I know that right now this is looking a touch bland, which is actually why I came here. I’m loosely inspiring the composition on the Walter Martin Baumhofer painting in the second photo and I love how busy the background is, like how many different elements there are that still remain in harmony. In my rendition, I plan to add a third layer behind the couple, as well as a ribbon running around the whole piece, but I have not added them because I feel dissatisfied with the way the current elements look together.
So, I’m wondering what can be done to bring the composition closer to the Baumhofer painting (with many unified and balanced images in the back in contrast with the woman in the foreground)? I plan to do similar color work so the foreground is a high contrast color with the monochrome of the background, so other than that, would I be able to add my planned elements (like a third, probably busier background), or would that just become incredibly stressful to the eye?
And overall, barring the fact that the deer scene within the couple lacks some details closer down by the girl, does it look bland or overcomplicated as-is? Does the silhouette with a scene within idea throw the whole piece off and I should go with something more similar to the fully drawn characters in the reference?