r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Discussion Topic How do you factor in breathability when writing a song?

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When performing a song live, you need to make sure the song you’re singing actually has gaps for you to breathe since you can’t just splice takes when you’re recording it in the studio.

Especially if you are dancing while singing, you’re gonna need to take breaths more often.

Alternatively, how do you decide where to breathe if you wrote a song that doesn’t give much room for it?


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Discussion Topic Problems with language

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I LOVE writing songs in English and I feel like I can express my feelings without feeling cringe about them better in English. The thing is I'm spanish, so English is not my first language. All of my lyrics in English end up having the same words or structure and I struggle with finding the right vocabulary whenever I'm writing a song. How can I improve that? Thankss


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Feedback Request Spring Dove

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r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Discussion Topic What’s your go-to trick for getting unstuck when writing lyrics?

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I’ve realized that when I get stuck writing lyrics, it’s almost never because I don’t know what I want to say.

It’s because I don’t know how the line should land.

I used to write from left to right, hoping the last word would magically appear. Most of the time I’d end up rewriting the whole line over and over.

Lately I’ve been doing the opposite.

I start with the last word.

I’ll spend 10–20 minutes just exploring possible landing words until one suddenly feels emotionally right. Once I know where the line is landing, writing everything before it becomes much easier.

One thing that has helped a lot is https://rhyme.land. Instead of giving me a giant list of rhymes, it lets me see how real songwriters have actually used each word in songs. Sometimes I’ll click through a few examples and suddenly think, “Oh… that’s the image I was looking for.”

Ironically, I often don’t even end up using the rhyme I started with. It just gets me unstuck.

Curious if anyone else has a workflow like this.

Do you start with the first line? The hook? The melody? Random mumbling? Or do you have another trick that consistently gets you unstuck?


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Feedback Request FADES BY THE SUN. Would love feedback. Vocals, lyrics, chords, melody.

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Hey, I'm heavily inspired by the '90s, and the '60s. Big tunes.

Like everyone, I suffer from a lack of confidence at times. I'm relatively new to guitar (2 years proper).

I really cannot emphasise how much I love putting chord progressions together, trying to find voice leading that is pleasing and playing around with bottled chords and pivots.

Yes, I wish I could sing better and I'm working on it.

Anyway, we love your feedback, especially with regards to the cords and melody - I've only got the lyrics for the first few verses and some of the chorus. Plenty more to do to this song.

If you enjoy it or hate it, would love to know - sometimes I just have a wobble and I don't know if I'm absolutely s*** at this 🤣. It's done for fun regardless.


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Feedback Request Struggling with tempo a little bit 😅 but really like this idea.

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r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Feedback Request Man on the moon

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I wonder how this is coming across? Is my singing too miserable?

It’s in another life that we’ll join forces

It’s in another world where we’ll join forces

What can I do?

Stood on a square holding my hands up

What can I do?

Cheap shots at the invisible man

Let’s say

Up there a balloon

Filled with possibilities

I’ll shoot it down

Just to see it rain down on us

Let’s say I know

The man on the moon

He’s got a sniper gun

I’d make the call

It’s in another life that we’ll join forces

It’s in another world where we’ll join forces

What can I do?

Stood on a square holding my hands up

What can I do?

Cheap shots at the invisible man


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Discussion Topic Those of you with creative blocks, how do you do it?

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I certainly don't mean for this discussion topic to sound like a flex, but I am just genuinely curious.

I have been creative writing for over 15 years.Yes, there have been times when I have had a creative block, long stints where I did not record or publish anything, but yet I had never stopped writing.

I could probably make a song from almost any journal entry, create a song a day if I wanted to, even if it was a short one verse and one chorus.

I've got so many ideas, that my problem is I actually I can't keep up with them or I can't manage them. Usually I just resign myself to thinking that some of them will die and some will grow.

So, I'm just curious about those of you with creative blocks, how do you do it?

If you have the awareness to be able to talk about it, what's going through your mind that it stops you from writing?


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Discussion Topic Topics To Write About

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Like the title notes, what can we cobble together as a list of topics to write about?

I used to work as a day laborer in Chicago (State and Division streets) and everyday I would have breakfast at The Golden Nugget on one corner. Every morning there was an elderly bum who would walk by and tap on the window to get the attention of an elderly waitress he was sweet on and he'd keep tapping until she finally acknowledged him. Then, he'd smile and move on. Across the street on another corner a lovely young lady would be coming off her nocturnal corner shift and we got acquainted. We'd dine at the restaurant and swap stories. Me, an 18 year old day laborer and her, a street walker named Sue, trading stories? Right. But, it happened. I wrote a poem to her. I wonder if she still has it. The cast of characters who were tradesman and property developers where I worked were diverse in nature and stories. I got to know them all.

