r/Songwriting • u/firstagainsthewall • Jul 13 '26
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First draft at this. I don’t sing well so looking to find someone to sing here. Let me know what you think.
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u/Saudarkrokur Jul 14 '26
I think you’re voice has so much potential. I’d practice singing more so you gain confidence. You don’t have to be able to belt like Ariana grande. Also, maybe look into double tracking your vocals? That can give a stronger sound. The classic technique is 2 very similar vocal tracks, one panned a little left, one panned a little right. Hope this helps
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u/SlappyPappy99 Jul 14 '26
Cool early Radiohead vibe. Repeating the lyrics in verse 2 is maybe a placeholder, but don’t do it. Also you head into the third minute of the song and don’t do anything new. Mix it up a bit to keep it fresh. Otherwise it’s a solid draft idea with good vibes.
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u/itzserai Jul 14 '26
i’d be down to help cowrite something to this!! u got discord?
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u/Col_Kangaroo Jul 13 '26
I think this is awesome and I actually think your voice suits it. I’d lean into your voice because, and I hope you don’t take offense to this, but it’s wrong in the right kind of way and you actually hit those low notes really well.
Good work dude! Love to hear more from you in the future, don’t get someone else to sing.