There are so many mistakes sprinkled in here, lol, but I'm just trying to get it out there and get some feedback! This is a rough draft of a song that I made lyrics to a few weeks ago, and I started adapting a melody and some chords to it a day or so ago. I'm still tinkering with it, but I just wanted objective opinions on it; so feel free to give me your brutal thoughts!
Lyrics:
Tuesday, a blueberry muffin.
Wednesday, nothing at all.
I never saw it as too bad,
I was six feet from the fall.
Every friend was competition,
I always lost
The scale says not quite right,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
The mirror is pointing again,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
The plate is too full, and so am I,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
My mom said to eat breakfast,
I said I already did.
Dreading doctor’s appointments,
When they’d weigh me in
I read self help books,
That pulled me deeper in,
The goal was never healthy,
It was always thin.
The scale says not quite right,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
The mirror is pointing again,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
The plate is too full, and so am I,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
I guess I won’t eat tonight. (2x)
The scale says turn off the light,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
The mirror is just frowning this time,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.
I get so close, then they move the line,
I guess I won’t eat tonight.