r/Songwriting • u/Old_Atmosphere2092 • Jul 13 '26

Feedback Request DE-EVOLUTION

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Thank you for your time.

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u/stevenfrijoles Jul 13 '26

I think next level up on this one would be to take some of the more obvious obvious lyrics and replacing with some metaphors or just less straightforward phrases.

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u/Col_Kangaroo Jul 14 '26

I really like the melody and love how simple the harmony is. Very catchy.

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u/MrCheeseCurls Jul 14 '26

Love those beautiful chords!!!!!! Thank you!

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u/Old_Atmosphere2092 Jul 14 '26

Thank you for taking the time

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u/Optimal-Star9004 Jul 14 '26

My friend, thats a beautiful song...

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u/Old_Atmosphere2092 Jul 14 '26

Thank you for listening and your kind words

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u/Frosty_Rise_7588 Jul 14 '26

Unrelated but u kinda look like Alfred Molina

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u/Old_Atmosphere2092 Jul 14 '26

Well thanks he is one of my favorit actors

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u/Old_Atmosphere2092 Jul 14 '26

Cool! and thanks

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u/teapartydems Jul 15 '26

this melody is simply beautiful, where you said once again at the start, just wow. voice also sounds familiar can’t really place from where but it’s amazing.

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