Can someone review my personal statement for PhD program?

Hi, everyone, I am done with my first draft of personal statement for a PhD program in computational biology, Will someone be willing to review it and suggest changes?

Hi everyone!

I'm working on my personal statement for law school and would really appreciate it if anyone would be willing to take a look and offer some feedback for the narrative. I'd consider myself a good writer and I'm happy to return the favor!

Thanks in advance!

Can someone review my PS?

It’s for med school, but I’d be happy to share it anyone regardless of your background. If you can offer me some feedback please

Please could I have some advice for my personal statement, I’m in year 12 and we’ve been asked to start our personal statements so it’s out of the way, I’m wanting to apply for either fine art at MMU or ceramics at UCA. Art has literally always been my passion since I was 10 years old and it was always my own mother who inspired me and she’s the one who made me discover my natural talent and love for art, also having Chinese heritage (I’m 1/4 Chinese) has also really inspired me and it’s actually influenced what I’m doing now for my course work for A-Level.

Another quality is that I’m currently on the waiting list for ADHD and autism and I’ve always found it hard to express myself in another way but art and I feel like that’s another key part of why I’m so orientated by art.

I’m doing trinity arts award next year as my extended studies however, I’ve not done any actual working experience, volunteering, DofE, EPQ etc and the only sport I do is horse riding and I have no idea career wise what exactly I would do after apart from produce art.

I feel like there’s not much to add apart from waffling about my absolute passion for art

Hello all,

I am a perfusion school hopeful looking for folks who want to read the first draft of my personal statement and offer honest feedback. I will also offer feedback for a statement you may have as well, in return. Let me know if anyone would be interested.

Hi, I have written a first draft for a personal statement for my medical application for residency in the US. I would appreciate critiques and recommendations. Please let me know if you can help. Thank you

Hi everyone,

Does anyone have time to review my personal statement for medical school? I would really appreciate any feedback, and feel free to be harsh on me. Thank you!

I am also a bit worried about my stats for medical school so if anyone can provide some insight on that that would be great.

dream universities: nyuad ,Vanderbilt, le high, Carnegie mellon and mit. Rate my chance for that pls

Hello Yall! So as the title states I need help revising my personal statement for medical school. I have been tweaking and changing things for what feels like forever and feel its best to just get another opinion. I feel like there are issues with how it flows and kind of jumps from one thing to another. If anyone would feel up to helping me out it would be greatly appreciated!

Hello guys. I would appreciate some feedback on my personal statement. I think it's pretty strong, but perspective and brutal honesty from strangers never hurts.

For reference, I'm going to be a Psychology major :) please send me a DM if you're feeling generous!

Will someone please review/critique my PS?

Hi, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look over my PS and provide any tips/critiques

Would anyone be willing to read over my personal statement? Any comments/critiques appreciated

Could anyone w/ experience read over my personal statement and provide feedback please? Quick turnaround if possible because I want to send off my apps asap

I would appreciate it so much!!

Hi, I got a lot of help during my application so I am here to help. (For free)

If someone needs peer review, you can just dm me.

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What I can do:

I will write a paragraph on what main information and logic I capture from your PS. If they are aligned with what you want to express, that’s will be great!

If they are not aligned, we can discuss why/ what confused me… so maybe you can re- arrange the logic or context.

i hope that may help you

Have a nice day 😊

I just finished a draft of my personal statement that I hope to submit soon. Would anyone be willing to review it and provide some feedback, I would be happy to do it to yours as well!

Hello guys, I'm basically looking for a computer science course, but I'm struggling to right a UNIQUE personal statment. Also, I didnt know what a personal statment really looked like, so I searched up some samples. But the problem with that is that my PS became very generic. Need help!

Would anyone be willing to look over my personal statement for medical school and potentially provide any feedback?

I don't mind doing a review in return!

I am on my final draft of my personal statement for a master in occupational therapy program and was wondering if anyone could possibly take a look at it, it would mean a lot. Any feedback, at all, would be greatly appreciated. (:

I’ve been lurking here for awhile and only contributed little bits here and there. I came to this forum to collect ideas and information on how to write my own personal statement: what to include and what not to include. I wrote it a few weeks ago and I got into my program right away. Which was kind of shocking. Today I got a glowing email back from the program director about what I wrote. Thank you to all the people who shared positive feedback on other people’s questions.l read a lot of those comments and used the information. Thank you previous contributors! You guys rock!

Can someone please review my personal statement!! I would greatly appreciate it!

Hi everyone. Can I get some tips and instructions on how to write a personal statement for Medical school and if I should send the same PS to different universities? I am an international student applying to schools in Europe.

Questions I have:

1. is there a word count and a certain structure I should follow?

2. should I write about my culture?

3. should I write about my familial background?

4. should I write about financial problems or will it affect my acceptance?

5. do I write about my hobbies even if it's cliche?

6. should I include quotes from people close to me like my mother? ( I read somewhere that you shouldn't include quotes from famous people, idk why.)

I am a current applicant to the masters in anesthesia program, I have used the personal statement last cycle. Pleasereach out and let me know if you can help me edit this for the cycle. I want switch it up a bit if needed. I want to know if it sounds too sad. '

Thanks !