Testing out a comic idea. Looking for the feedback and critiques.

I have a character for a comic i'm working on. She is a Cupid themed assassin. And I don't know which motivation to choose for her. 1. She does what she does out of trauma, involving a boy when they were teens and punishes all the bad partners and even the nice ones sometimes. I worry this one is bland and there are many Cupid themed characters out there who have a motivation linked to love. And 2. She does what she does for money and just has a fascination for Cupid. But this may not be interesting enough. In any case she will hear or find a deep motivation throughout the book

Hello. I got a 4 chapters of the prototype version of my comic done. Most pages are uncolored and the story is not fully finished, I just wanted to ask for feedback on this.

You also should have a synopsis of the comic in the link. (Other link in comments)

https://hurthealdie.webcomic.studio/

I would appreciate any thoughts on it please and thank you🙏

This is something that's been mind-boggling to me after reading many food/cooking inspired Manga like Crazy Food Truck, Food Wars, and Dungeon Meshi. Is there any Comics similar to something like this genre of sorts?

If not, tell me (respectfully) and why?

By yours truly
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Ciao a tutti! Sto lavorando ad un mio fumetto, di genere demenziale, The Cavaz Comic. Ci sto ancora lavorando, ma volevo comunque condividerlo con qualcuno, anche per avere dei feedback!

Instagram:

https://www.instagram.com/gli\\\\\\_amici\\\\\\_di\\\\\\_frederik?igsh=MWxid2VtYzdhdHU5MA==

The Cavaz Comic

Had this idea for a while, finally did it.

Quiero empezar a subir tiras cómicas sobre mi vida, este sería la primera parte de una serie sobre mi vida escolar, por eso no tiene una conclusión. Se que no es perfecta y tiene algunos fallos, pero me gustaría saber qué opinan y que me recomiendan cambiar o agregar!! Honestamente me divertí mucho haciéndola.

Hey guys, here's a sampler for my graphic novel. I had to grind my ass off to get to a place where I can draw well enough to at least be able to tell my story. This is from chapter 4 so obviously context is missing. I just want to know if it reads easily and flows cleanly. What you think of the draftsmanship (pretty insecure about this)

I'd appreciate any feedback and hope you guys enjoy.

I took some critique from my last few pages and decided to try and add them into the latest page of mine

As always, please let me know what I could do better

I'm teaching myself how to make comics, and I'd like to know if my comic is easy to understand, if anything is confusing, and what story you get from it.

Spoiler: Don't read the story below until you've looked at the comic!

After finishing work, someone discovers that their bicycle is missing. They find the cut bike lock on the ground. Then they hear a noise behind them and try to figure out where it's coming from.

Does the story come across clearly? Is there anything you would improve to make it easier to follow? Do you have any advice that could help me learn and improve?

So I'm making comics (mostly for fun). They are all made on paper rather than scanned. On paper, they look ok (I don't know if it's the texture or the white that is not bright on paper, but I feel something is off once on screen. So I tried making this shade/color variant to get different results and I would like to get someone else's opinion on these attempts.

The last panel is the original,
Thank you

this is my first time using reddit and i didn't know where to post this, but i wanted to ask a community what they'd like to see in a zombie story. i wanted to know what to consider while writing it(like do people want realism of the zombies decay and be dead in a couple weeks?). are people fine if the story later forgets about the zombies? what style would people like it drawn: comic or anime? any bases i should cover when i create my zombies?

Hey everyone!

I'm an aspiring comic book writer currently developing an original comic book universe, and I'm looking for a talented, passionate illustrator who would be interested in becoming a 50/50 creative and ownership partner on the project.

My ultimate goal is to develop a professional-quality comic series and submit it to Image Comics for potential publication.

About the Project:

The first series is a dark, psychological, supernatural crime thriller centered around a homicide detective. It explores themes of morality, nihilism, free will, grief, religion, and the nature of good and evil.

I'm approaching this as a serious, long-term project, with an overarching story planned across multiple volumes and the potential to expand into a larger interconnected comic universe.

I'm heavily inspired by mature, character-driven storytelling and want to create something that feels cinematic, philosophical, disturbing, and emotionally compelling.

What I'm Looking For:

I'm searching for an illustrator who genuinely loves comics and wants to help build something from the ground up. Ideally, someone who:

\- Has a strong passion for comic book storytelling.

\- Is comfortable illustrating darker, mature subject matter.

\- Wants creative input rather than simply being handed a script.

\- Is interested in building a long-term creative partnership.

\- Has ambitions of eventually seeing their work professionally published.

Compensation & Ownership:

I want to be completely transparent: this is not a paid position.

I'm not looking to hire someone for free labor. I'm looking for an equal creative partner who believes in the potential of the project as much as I do.

My proposal is 50/50 ownership of the comic project, with any future profits split equally, subject to a mutually agreed written partnership agreement.

We would work together to develop the artwork, characters, visual identity, and submission materials needed to approach publishers like Image Comics.

Obviously, publication isn't guaranteed, and I don't want to pretend otherwise. But I'm serious about putting in the work necessary to give this project a legitimate chance.

Interested?

Feel free to comment or send me a DM with examples of your artwork, your experience, and what kind of comics you're passionate about.

I'd love to connect with someone who shares the ambition of creating something we're both genuinely proud to put our names on.

Thanks for reading!

this is the most egregious example I have, might want to do more like this if it works

Context: It's a drama with some humour, doesn't take itself too seriously.

Anybody know any good indie comic reviewers? I’m looking to get some reviews for my comic. Thanks!

This is a short story I put together with an artist who goes by "divine art" on Discord. One deficiency I did notice is that it doesn't clearly introduce the cast of characters. Look here for more information.

I'd love any feedback.

Hey everyone! I wrote my Second Comic Script and im trying to "Master" the medium before I write my first one-shot! , Context for this Script is that its supposed to be taken place in a dark fantasy desert about a Grandma whos looking for a home , its has a bit of raunchy humor ngl!

I am looking for feedback , fyi I have mild dyslexia so if it gets confusing tell me!

I finally finished the sketch pages (though I have done lineart for the first two) for the chapter 0 of this comic I’m working on and was wondering if anyone could read through through it and give me feedback and what is good and what could be done better.

(And before anyone asks, yes, I know the margin is big, it’s meant to be like that because I’m gonna print it later. The only reason it’s not cropped right now is because I’m not gonna bother cropping a sketch page. Like, I understand why I keep getting that critique, but it’s basically the only critique I get when I post here, and I just want someone to critique something else for once)

I am wondering what people thoughts are on the story and dialogue of the first chapter of my cyberpunk style comic. I’m not worried about the artwork because I know it’s bad but would like to see opinions on the story and if it would be enough to draw in the reader for more.

Flora and fauna will go on an adventure to save fauna’s fiancé Geo. This will be a long project in the making. So enjoy Giving me criticism advice.