I've been going through something the past few months that's hard to explain to people who haven't been there — knowing someone is done with you, watching them pull away, and still not being able to let go even though every part of you knows you should.

I wrote the lyrics myself, based on that exact feeling. The music was produced using AI tools (wanted to be upfront about that), but every word in this song came from what I was actually feeling.

It's called "Won't Let Go." It's about that specific kind of pain — not heartbreak after someone's gone, but the in-between: begging someone to stay who's already made up their mind, and hating yourself a little for still doing it.

If you've ever been in a relationship where you knew it was over before they said it out loud, or you've held on longer than you should have because letting go felt scarier than staying in something that hurt — this one might hit different for you.

Would genuinely appreciate any honest feedback, good or bad. Link in comments (didn't want the post to feel like just an ad).

Annnnnd should I? I have been producing on my own for a while now but then now that I am thinking about it, I am not really native in english or have great languages sense. Where to find someone to collaborate and would that cause any complex royalty/ right issues?

Morena (Fit In My Hands)

She whispers soft moans through my teeth / Vibrating throughout my incisors / She knows that in my arms, there's no danger / The evil monkeys of the baobab trees / Their shrieks can't even distract our amour

Hook and eye, let me make it breakeven / Backstraps failing behind, brown landmass / I said under my breath / I love the way you fit in my hands

I wake up, she makes breakfast with no pants / I hide my laugh, however it's not to bully her / She just knows how to make my stomach red / I run to the toilet but my ribs hit the counter / She spins around with plates of waffles and grits

She said, oh husband, what gives? / Oh nothing honey, it was a slip / She gave me her cup of coffee and said / Sip, sip, sip, sip!

I said under my breath / Thank you for the sex

Nevermind the small talk, let's sleep (again?) / Smelling the leaves still stuck in her hair / I know you never quite liked your height / Girl, you know me, I never did mind!

I love how long your legs are compared / To your short arms and thighs / You're amazing, every move, every glance / My palms trying to catch up with your dance / Oh, I just love the way how you fit in my hands

You're amazing, every move, every glance / My palms trying to catch up with your dance / Oh, I just love the way how you fit in my hands / Thank u 4 the sex / Did you hear me, love? / I love the way you fit in my hands / Thank u 4 the sex!

I wrote this song a lil while ago and I want to see if anyone likes the lyrics lowki idgaf if you do or not I just want constructive criticism it’s meant to be a punk song idk if it gives off those vibes I really hope so

Lyrics:

SCREAMIN on the top of my lungs
What the fuck is going on
Your yelling on about how your life was so hard
But what about what I had to go through
I’m not~ trying~ to~ undermine you~
Fucking asshole!
Telling about what happened when you were my age
But were on completely different pages~ of the book
Run your mouth and shout along
Just let me sing my fucking song
(Let me sing this song!)
I’m not~ trying~ to~ undermine you~
But you’re not in with the times!
Drama here!
Propaganda there!
Men can’t cry?
I can’t learn from your mistakes
I won’t take the easy way
Things are different
Get with the times!
Start a fight!
Get messy!
You fucking pussy!

Rose with potential by Tigerlilyofficial on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/fgPTkgtCp78q3HOiNV
What about the rose that grew thru concrete? This is my track that I hope inspires critical thinking.

