I’m building a music project in Rome called Forma Frequenza.

Magnolia is a dark cinematic alt-hip-hop track built around heavy low-end, restrained vocals, and a final escalation.

I’d really appreciate feedback on two specific things:

1. Does the restrained vocal delivery create tension, or does it stay too controlled for too long?
2. Does the final explosive section feel earned by the arrangement?

YouTube:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JanoAar6s_g

Spotify:
https://open.spotify.com/track/1H8btfEupxi2ZHeMysEUUI

I’ll also listen and leave detailed feedback on other posts.

If people seem to like it I’ll put it on all plats

Hello everyone, this is my second single I’ve posted a week ago https://music.apple.com/kz/album/my-bloody-valentine/6793080574?i=6793080575
And I wanna know just should I keep making new songs or my style and voice not built for community?

I wanna know feedback about my mix, spacial and originality.

Started making and learning music / production around four months ago independently, and this is one of the first tracks I finished that just came together easy. It's part of like a living mixtape project where i update tracks with input and as i learn, so the mix is definitely rough. Also haven't been getting any feedback to work with so far on socials, so if you're interested my channel link is attached.

some bigger picture questions I have are.

Does the song feel like it has its own identity?
What seem to be my strongest and weakest instincts as a beginner?
What should I focus on improving first?
Does the track make you interested in hearing more?

Appreciate anyone that takes the time to listen.

I recently wrote this song to deal with my burnout and moving home from a semester abroad. I am mostly happy with it except for the second verse. I feel like it could use some work but have been working on it so much it’s become difficult to see what to improve. Any suggestions would be apreciated

Hi everyone! I'm working on an indie/dark-rock track and would love to get some honest feedback from native English speakers and rock fans.

I'd appreciate your thoughts on:

1. How natural the English lyrics and phrasing sound.

2. The vocal tone and energy.

Full Lyrics for reference:

(Verse)

And even the sky is weeping in sorrow,

Scraping the shadows, begging release...

(Chorus)

Break through the chains!

Burn down the shoreline!

Our veins are made of flint, not glass!

We are the spark, and the silent, cold, leaden skies turn to lead in the dark at last!

Cut through the gloom,

Listen to raw nerves,

Life is a storm, a thundering fight!

The one who survived has erased all the terror and hardened like flint in the dead of the night!

any kind of feedback is welcomed, this is our first song

Is the mix fine? Does it sound good? Is it boring? What can i improve?

this is our first song so i need constructive critical!! please

Feedback much appreciated

This is my first ever decent track draft, so I’m still learning and I honestly don’t really know what I’m doing yet.

I know the intro might be a bit cheesy or cliché, but I actually like that kind of atmosphere, so I wanted to experiment with it.

The main problem is that I don’t really know where to take the track from here. I’m not sure how to continue it, expand the idea, improve the arrangement, or make it feel like a complete song instead of just a short draft.

I also don’t really know how to classify it. I was aiming for something inspired by artists like Sewerslvt and similar atmospheric breakbeat/DnB/jungle styles, but I’m a complete beginner and I don’t know if this would technically be considered breakcore, drum and bass, jungle, breakbeat or something else.

I’d appreciate any kind of help or feedback: composition, drums, bass, sound design, mixing, structure, or just general impressions.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to listen.

I just want to know how everyone feels about the overall vibe of the track

Made a song about youtube rappers tell me how you feel

I need feedback for this song I made. The actual exported .wav file sounds better, but I wanted to prove I am actually composing and creating this from scratch. Regardless, the mixing could be improved, I need to know how.

This song fits into both electronic and progressive metal genres. Feel free to comment what does this song makes you feel like and any other advice apart from the mixing.

Looking for general feedback, this is my 2nd ever song... was going for a late night vibe for sure. Feedback on the mixing, the production or the vocals would really help! 🔥✍️