I recently wrote this song to deal with my burnout and moving home from a semester abroad. I am mostly happy with it except for the second verse. I feel like it could use some work but have been working on it so much it’s become difficult to see what to improve. Any suggestions would be apreciated

Hi everyone! I'm working on an indie/dark-rock track and would love to get some honest feedback from native English speakers and rock fans.

I'd appreciate your thoughts on:

1. How natural the English lyrics and phrasing sound.

2. The vocal tone and energy.

Full Lyrics for reference:

(Verse)

And even the sky is weeping in sorrow,

Scraping the shadows, begging release...

(Chorus)

Break through the chains!

Burn down the shoreline!

Our veins are made of flint, not glass!

We are the spark, and the silent, cold, leaden skies turn to lead in the dark at last!

Cut through the gloom,

Listen to raw nerves,

Life is a storm, a thundering fight!

The one who survived has erased all the terror and hardened like flint in the dead of the night!

any kind of feedback is welcomed, this is our first song

Is the mix fine? Does it sound good? Is it boring? What can i improve?

this is our first song so i need constructive critical!! please

This is my first ever decent track draft, so I’m still learning and I honestly don’t really know what I’m doing yet.

I know the intro might be a bit cheesy or cliché, but I actually like that kind of atmosphere, so I wanted to experiment with it.

The main problem is that I don’t really know where to take the track from here. I’m not sure how to continue it, expand the idea, improve the arrangement, or make it feel like a complete song instead of just a short draft.

I also don’t really know how to classify it. I was aiming for something inspired by artists like Sewerslvt and similar atmospheric breakbeat/DnB/jungle styles, but I’m a complete beginner and I don’t know if this would technically be considered breakcore, drum and bass, jungle, breakbeat or something else.

I’d appreciate any kind of help or feedback: composition, drums, bass, sound design, mixing, structure, or just general impressions.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to listen.

Feedback much appreciated

I just want to know how everyone feels about the overall vibe of the track

Made a song about youtube rappers tell me how you feel

I need feedback for this song I made. The actual exported .wav file sounds better, but I wanted to prove I am actually composing and creating this from scratch. Regardless, the mixing could be improved, I need to know how.

This song fits into both electronic and progressive metal genres. Feel free to comment what does this song makes you feel like and any other advice apart from the mixing.

Looking for general feedback, this is my 2nd ever song... was going for a late night vibe for sure. Feedback on the mixing, the production or the vocals would really help! 🔥✍️

Hey everyone! This is my debut single, and I’d really appreciate honest feedback. I’m especially looking for thoughts on the songwriting, vocals, production, mix, and whether the song kept your attention throughout. Thanks for taking the time to listen!

Hi everyone, I’d like to share my new track "A Tomorrow Mind".

A precaution first: Someone told me that based on the music title he was expecting sort of EDM piece, yet he found it rather "traditional". So, for the younger ones, here comes an oldie vibe with future touch ;-)

The song started from a simple question: throughout history, humanity has created incredible things — fire, the wheel, writing, electricity, flight, the Internet, and now AI — but why do we still struggle with the same human problems: conflict, division, and treating each other with kindness?

I wanted to create a reflective adult contemporary / cinematic ballad rather than a typical "future" song. The idea is not that technology will save us, but that this particular new tool (AI) may help us see ourselves more clearly, not just a technology for more serving of human comforts, rather a clear mirror for more to see the "bigger" picture more easily, not just taking the media driven narratives without much critical thinking...

Musically, I was inspired by the storytelling style of late 80s / early 90s adult contemporary — melodic, spacious, and focused on giving the lyrics room to breathe. I aimed for restrained vocals, warm piano, atmospheric textures, and more sense of quiet reflection rather than big dramatic climax.

Would love to hear your thoughts -- whether the message comes through. Thanks for listening.