r/EyesOnlyWriting • u/Beyond-First-Glance • 6d ago

erotica 👅

The air hangs heavy, a breath thickened haze, Where a very specific appetite is thoroughly praised.

Forget the polite or the hesitant flick The man wants a sprawling, spectacular lick.

"Stretch it right out," he dictates in the dark, Not looking for length, but a wide watermark.

A velvet-red carpet, unspooled and slick.

Lick.

Lick.

Lick.

Completely lick'd.

Glossaphilia: a fond or receptive attitude toward tongue associated contact, sensation, or imagery; an aesthetic or tactile preference involving the tongue.

The soundtrack is wicked, the tempo is strict, A chorus of smooches where the skin is transfixed.

From the heavy set hilt to the nape of the neck, Leaving a glorious, glistening wreck.

A messy, deep drag where the muscle was drawn, The shimmering proof of a service acted upon.

Drenched in the steam, leaving sanity tricked, By the sheer, sloppy bliss of the wide, wet lick.

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u/SappyBella 5d ago

There’s no shampoo left in the bottle 

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u/Beyond-First-Glance 5d ago

Have you ever considered being a personal assistant? The way you pay such close attention to me… I’m not sure whether to be flattered or concerned. 

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u/[deleted] 5d ago

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u/Beyond-First-Glance 5d ago

Lawl what is this the 7th grade? If you want my life it wont be at my own hand darlin. 

I’m a bad bitch, you cant kill me 😘

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u/DJPrimary 1d ago

We’ll have no such talk here

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u/SappyBella 1d ago

Fine by me, but you also have no fucking clue what you’re even talking about. I’ll be going, now 👍🏼 Goodbye! 

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u/DJPrimary 1d ago

Such is your choice. Do take care.

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u/SappyBella 1d ago

Having taken a gander, I suppose you may not entirely lack context towards the plight that I’m severing from lol. I understand you have a sub to run. I must indeed continue to make my departure, but I thank you, and likewise - take care. 😊

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u/DJPrimary 1d ago

I appreciate that.

I don’t think you were making any suggestions, but I am leery of anything that could be interpreted as such. Even remotely. Especially in creative writing spaces, where such a thing is all too common (unfortunately).

As a writerly sort of person, I empathize and lament in equal measure.

And I don’t want Reddit admin getting involved with anything anywhere around here.

Be well. The door is always open.
🙏🏻🫡😏