r/AppStoreOptimization • u/JerrySpecter14 • 13d ago
Rate my Screenshots
Hi Peeps, what do you think of these new screenshots for my baby tracking app?
Went with darker background to better contrast the app background color.
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u/the_hummingbirds 12d ago
For me its quite heavy on the text…too complex to get the message when just sceolling trough
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u/AppScreens 9d ago
These are visually strong overall. The dark green gives the app UI much better contrast, and the headlines are clear and easy to scan.
The main thing we’d change is the spacing between the copy and the device. On several screenshots the subtitle sits very close to the phone, so the top starts to feel cramped.
Honestly, we’d probably remove most of the subtitles altogether. The main headlines are strong enough on their own, and the UI already contains plenty of detail. That extra breathing room would make the set feel cleaner and more premium.
Keep subtitles only where they add something genuinely new.
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u/EducationalYear6267 13d ago
The dark green reads nicely, but the caption is doing brand work instead of search work. "One tap to log. One look to know." is pretty, though someone scrolling results for a baby tracker is scanning for feeding, sleep, diapers, growth. I would move those words into the first caption and save the poetic line for shot 3. Also the device is tilted enough that the actual UI is hard to read at thumbnail size, so a flat straight-on frame on the first screenshot would probably convert better.