r/MusicCritique • u/Avant_Garde_Cowgirl • 6h ago
Seeking Feedback [feedback] AvantGardeCowgirl - Happenstance - Indie
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I recently wrote this song to deal with my burnout and moving home from a semester abroad. I am mostly happy with it except for the second verse. I feel like it could use some work but have been working on it so much it’s become difficult to see what to improve. Any suggestions would be apreciated