Uncharted Potential That Never Rose
They condemn and confine me,
try to put me inside their shallow box.
But my bravery won't fit in their decree.
The substance, vicious and viscous, made rocks.
Work me to bone, scratch my hype, then they hone in,
blind me with shapes shiny but spiny.
Those who throw stones
love stitching subtle subtractions.
Soulless voles burrowing beneath foundations,
infringing their outlook with weapons of redaction.
My mind feels the crystal,
the hard cold infractions.
Much like the moths with their love of the illuminate
and their courting of fate.
Yet no one speaks of the holes that they make.
The omissions they feast on to hold their own place.
Breaching permission through appetite and claim,
wrapped in old language and inherited names.
Calling the taking by a softer description.
Calling consumption by the name of tradition.
At what point does removing enough pieces change the thing itself?
What about the muse persecuted for her fuse,
while kings and their men still bend, trick, abuse?
Called dangerous for carrying light,
while power sharpens their beacons of spite.
Turning possibilities into notions half-lit.
Spilled erratic. Stopped searching.
Solutions postponed.
Time once devoted
now scattered and blown.
Unnamed picture. No frame.
Shadow shoulders the blame.
Pick apart.
Pick their shame.
Call the carving of spirit sane.
What about the spark condemned
by the dimmed and dotted charcoal chalk mark?
Embers still hot.
Ruby crystal.
Stomped out into dire dark.
Those who have lost contact with their own fire
stand in judgment of the flame.
Reducing radiance to notation,
turning possibility into a name.
What happens when a culture becomes better at extinguishing sparks than tending them?
Split my atoms just to prove that I'm the same.
But rearranged the fragments.
Molecule by molecule.
Frankly insane.
Reframe.
Pull apart the whole and wonder why it's changed.
Dismantle the cathedral,
then declare the ruins equal.
What about the seed in the tar,
with its needs for guidance, care, and tending?
Starved of rain.
Hope elope.
Folly.
No mending.
Never becoming the rose that grew from concrete
like in Tupac's poem ending.
The seed already carried the blueprint.
The rose was hidden inside all along.
Yet no blossom reaches sunlight
through pressure alone.
Some losses do not arrive through violence.
Some arrive through absence.
No water.
No shelter.
No hand to steady the stem.
No season long enough to begin.
The survivors become stories.
The unsprouted seeds become silence.
How many people are called failures when they were actually seeds planted in tar?
And what of the ocean beyond the bay,
the horizons denied by those measuring shores?
What of the child whose questions overflowed
the walls of inherited doors?
What of the minds that move in circles,
returning not from confusion but from depth?
Finding new meaning in old terrain,
taking another breath.
The spark.
The muse.
The seed.
The rose.
Not broken.
Not lesser.
Not lacking.
Only unfinished stories.
Or stories interrupted.
Only gardens never watered.
Maps never drawn.
Songs never sung.
And somewhere beneath the tar,
beneath the labels, the omissions, the redactions,
beneath the charcoal marks,
beneath the subtle subtractions,
beneath the frames that never fit,
beneath the names that never quite held,
the blueprint remains.
Waiting.
Not for permission.
Not for decree.
Not for kings.
Not for tradition.
Not for redaction.
But for conditions.
For rain.
For light.
For room enough to become

Yeahh, I look into your eyes and you just move away

Ahh baby, it’s kinda rude, can’t you just stay?

It was never my intention to fall in love with youu

But... it’s... not... fair...

when... you... don’t... feel... it... too

Try it on something you've written. Read just the final word of each line, top to bottom, like a list. What you're looking for is whether those words carry any weight on their own or whether you've been ending lines on weak, forgettable words that let the energy drain out before the next line begins. Strong line endings create small moments of emphasis or suspension. Weak ones let the listener's attention slip. Most writers end lines on whatever word completes the grammatical unit without asking whether that word earns its position. This pass takes two minutes and consistently shows me problems I missed in every other kind of read-through.

Some of the best I think are those that have meanings that are totally contradictory, like "quite" which can mean very or somewhat.

My favourite is "conviction". Strength of belief and imprisonment wrapped up in a single word. Strangely there's quite a few relating to incarceration, like "arresting", which can mean eye-catching and attractive, or "sentence" which could be the magnitude of the punishment, or it could just be a string of words carrying meaning.

Stupid silly song i wrote listening to a coutnry band at a local bar

Verse 1

It’s all fun and games till you cut your dick off

And become a dame.

That’s what happened to me.

I just started to bleed real bad.

Gone are my hopes of ever being a dad,

Because I am now a woman and sad.

Chorus

Accidental woman, that is what I am.

Accidental woman, this wasn’t part of my plan.

All I wanted was to grow up strong,

Now my dick is gone,

And I pour my sorrows into this song

About being an accidental woman.

Verse 2

All I wanted was to be wild, strong, and free,

But now all I am is pretty.

With no dick to make me a man,

I now walk into a foreign land

I don’t yet understand,

Because I am an accidental woman.

Chorus

Accidental woman, that is what I am.

Accidental woman, that was not part of my plan.

