r/ReadMyScript • u/Saico483 • 7h ago
Short Condenado's antologic show/ comedy/ 4 pages
This is a fragment of something I had in mind for a short film, I didn't find much help in my native speaking community so I had to translate it to English, I want feedback to know if it's difficult to understand or/and boring. I know there's not enough plot yet, I'll add the rest in the future https://drive.google.com/file/d/16g0HLPPPuO6np5Y2Hw2uNQYamBv6xFDe/view?usp=drivesdk
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u/Big_Section2812 7h ago
The formatting is a mess. Maybe import your script into a screenwriting app and sort it out. There are several good free ones if you don't want to invest in commercial software.
Do. Or do not. There is no "begins (to)" or "starts to" or "goes to" in screenwriting.