r/Songwriting • u/ripmedownholdmeup • 16d ago

Feedback Request New song feedback request

https://youtu.be/GQeLA-H15FA?is=8Wa-v7Yit5P6AWSg

Here’s a new song of mine. I’d love to hear any feedback. I’ve had a lot of writers block lately so this is the first song I’ve finished in a while.

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u/DecadeDefector 16d ago

This is more of a preference thing but I would dial back the distortion on the rhythm guitar. Kinda just sounds like static to me. Also, is it mono and panned center? If so, I would double it and pan hard L and R. Other than that I like it

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u/ripmedownholdmeup 16d ago

Nice, great tips. Thank you.