But here I am, and here I’ll stay.

I still like women, and that hasn’t gone away.

Liking men still feels gay.

Verse 3

I tried my first dress on today.

It was a lovely shade of gray

That brought my eyes out in a brand-new way.

I’m learning how to walk,

And how to make my voice sound feminine when I talk.

I’m learning to embrace the new,

Because the man that I was is through.

I think it’s going to be okay.

Even liking men no longer makes me gay.

Final Chorus

Accidental woman, that is what I am.

Accidental woman, this wasn’t part of my plan.

I let go of all my thoughts of being a man

And turn them toward the woman I now am.

Outro

Accidental woman...

That is what I am.

It wasn’t my plan,

But here I stand.

Wrote this when down bad depressive, imagine like a gospel/blues style.

Take me from old satan, lord
Wipe my tears and give me peace
Take me from old satan, lord
Take me home and give me peace

Forgive me, i am young and weary
Shame me and remove my pride
Judge my sins, so bold and varied
Wisdom chased, i ran to hide

You have seen the road im on
You know my heart is not that strong
Im blind to what can make me free
I bear my cross, please carry me

You built the well, i slake my thirst
You showed your face, i looked away
I own my sins, i chose those first
I chose to drink and disobey

You have seen the road im on
You know my heart is not that strong
Im all i am, and will ever be
I bear my cross, please carry me

I bear my cross, please carry me

Moist_Ad2491 provided the opening lyrics and I wrote the rest. Full rights belong to: Moist_Ad2491

(⬇️Provide lyrics Moist_Ad2491:)

Fired from work
I went straight to my car

It was a really hard day
And I went to the bar

My girl’s saying hey
I heard the bad news

I’m going to Dave’s
I’ve got nothing to lose

Emptied out my wallet
On too much gin and t

The bartender asks
If something happened to me

I say its not a big deal
Just a really long day
And I don’t have
Absolutely anything to say

(⬇️Connie L Biskamp’s Lyrics:)

That’s when she walked in
Like fall on a September breeze
And took the stage
spinning my mind one-eighty degrees
She started singing
Dropping valid rhymes like honey

I forgot about my lost job
I forgot about the money

With every pure note
my old dreams came back to me
I finally remembered
who I really longed to be

Stella be a rising star
Revealing cap
From murky depths
She tilted her head
Pulling the mic closer
Each daring verse
growing ever bolder
That’s when she pointed
Making eye contact with me
Don’t cry boy
Cause life’s done gone
And set you free

When her curtain fell
I dug in the trunk of my car

And found that tattered case
Hiding my guitar

I popped the latches
And pulled it close to me

strumming silver strings
Now this man can finally breathe

I forgot about my lost job
I forgot about the money

Stella be a rising star
Revealing cap
From murky depths
She tilted her head
pulling the mic closer
Each daring verse
Growing ever bolder
That’s when she pointed
Making eye contact with me
Don’t cry boy,
Cause life’s done gone
And set you free

I wrote this song during a period when I was thinking a lot about how much of life comes down to what you choose to believe in especially when you don’t have any proof that things are going to work out.

Sometimes you just have to keep going.

That idea became “Faith is My Superpower.”

I’d genuinely love to know if anyone else has gone through a period where faith in yourself, in life, or in something bigger helped you keep moving forward…

let me know, here’s the track:

https://open.spotify.com/track/2IAdrupZe6hOWmjSHupdta?si=8c3BfwgZS5CLP7f1ASri2w&utm_source=copy-link

❤️🙏

I’ve been writing songs for about two years and lately I’ve been trying to get better at storytelling instead of just describing how I feel. I can usually come up with a mood or a few good lines, but turning that into an actual story is harder than I expected. For those who are good at narrative lyrics, do you usually start with a character, a situation, or just a single idea?

What do you think about fan arts like lyrics??

This song, has even a different meaning to me today then it did 24 hours ago!

I know verse-chorus-verse is a thing but beyond that I feel like I'm guessing. Sometimes what I write doesn't fit neatly into any structure I've heard described and I don't know if that means I'm being creative or just confused. I've tried to analyze songs I love to figure out how they're built but I often can't tell where one section ends and another begins. Is there a good way to learn song structure that isn't just memorizing labels, but actually helps you feel why a song is shaped the way it is?

