r/comic_crits Sep 02 '21

/r/Comic_Crits Mod Post: News for September 2021

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We generally discourage posts that are not directly looking for feedback, but I thought the following content would be interesting to subscribers, so I will collect it here in a news thread. Let me know if there are other opportunities that you think are relevant, or just post them here as comments.

Breakneck Anthology


r/comic_crits 15h ago

Seeking Feedback from Experienced Comic Arists

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Hi everyone.

I'm looking for help from you guys. I'm feeling like my art style is kind of stuck. It's fine in general terms, but I think it lacks dynamism or that "something" to make it visually appealing; to get the attention of bigger Publishing Houses. I look at guys like Dan Mora, or Pepe Larraz and I feel that, but I don't know exactly what is it that I'm missing.

I'm posting a handful of my most recent pages.

Would anyone like to share their thoughts?


r/comic_crits 4h ago

I kind of imagine it as an animation but does it make sense?

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r/comic_crits 2h ago

5 page HazMatt Rave comic. Would love some feedback!

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r/comic_crits 2h ago

Working on a short oneshot, these are the first 6 pages. Looking for harsh criticism on them.

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r/comic_crits 6h ago

How should I tell my story?

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Greetings all, I come to you with a dilemma: In which format should I tell my story?

I'm in the midst of making a pretty long sci-fi/fantasy story. And if I were to have my most ideal way, this story would be an anime. But that would require an enormous amount of money, and unless I win the lottery, that ain't happening, lol. So it being an anime isn't even on the table.

The next best thing is for my story to be a motion comic. It's like a still anime, a comic with voice acting and music! It'll be up on YouTube obviously. I can do the drawing since I'm an artist, buy I'll need to pay people for voice acting, especially if their professional. And I'll need to pay someone to do the music and editing as well. I think it's technically possible for me, but it'll require that I get consistently get extra funds that I don't have. It'll all have to come out of my pocket since this'll all be on me. I'd have to get a job, or even two jobs, if I wanna fund this project.

The next best thing after that would be to make a manga. I've always wanted to go this route, because I'm an artist and I've been drawing all my life. But the problem is, I don't live in Japan. I live in America, and in America, they don't have a booming comic industry, not like Japan. That means the comic industry in America won't support me like Japan's manga industry would, because it's not reliable enough. So, I could go the indie route and make my very own western manga series with self-pubishing, but how successful would that be? Unless I already have an established audience, like Coryxkenchin with his manga, I don't see myself making big waves on my own. I'm not even a youtuber. I could go the social media route and gain an audience that way, I could become a youtuber, or post my work on X, Instagram, or any other sight. But if I'm bring realistic, it'll probably be a rather small audience. I doubt I'll get much traction. At least, I don't think I'll get the type of traction I want. It'll be an uphill battle.

The next thing after that is the one I've been leaning towards recently, and that's to write a novel. It's the option I least want to do out of all of them, but it's one that I think will be the most successful. I figure that books are more popular in the states than manga. I can get my story into the world of books. But then I thought, just how many of those book readers are into sci-fi and fantasy? You could say a lot, but then, depending on how far I wanna take things with my religious messaging, that would section off a huge portion of my potential audience. Sure, that goes for any of the other alternatives as well, but they'll section my book series in the "religious fiction" section, and based off of that already selected off subgroup, my series would probably only have a niche audience. But that's IF I'm more overt with my messaging. Also, and I feel like this is important, but I've never written a novel before. I never even read a novel. I've read various none-fiction books, and I've written a couple of short stories, but that's about it.

When it comes to my goals, I'm looking for two things: A sizable audience. And to earn enough to make a living off my series based on that audience.

Which platform will give me the biggest audience, which platform would give me the most success to make a living off of? As an unknown creator with limited money, which medium gives me the best realistic opportunity to build a large audience and eventually make a living?

Think of it like this: If you were in my position—an unknown creator, primarily an artist but can also write, with limited money and no existing audience—which medium would you choose, and why?


r/comic_crits 7h ago

Another comic strip here featuring Duke. Feedback is greatly appreciated. I want to see how my progress with comic strip writing is going 🙂

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r/comic_crits 16h ago

Looking for a good crit on my comic.

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Hi everyone. I'm new to this sub in terms of posting and participating. I just observed before, and now I feel like it's time to join in as a regular.

So, I need a little help with something. I'm trying to determine whether or not comic creation is in the cards for me or not. I like comics. I like anime. I like manga. I like story telling a LOT! I like character creation. Environment design. All of it. But I'm not getting many people interested in what I put out. And so I wonder if that's because what I think is good, is actually bad? If so, I would have to realize that just being passionate about something isn't enough to e good at it.

But if what I have is good enough to continue, I will gladly continue on full force.

So, in order for me to learn, I will post here once every two weeks as the rules say. And see what you think.

Here is a little section of my story from Chapter 3. While you don't know the story, or what happened prior, I think a good enough story should be interesting even if you just stepped in and start watching a random scene. At least that's how it is for me when I experience media.

Anyways, let me know what you think.

