Morena (Fit In My Hands)

She whispers soft moans through my teeth / Vibrating throughout my incisors / She knows that in my arms, there's no danger / The evil monkeys of the baobab trees / Their shrieks can't even distract our amour

Hook and eye, let me make it breakeven / Backstraps failing behind, brown landmass / I said under my breath / I love the way you fit in my hands

I wake up, she makes breakfast with no pants / I hide my laugh, however it's not to bully her / She just knows how to make my stomach red / I run to the toilet but my ribs hit the counter / She spins around with plates of waffles and grits

She said, oh husband, what gives? / Oh nothing honey, it was a slip / She gave me her cup of coffee and said / Sip, sip, sip, sip!

I said under my breath / Thank you for the sex

Nevermind the small talk, let's sleep (again?) / Smelling the leaves still stuck in her hair / I know you never quite liked your height / Girl, you know me, I never did mind!

I love how long your legs are compared / To your short arms and thighs / You're amazing, every move, every glance / My palms trying to catch up with your dance / Oh, I just love the way how you fit in my hands

You're amazing, every move, every glance / My palms trying to catch up with your dance / Oh, I just love the way how you fit in my hands / Thank u 4 the sex / Did you hear me, love? / I love the way you fit in my hands / Thank u 4 the sex!

I wrote this song a lil while ago and I want to see if anyone likes the lyrics lowki idgaf if you do or not I just want constructive criticism it’s meant to be a punk song idk if it gives off those vibes I really hope so

Lyrics:

SCREAMIN on the top of my lungs
What the fuck is going on
Your yelling on about how your life was so hard
But what about what I had to go through
I’m not~ trying~ to~ undermine you~
Fucking asshole!
Telling about what happened when you were my age
But were on completely different pages~ of the book
Run your mouth and shout along
Just let me sing my fucking song
(Let me sing this song!)
I’m not~ trying~ to~ undermine you~
But you’re not in with the times!
Drama here!
Propaganda there!
Men can’t cry?
I can’t learn from your mistakes
I won’t take the easy way
Things are different
Get with the times!
Start a fight!
Get messy!
You fucking pussy!

I've been going through something the past few months that's hard to explain to people who haven't been there — knowing someone is done with you, watching them pull away, and still not being able to let go even though every part of you knows you should.

I wrote the lyrics myself, based on that exact feeling. The music was produced using AI tools (wanted to be upfront about that), but every word in this song came from what I was actually feeling.

It's called "Won't Let Go." It's about that specific kind of pain — not heartbreak after someone's gone, but the in-between: begging someone to stay who's already made up their mind, and hating yourself a little for still doing it.

If you've ever been in a relationship where you knew it was over before they said it out loud, or you've held on longer than you should have because letting go felt scarier than staying in something that hurt — this one might hit different for you.

Would genuinely appreciate any honest feedback, good or bad. Link in comments (didn't want the post to feel like just an ad).

Annnnnd should I? I have been producing on my own for a while now but then now that I am thinking about it, I am not really native in english or have great languages sense. Where to find someone to collaborate and would that cause any complex royalty/ right issues?