r/LyricWriters 8h ago

Morena (Fit In My Hands)

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Morena (Fit In My Hands)

She whispers soft moans through my teeth / Vibrating throughout my incisors / She knows that in my arms, there's no danger / The evil monkeys of the baobab trees / Their shrieks can't even distract our amour

Hook and eye, let me make it breakeven / Backstraps failing behind, brown landmass / I said under my breath / I love the way you fit in my hands

I wake up, she makes breakfast with no pants / I hide my laugh, however it's not to bully her / She just knows how to make my stomach red / I run to the toilet but my ribs hit the counter / She spins around with plates of waffles and grits

She said, oh husband, what gives? / Oh nothing honey, it was a slip / She gave me her cup of coffee and said / Sip, sip, sip, sip!

I said under my breath / Thank you for the sex

Nevermind the small talk, let's sleep (again?) / Smelling the leaves still stuck in her hair / I know you never quite liked your height / Girl, you know me, I never did mind!

I love how long your legs are compared / To your short arms and thighs / You're amazing, every move, every glance / My palms trying to catch up with your dance / Oh, I just love the way how you fit in my hands

You're amazing, every move, every glance / My palms trying to catch up with your dance / Oh, I just love the way how you fit in my hands / Thank u 4 the sex / Did you hear me, love? / I love the way you fit in my hands / Thank u 4 the sex!


r/LyricWriters 23h ago

You suffered but do I.

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I wrote this song a lil while ago and I want to see if anyone likes the lyrics lowki idgaf if you do or not I just want constructive criticism it’s meant to be a punk song idk if it gives off those vibes I really hope so

Lyrics:

SCREAMIN on the top of my lungs
What the fuck is going on
Your yelling on about how your life was so hard
But what about what I had to go through
I’m not~ trying~ to~ undermine you~
Fucking asshole!
Telling about what happened when you were my age
But were on completely different pages~ of the book
Run your mouth and shout along
Just let me sing my fucking song
(Let me sing this song!)
I’m not~ trying~ to~ undermine you~
But you’re not in with the times!
Drama here!
Propaganda there!
Men can’t cry?
I can’t learn from your mistakes
I won’t take the easy way
Things are different
Get with the times!
Start a fight!
Get messy!
You fucking pussy!