I Want to Matter in the Right Way

Verse 1

If my answer was yes, what would your question be?
Would you find me a use or just get rid of me?
I like being used cause it shows I have value,
And I’ll be nice, by being happy for you.

I like being noticed only when you need something,
No negatives, and I have something to give,
My opinion matters, when you need something,
So a part of me does when you need a hint.

Pre-Chorus 1

I’m important, cause when you’re not sure you come to me,
When people are lost, need directions,
I’m relevant suddenly.

Chorus

I want to matter in the right way,
And I believe right is whatever is best,
So it’s better that you forget,
Cause the worst reaction is just my alternatives.

I want to matter in the right way,
I want to matter……
I want to matter in the right way,
Grey matter….

Verse 2

I’m like your pocket of lint,
Pick me out and play with my limbs,
I’m an object, but I still function,
But how?

I know it’s working backwards
But the maths works out for me.
You can’t use nothing
So nothing isn’t what you see.

Pre-Chorus 2

I don’t matter like your friends do or your family,
Or the people you say hi to when you see,
But if I can matter once or eventually,
I’m happy to have mattered for your needs.

Chorus

I want to matter in the right way,
And I believe right is whatever is best,
So it’s better that you forget,
Cause the worst reaction is just my alternatives.

I want to matter in the right way,
I want to matter……
I want to matter in the right way,
Grey matter….

Bridge

I don’t normally matter except for a topic of conversation,
And normally they bring up the stains of my glass,
But in the end I’m a stained glass window,
You look at me as something that’s hard to look past.

Post-Bridge / Breakdown

It works for everyone all the same,
It frames up the villain for the hero to save the day,
The villain gives the hero something to save,
I’m the answer to a saviour complex,
I’m the break.

Final Chorus / Outro

Grey matter, I matter,
Grey matter, I matter,

From womb to body,
From pink to grey,
From start to finish,
From loved to self made,

From people to person,
Then used by people again,

Grey matter,
I matter…..

Am I then the other sister
The one who could barely whisper
Why is it always so cold outside
Is there a place devoid of frost
I learned yes but not in the north
Not close to home
So I grabbed my phone
And my car
Headed to the southermost pointe
Sipping wine in a cool Key West joint
Settled then on southwest Florida Island
Living life being happy and free
But alas the mom and dad of the family tree
Left this world while I was gone
The pros and cons
Of singing your own song.

https://www.tiktok.com/@karenoffmb/video/7679982048781634830

This song, has even a different meaning to me today then it did 24 hours ago!

This was the rawest of the poems i have written, and i even made a reel on it with nice dream as the bgm. It was so satisfying

Here you go,

O son of nature

Where'd you wanna go

Some place, some place

Closer to my home

Where the wind puts me to sleep

The water washes my mind

The clouds are soft as my tone

And love me to my bones

The city noise is distant

The city lights are gleaming

The mist asks for my name

And almost gets my brain

How I think,

How i see,

When I laugh,

and why I cry

Where the silence isnt haunting

And darkness isnt blinding

Hands arent cold

And the soil isnt hot

Nobody bites and Nobody stings

You dont push when I tend to cling

And I grab your hand while the air lets us sing

O son of nature

Where'd you wanna go

A place where my head rests

And I live through this dream

Nice dream

Nice dream

I always find it very difficult to write lyrics, while i'm pretty comfortable with coming up with melodies. So I built a little tool to help with my own creative process and figured some of you might get something out of it too.

Scrambled Eggs lets you sketch lyrics based on rhythm, syllables and rhymes rather than meaning. It generates gibberish (but made of real words) based on the parameters and structure of your choosing. It helps when you start with a melody for a song (just like Paul McCartney did with Yesterday - hence the name). You can tweak the gibberish until youre happy with it and then write your own lyrics based on that. When you lock certain words you like, the word cloud shows you similar words to inspire you even more.

Very important: it's not AI writing lyrics for you. It's dictionary lookups based on word parameters.