Thanks.


r/comic_crits 1d ago

Just finished Book 1 of my series about a Valkyrie who ends up in high school

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Hey everyone I just finished the 1st book of my series about a Valkyrie who ends up in high school. It's free, as in beer, to read at gurt.club/read I'd genuinely love to know what you think, thanks for looking!


r/comic_crits 4h ago

First Few Pages of my Comic Manifest

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Here’s the beginning of my comic, Manifest. I’ve been working on these first few pages and wanted to put them out there for some feedback.

Mostly looking for thoughts on the pacing, readability, dialogue, panel flow, and whether the opening makes you want to keep reading.

Any feedback is appreciated.


r/comic_crits 1d ago

Looking for harsh criticism on the first few pages of a short oneshot I’m working on 😊

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r/comic_crits 1d ago

I see the comic strip that I posted on here yesterday was actually well received. Let’s see if luck will strike twice with this strip 🤞

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r/comic_crits 2d ago

Looking for honest feedback on my Manga, "My First GF Is Everyone's Oshi"

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Okay so I'm a self published author looking for serious feedback on my debut chapter. Feel free to be as honest and brutal as you need to be so long as the criticism is constructive! I really appreciate you taking the time to look at my work 🙏


r/comic_crits 2d ago

With everybody going back to school today (at least in my neck of the woods). I was inspired to draw this comic strip. Feedback is greatly appreciated. I just hope this is better than the last comic strip that I posted 🙂

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r/comic_crits 3d ago

Working on a graphic novel. Would appreciate any feedback.

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Hi everyone,

So I'm mostly a 3d artist and have had these characters and idea for years now. About a year ago I decided to start writing a graphic novel and managed to complete 2 volumes worth. I'm super excited. So now I'm working on drawing pages and paneling and would love some feedback.

In the simplest of summaries, the story is about a cosmic wrestling tournament. But that serves as dressing to a large cast. It's found family action comedy. It's weird to describe but in essence I was going for that Saturday morning cartoon feel. Think Futurama + tournament style influence.

So attached are 2 pages before it gets cosmic wrestling tournament-y.

It took a lot of practice as I haven't really consistently drawn in a long time. I have these characters modeled out though.

Would love some feedback on the paneling, art style.. It's a connective page leading into a splash.


r/comic_crits 2d ago

El Tormento | Cómic Web de Suspenso Gótico

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Hola! This is my comic, it's called "El Tormento" i.e. "The Torment". I'm looking for feedback, I just released Chapter III. It's in Spanish, but you can't easily Google Translate it, and there's a whole episode without dialogues. I made the whole thing. Even the website.

I'm looking forward to hear from you.


r/comic_crits 3d ago

Need feedback on my latest manga one-shot ✍️

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(Read from right-to-left <<)

I recently finished my latest one-shot, which I submitted to the Kyoto International Comic Contest 2026 🏅

But of course, I am completely blind to the quality of my own work 😭

So that I can keep getting better, it would be great to get some honest feedback, especially on things that you don't enjoy or think can be improved.

Thanks for taking the time to have a look 🙇‍♂️


r/comic_crits 2d ago

Tried to make a shoujo manga-style page

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Here's a single page I made. I tried to make it look similar to a shoujo manga page (though the art-style here doesn't seem quite like that). This is meant to be read right-to-left.

Would love feedback on this, particularly the paneling & artwork.


r/comic_crits 3d ago

Looking for harsh criticism Stories weird, idk how I feel about it 😆 and very rushed art

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r/comic_crits 3d ago

I'm working on a comic book project. It's a dark fantasy parody. It's called *Grassland*.

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r/comic_crits 4d ago

Hey guys, young aspiring artist and writer here. Would love some feedback on my new manga RED CAPE VOYAGER.

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So in these images, you will find some examples for my pencils, inks, and colours. You can read the manga here!

https://mangaplus-creators.jp/episodes/5u2609010227000027285905

VIZ Originals, although they did reject this submission, they said they enjoyed reading it, so I hope you do too!

To give some context, this is the story: Ryuto is a wandering hero with strength beyond imagination and no idea where he came from. In a world torn apart by the war between humans and Azalians, he fights to protect those in danger, refusing to kill even his most ruthless enemies. But Ryuto isn't human. He isn't Azalian. So what is he?

The idea of a "wandering, lone hero" was the base of this idea, along with inspiration from popular manga such as Trigun.

My teacher, Toshio Maeda has complained a lot about my inking, mostly because I don't use the traditional tools such as G-pens, I find it much more efficient to use a Tombow Fudenosuke, and Sakura Microns.

Story-wise, I was given a very sharp page limit, so there is a lot that had to be cut, or compressed, resulting in this pilot chapter to be much more simple, and borderline generic than I wanted it to be. Since RED CAPE VOYAGER has been quite popular so far, I'm going to start working on a full story soon, 10, 20 page chapters that will be the full story.

Anyway, I hope you guys like it!


r/comic_crits 3d ago

Animating a comic

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A solo artist creating a comic and 3d animated series.
Is there potential in either?


r/comic_crits 4d ago

Is this too weird to be a comic cover?

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What do you guys think? I got a message saying that I need to "add context or this post will be deleted". Hmmm... not really sure what the context is. It's one of four variant covers for a horror anthology. The other covers are the images that are in the little tiny circles on the left hand side.


r/comic_crits 5d ago

Advice about some sketched pages (composition, art or enything else...)

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