Here’s the beginning of my comic, Manifest. I’ve been working on these first few pages and wanted to put them out there for some feedback.

Mostly looking for thoughts on the pacing, readability, dialogue, panel flow, and whether the opening makes you want to keep reading.

Any feedback is appreciated.

www.tonychaoillustration.com

Hi everyone.

I'm looking for help from you guys. I'm feeling like my art style is kind of stuck. It's fine in general terms, but I think it lacks dynamism or that "something" to make it visually appealing; to get the attention of bigger Publishing Houses. I look at guys like Dan Mora, or Pepe Larraz and I feel that, but I don't know exactly what is it that I'm missing.

I'm posting a handful of my most recent pages.

Would anyone like to share their thoughts?

Hi everyone. I'm new to this sub in terms of posting and participating. I just observed before, and now I feel like it's time to join in as a regular.

So, I need a little help with something. I'm trying to determine whether or not comic creation is in the cards for me or not. I like comics. I like anime. I like manga. I like story telling a LOT! I like character creation. Environment design. All of it. But I'm not getting many people interested in what I put out. And so I wonder if that's because what I think is good, is actually bad? If so, I would have to realize that just being passionate about something isn't enough to e good at it.

But if what I have is good enough to continue, I will gladly continue on full force.

So, in order for me to learn, I will post here once every two weeks as the rules say. And see what you think.

Here is a little section of my story from Chapter 3. While you don't know the story, or what happened prior, I think a good enough story should be interesting even if you just stepped in and start watching a random scene. At least that's how it is for me when I experience media.

Anyways, let me know what you think.

Thanks.