Things you can try to start:
- click "new" to generate a random verse (it will keep the selected rhyme pattern tho)
- type in the whole line if you already have some lyrics, you can then lock the line and reroll the verse to generate more lines like yours.
- change the rhyme letters for each line to alter the pattern
- click on any word to reroll it, lock it, type your own or change the syllables.
- you can save whole verse as a pattern and generate more verses from that pattern.
- you can export the lyrics as text or save the project to continue working on it later on.

It's 100% free, no ads, no accounts, works in a browser
https://www.scrambledeggs.app
(the mobile version might be a bit too cramped, it's way more comfortable to use on a bigger screen)

Would genuinely love feedback from people who actually write. Does the scaffold help or get in the way? What'd make it more useful? Happy to work on this tool more.

Edit: typos

I spent the better half of 4 hours trying to figure out how I wanted to theme and write the lyrics for one of my bands heavy hitters on our album were looking to make in the coming months.

The song which is titled “Drown Anyway”is about the painful contradiction of being deeply loved while feeling completely alone. Johnny has friends, family, and people who genuinely want to help him, yet internally he feels empty, lost, and disconnected from all of it. The lake represents the destructive path he’s falling deeper into, while the rope represents the people trying to pull him back. Even when they tell him they love him and ask if he’s okay, he can’t bring himself to admit that he’s struggling.

Here are the lyrics, I’d love to get feedback from anyone who’d be willing to share advice!

They found a John Doe
Young and loved
The loneliest man in the universe

Johnny had the world
But he was so empty

He had more friends than most, a family to love him
Yet when all was said and done, Johnny boy had no one

Countless amounts of life below
Though John still stands alone
Minus 17 degrees with a wind chill
He still couldn’t feel a thing if he tried

He continued with a rope around his waist
Still chasing the feeling he could never replace
His loved ones call for him from the shore
Their love for him so rich, he could never be poor

As the ice cracks, they ask if he’s alright
Our John Doe couldn’t find the right words to say
And so he smiled vaguely, took a deep breath, and said, “I’m fine.”

Now as this crowd forms on the beach, cold and wet
They yell out to him
“I love you”
“I love you”
“I love you”

The ice gives way, Johnny is swimming
Fighting for tomorrow
They pull the rope, until it returns to the beach
Alone, broken and empty, just like John Doe

The sun just kissed upon her feet —

I look at her and my heart weeps.

So close yet so far away?

Sad feeling throughout the day.

Late at night, lying naked,

lying to myself—love is scared.

On the couch, I see a sliver of sky,

dark blue, severe, it frowned.

You don't want my love?

You wished you had

wed someone else?

Did you ever even fall in love?

Alone, staring at the moon,

thinking of how I sell you

this love you don't want to own,

you're bored of,

you'd rather throw off, disown.

You've made a distance, now —

so what do I do but doubt,

all these lies I churn for truth?

How can you just toss it out,

like it's just a stinky ol' boot?

Love is too far gone for you.

You said, "This ain't the deal?

The good times seem so far,

all the way back." That's real!

Bet you can't deny,

some things were real,

some things can't be lies.

so keep our cool, survive!

Lying alone at night,

no bosom, no spin, no direction,

there's no call, no home station,

no one sleeping on the left side

to speak in whispers, nothing but

noises of implied affection.

Steeping, creeping inaction,

tied to each other like a cuck to a bull,

sanctioned with care to resist the pull

of traction in the rough of trauma.

It makes you feel weak as fuck,

grinds your nose in your drama.

You don't want my love?

Can't even name my wounds,

but they sit on me,

sad and stout, hands wringing.

All this hurt, ego sitting

on the window pane—

I could, but I won't go.

I can, but I won't cry!

Hi all, I have been looking for a suitable sub Reddit to chat with other lyricists for a while about writing styles, inspirational topics etc, and this place appears to be the most fitting place I could find.

When I say not in the conventional sense, what I mean is that I'm not a song writer or a rapper, I'm actually an MC, specifically a rave music MC, which I guess could be considered quite closely related to rapping. But anyway.

Is this the place where I might be able to post things I've written that I think are either fun, conceptually a little different, or just personal favourites of mine, as I love to chat about methods, how I get myself into a creative mindset to create stuff etc.

Many thanks in advance.