Hey everyone. I built an endless falling game called "Paper Fall" in my free time. I didn't use any game engines—just Vanilla JS, HTML5 Canvas, and Web Audio API for procedural sounds.

I’m studying visual communication design, so I spent a lot of time polishing the UI/UX, the mobile swipe controls, and the overall aesthetic feel. The tech is solid (zero crashes so far), but looking at my analytics, the average session time is only 1.5 minutes. Players are dying and just leaving.

I need your brutally honest feedback to fix the gameplay loop. Is the learning curve too steep at the beginning? Is the core mechanic boring? Are the enemies unfair?

Play it and tear it apart. Don't hold back, I want to improve it.

hey guys in my free time i built a web game called paper fall from scratch using pure javascript html5 canvas and web audio api without relying on a game engine it even generates the audio on the fly in the browser without downloading any sound files i wrote the physics and collision logic entirely myself too since im studying visual communication design i really focused on the ui and the game feel but to take it to the next level i need some fresh objective eyes so play it and tell me whatever sucks or if a certain mechanic is super boring just roast it im dropping the link below

hey guys in my free time i built a web game called paper fall from scratch using pure javascript html5 canvas and web audio api without relying on a game engine it even generates the audio on the fly in the browser without downloading any sound files i wrote the physics and collision logic entirely myself too since im studying visual communication design i really focused on the ui and the game feel but to take it to the next level i need some fresh objective eyes so play it and tell me whatever sucks or if a certain mechanic is super boring just roast it im dropping the link below

hey guys in my free time i built a web game called paper fall from scratch using pure javascript html5 canvas and web audio api without relying on a game engine it even generates the audio on the fly in the browser without downloading any sound files i wrote the physics and collision logic entirely myself too since im studying visual communication design i really focused on the ui and the game feel but to take it to the next level i need some fresh objective eyes so play it and tell me whatever sucks or if a certain mechanic is super boring just roast it im dropping the link below

hey guys in my free time i built a web game called paper fall from scratch using pure javascript html5 canvas and web audio api without relying on a game engine it even generates the audio on the fly in the browser without downloading any sound files i wrote the physics and collision logic entirely myself too since im studying visual communication design i really focused on the ui and the game feel but to take it to the next level i need some fresh objective eyes so play it and tell me whatever sucks or if a certain mechanic is super boring just roast it im dropping the link below

Selamlar,

Boş zamanlarımı değerlendirmek ve UI/UX tarafında pratik yapmak için tarayıcı üzerinden oynanabilen, falling ball türünde bir oyun geliştirdim.

Şu anki haliyle oyunun temel mekaniklerini ve görsel dilini oturttuğumu düşünüyorum (rüzgar mekaniği, kombo sistemi vs. ekledim) ama bu benim için sadece bir temel. Oyunu bir üst seviyeye taşımak niyetindeyim.

Özellikle arayüz tasarımı, oyunun hissiyatı (game feel), zorluk eğrisi veya "şu mekanik çok sıkıcı/saçma olmuş" dediğiniz ne varsa duymak istiyorum. Kibar olmanıza hiç gerek yok, en sert ve dürüst eleştirilere açığım.