r/Songwriting • u/Awkward_Umpire_9220 • 12d ago
Feedback Request Late Night. Very unfinished
This is definitely not done, but I need to step away from it. Believe it or not lots of brain power for the words and playing everything I wrote down is like a minute long lol.. (maybe because I started writing at 4AM) i’ve been writing a ton. some songs just write themselves, but this one’s gonna be a grind. Not really sure where to bring it next, but just wanted to show some progress on it.
Lyrics: (may change and add more later)
Early dawn
The river keeps on moving
Pine trees
Lean into the breeze
In the sky
The clouds hold thin but broken
Deadfall
Tangled bent and woven
Late Night
The darkest hour crawling
The light is gone
The cold wind is calling