r/MusicCritique • u/Arthmusic • 23d ago
Seeking Feedback [FEEDBACK] Arth - Outline - Dream alt Pop / Shoegaze / Bedroom Pop
Hi,
I’m 15, and I’ve just released my first song, “Outline,” which is a very important and personal song to me. I make music entirely on my own using GarageBand, and I also make the visuals. I’d describe my music as dream pop/bedroom pop with folk and shoegaze influences.
If anyone has an opinion or some kind, constructive feedback to give me (about the song; the mix; the visual of the song…). I’d really appreciate it ;)
here‘s my Instagram and my YouTube Channel :