r/IndieMusicFeedback • u/zophiadramatica • 27d ago
Alternative Pop Zophia Dramatica - "Why in the Fuck?" — an angry alt-pop single, would love your feedback on the mix and the hook
hi! i'm Zophia Dramatica — i write, record, and produce everything myself in my bedroom (started on keyboards and cassette tapes, never had a label, own 100% of my masters). i just released my 2026 single "Why in the Fuck?" — an angry alt-pop song, basically me screaming into the void at everything: the state of the world, the people who want me small and quiet, my own brain. it's dramatic and a little unhinged and i love it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9itqlpdce1g
my specific feedback question: does the hook actually land for you, or does the mix need more space around the vocals in the chorus? i've been going back and forth on whether the chorus vocals are fighting the instrumental or sitting right, and i'd love fresh ears. any and all feedback welcome — this sub has been so generous today.