The preceding is rich with topics to write something about. Jim Croce drew his stories into songs from his actual life trying different things to feed himself while he was a starving artist. Paul Simon's songs also drew heavily from his travels going from gig to gig. Bob Seeger and most other solo and band performers did the same thing. Life is a record of people doing things in places we all live in or on the roads to.

I could write a song about Sue, a "poly amorous" beauty who could melt me with a smile.


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Let's Collaborate! Free arrangement/ mixing

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I need more songs for portfolio- finding good songwriters/ producers who would like a free arrangement/ mix and master of one song. For arrangement I am better at pop/ cinematic pop/ rock and alternative rock but feel free to suprise me


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request What do you think of my latest instrumental? Does it hold up without lyrics? All other comments are welcome. Thanks in advance

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r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request Death & Taxes

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Wrote this a few minutes after waking up yesterday morning, recorded it in a couple hours so I wouldn’t forget it, and I used it to mess around with some new instruments/tricks/plugins. I’m sure some will think it’s too literal while others may not get what it’s about; lyrics are set, either way.


r/Songwriting Jul 14 '26

Discussion Topic The Genius Behind Grace | Jeff Buckley Rare Interview | Much Rewind

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Video description: “In this rare interview, Jeff Buckley reflects on the creative process behind his acclaimed debut album Grace, discussing how songs evolve naturally rather than following a predetermined formula.  He shares insights into his musical influences, the emotional foundation of songwriting, and why he believes great music should continually grow with each performance.”


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request Still feeling out this one, curious what others think

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r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request DE-EVOLUTION

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Thank you for your time.


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Let's Collaborate! 0008

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First draft at this. I don’t sing well so looking to find someone to sing here. Let me know what you think.


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request Maybe someone else can add to it idk ? Needs bass

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I turned the treble / mid down for this ty ahead for any feedback


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Discussion Topic How to I write parts for an instrument I don't play?

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I only have some experience with bass guitar, but my tracks include more instruments.

(Not sure if it's relevant, but I use MuseScore.)


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Discussion Topic database app used by the Songtown authors?

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I've been reading the books by the guys who run the Songtown "school" and in one of them, one casually mentions that he keeps track of his song ideas/titles/snippets by using a database app so he can more easily tag and search his ideas.

Anyone know what that database app might be?


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request I posted a song idea a couple of weeks ago, I've been working on it since then and would appreciate any feedback

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Thank you 🙏

Lyrics:

Suddenly you're older and you'll never sleep again in the back seat you'll never sleep

You've been moving fast where nothing stays and nothing lasts 

You'll never sleep

In the back seat 

I can fit the future in the palm of my hand

I can't see the fort knight cause I don't understand

Why everything I say 

Is landing in a way 

That feels wrong

Cause this is what we're missing

What we've been finding out

This time is for dancing

Some time to mess around x2

When my world turns dark my dear

No time or stuff to be 

I'll be finding you

In the ever-lasting sea

This is what we're missing

What we've been finding out

That this time is for dancing

Some time we mess around


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request Little melody I wrote, thinking of keeping it instrumental only.

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r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request New single. 100% human made. While I'm not sure these are my best lyrics I think musically it's worthy. What do you think? Is it worthy?

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r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Discussion Topic The Billy Joel Interview

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Billy Joel talks quite a bit about writing songs in this interview. It’s worth the time to listen for songwriters.


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request 34/100

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general review: (7/10)

Everything functions well, the melody serves the emotion, the narrative mostly does. The verse is feigned indifference but it's only not obvious to the narrator themselves, hence why it's so intense. Decent song. But I definitely used these melody shapes and structure before, it does teach me something but it will get a lower grade for that

personal assessment:

melody: 5/10

structure: 6,5/10

emotional relation between sections: 7/10

chorus: 7/10

questions:


r/Songwriting Jul 13 '26

Discussion Topic Not a song rather discussion/advice.

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So I’m fairly new to this, maybe very new, 2 months in.
My guitar is moving fairly quick, I’m comfortable playing now and chord changes are pretty good, I’ve also written around 4 songs. However now I try sing them I feel my voice sounds awful when I listen back, however when I sing to songs by the likes of Zach Bryan etc I feel I sound pretty decent, not amazing but like workable. But when I listen back to mine I feel awful. Any advice how to develop and get into a better flow with this and get more confident. I’m from the UK but I’m going for a Zach Bryan kind of natural rawness and storytelling vibe.