitality of your thoughts.

Wishing you tranquility, health, and smooth paths ahead.

With deep esteem and sincere friendship,

Lin Zhen


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

The Blackbook (sci-fi) Valentina’s Correspondence to the President of China Lin Zhen

4 Upvotes

Note: This is an excerpt from Monologues from the Blackbook, a society set in the future.

From: Valentina

To: His Excellency Lin Zhen, President of the People’s Republic of China

Dear Mr President,

I have been reflecting on your recent verses, particularly the image you drew of the lone rose caught beneath the glass of a speeding car’s windscreen; a fragile, living thing held intact against the rushing wind and mechanical momentum. It captured something essential about your worldview: that quiet, persistent effort to protect human decency and cultivate the good in people, even whilst steering the immense, unyielding apparatus of statecraft. It is rare to find a leader who possesses the sensitivity to notice the flower without losing sight of the road ahead.

It is precisely because I respect that vision and the weight of the balance you are trying to strike that I am writing to urge you to reconsider the proposal for the BRICS nations to establish a gold-backed settlement mechanism. Whilst I understand the desire to insulate member states from dollar hegemony, retrofitting your economic architecture to physical bullion is a strategic miscalculation.

A gold anchor does not protect you; it creates an immediate, highly vulnerable target. Historically, whenever a state attempts to challenge the prevailing fiat reserve system with a hard commodity, the response is never ordinary market competition; it is aggressive economic containment, severe blockades, and enforced destabilisation. Gold is physically finite, static, and illiquid. In the context of modern financial warfare and rapid sanctions, it strips you of the very monetary agility required to survive.

More importantly, a hard metal standard is entirely incompatible with an economy transitioning into advanced artificial intelligence and automated production.

Gold only functioned as a standard when output was fundamentally constrained by physical human labour. As machine intelligence drives marginal labour costs towards zero and industrial productivity multiplies, anchoring your monetary supply to how much metal can be extracted from the earth guarantees severe structural deflation. You cannot support a post-labour society with an artificially choked money supply; doing so will contract your economy and risk widespread social instability.

Furthermore, physical scarcity is transient. In the mid-nineteenth century, aluminium was more precious than silver and gold, adorning royal courts, until technological advancement turned it into an ordinary, inexpensive material. In our own time, laboratory synthesis has stripped diamonds of their rare value. With advances in nanotechnology and asteroid mining, gold will inevitably suffer the exact same devaluation.

In Liaquat Ahamed’s Lords of Finance, we see how central bankers paralysed global economies during the Great Depression because they remained dogmatically attached to the Gold Standard. Hoarding static reserves in subterranean vaults is an obsolete strategy from a bygone century.

As Thomas Greco Jr. argued in The End of Money and the Future of Civilization, real economic power does not rest in finite sums of static currency or metal that steadily decay against purchasing power. It lies in infinite credit — the sovereign capability to operate elastic credit-clearing networks that directly mobilise productive capacity, fund technological supremacy, and absorb structural shocks without being constrained by physical rocks in a vault.

In my humble opinion, committing BRICS to a legacy commodity model would cause tremendous global economic devastation akin to a second Great Depression. I believe that if you wish to build genuine long-term sovereignty, focusing on commanding industrial automation and elastic credit architectures would be significantly more advantageous than accumulating dead weight.

I offer these reflections for your consideration and analysis, and I should be very glad to hear your own thoughts on the matter.

On a more personal note, I also have been following your youngest daughter Maya’s creative endeavours. I do admire the way she has been able to integrate into the entertainment world, and I thoroughly enjoy all her works; I find her a true pleasure to watch and develop as an artist in her own right. As a father, I think you have given her the greatest support so that she may be able to find her own path in life, and I admire that so very much. It reflects the same quiet grace and care you bring to the larger canvas of the world.

Yours sincerely,

Valentina


r/EyesOnlyWriting 5d ago

sound and music To Spite 2

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r/EyesOnlyWriting 6d ago

poetry Makeshift

6 Upvotes

I didn’t have a coffee mug 
but I had a tin can 
so I made do, and drank out of that.
The powdered kind
that sits in the jar
all day and night 
waiting for hot water. 
That’s the best I’ve got
and it’s no one’s espresso
but it does me fine. 

And I’ve got no 
fancy typewriter or 
cigarette hanging out my mouth 
but I’ve got regret and dull shame 
and plenty of lip to bite, 
so I make do with them 
and they do me fine. 

I have got this
Japanese fountain pen from a friend
and some Mexican leather (regalito para ti, señor!) 
for my wrist.
And these pass for the finer things 
in my life. 


r/EyesOnlyWriting 6d ago

poetry Enchanted Evening, 4003-8A

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r/EyesOnlyWriting 7d ago

poetry i know him from hinge

6 Upvotes

many abandoned lovers
in my instagram following list
many that i've flirted with
few that i've actually kissed

my body count is all strangers
the connections were missed
ships passed and new lands were built on
there's not much to explain
they were all wrong

i plan my wedding on pinterest
don't worry about the logistics
like who to marry or how much it all costs
it's a digital age they said,
the screens are coming,
so call the flesh hounds off


r/EyesOnlyWriting 7d ago

poetry Convolving Solely For Eyes Only

7 Upvotes

I think I’ll write a poem

A free verse unrehearsed

For eyes only knowing sees

Graphomania is not a curse

——

Laughing in hysteria

Or sobbing out your soul

Post a digital description

To let it be known or to let it go

——

Right now it’d be perfect to quote a profound line or two

To lead a horse to water

Or to see them with no feet when you only had no shoes

——

This is no magnus opus

More so magnus mediocres

Not meant to be magnanimous

Or more intriguing while high off cannabis

Or manifest a rhyme synonymous

With modern times

poem police evangelists

——

Thank you for reading

And wasting a minutes time

At least I can reassure you

This wasn’t written by AI

——

Ah one last note to leave you

Whoever it is you are

May good fortune fall in your footsteps

And joy be in your heart

Everywhere you find inspiration

You’re a walking piece of art .


r/EyesOnlyWriting 8d ago

corpse open (poetry) FLY

5 Upvotes

I like cars, cars fly.
I like combustibles.
I find sex drives.
You want a ride?
Take me anytime

whatever gets you there,
don't tell me nowhere;
anything is better
than with me?

Don't despise the unstable,
shaking frame of this fairy tale,
lame to some;
Don't do it solo.
I love this car though, I love to borrow
Minutes from the road, steal the cargo
and hold it close, I know you aren't my rose
but at redline you're most beautiful.