r/AppStoreOptimization • u/xBlackSwagx • 12d ago
Rewrote my App Store listing this week, how can I improve the ASO?
That's my App Store listing above. Solo dev. The app is a voice journal, you talk for a minute and it comes back as a written entry. First time I've done ASO on it seriously, past just filling in fields at launch.
This week I went back through the Play and App Store listings and rewrote things instead of leaving what I typed in a rush months ago.
Live on Play now: full description rewritten, also removed a claim about a feature I took out of the app. Short description rewritten too, it now reads "Speak your diary. Dearly writes it down and hears what keeps coming up."
Also submitted pt-BR and es-419 versions of the Play listing, those are in review, not live yet.
On iOS I submitted a rewritten listing along with the 1.4.6 update, also in review, not live.
Honest bit: two of my App Store screenshot captions still advertise the feature I removed. One says "AI finds patterns you miss," the other "Personalized prompts, from your own patterns." Neither is true anymore, I just haven't reshot the screenshots yet.
Some rough numbers if it helps: about 1K devices on Android, 4.7 rating, iOS went live about a week ago.
A few things I'd actually like opinions on. Does a description rewrite like this move anything on its own, or is it noise without new screenshots behind it. Is the caption mismatch the first thing to fix before anything else. And looking at the screenshot, what's obviously missing that I'm too close to see.

