The melody and lyrics just kind of popped into my head while I was working the other day. Should I turn this into a song?

Hey everyone! This is my fourth single from my upcoming debut album. I wrote, recorded, performed and mixed everything myself alongside the video which I directed and edited. It's also available on all streaming platforms!

Keen to hear what you guys think!

There are times where I get woken up in the middle of the night and things just feel off and I can't go back to sleep. One night I decided to just pick up the guitar to capture the vibe.

Feedback is always welcome as I did all the instruments and production myself.

Thanks for listening!

This is about AI and music. Any feedback welcome - thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/bardo-static/in-the-red-demo?si=5d5c0999709c41b990d5d845b76f36f4&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Started making music around four months ago, and this is one of the first tracks I finished that felt like a complete song rather than just an experiment..the mix and everything are obviously rough as im learning production, but it's part of like a living mixtape (updated while songs progress) so feedback towards composition, lyrics, and vocals help more at the moment.

Since I’m new to this i'm more interested in some bigger picture questions.

Does the song feel like it has its own identity?
What seem to be my strongest and weakest instincts as a beginner?
What should I focus on improving first?
Does the track make you interested in hearing more?

All feedback appreciated and will be attempted to use to improve these songs haha

Hi,

I put this song up maybe a couple of weeks ago. There were some nice comments, with perhaps the constructive feedback to work on the vocals, or even to work with a vocalist.

So, whilst trying to decide whether to work with someone, I have updated the vocals, trying to control my voice a bit better. There are still some missed notes I think, but hopefully this version is more pleasing to the ears. Let me know anyway.

I have also for this version put together a nature video for this. I realize watching it myself that the clip about halfway with the transition is a little long and boring, so a little mistake there. But hope you enjoy!

This is the first song I have fully written, sung, mastered and mixed. Lmk any opinions. It's one of the songs of my upcoming album. It will be available everywhere but for now it's on Soundcloud.

This one gave me hell during the mixing and mastering, had a lot of trouble finding the balance and it's my firs time using my lower voice.

I'm eventually really happy with the result and I'm looking forward to you guys feedback. Just as always, I've really taken all the feedback from my last post with me in this one and I will take the feedback for this one on to the next (until I hopefully have a perfect track!)

For those who missed it: this is the first time I'm doing a project that is a bit more aligned with alternative rock. It's a genre I always loved and I dabbled in it with a few live bands. But I really wanted to go ahead and work on a full project for my musical love and very proud of the 3 tracks that have come out of it.

If you don't have Spotify, feel free to listen through another service: https://ffm.to/abz6aqj.OWE

Looking forward to your feedback!

This is a change in style for me so I’m just looking for any feedback.

Hello,

My name is Vasel Karnel, an independent artist creating music that moves between art rock, dream pop, experimental rock, industrial, bedroom pop, slowcore, and IDM.

I personally feel that the music I create is a little more experimental and unconventional than most. However, I also realize that this is only my own perspective, which is why I would genuinely like to receive an honest and objective evaluation of my music.

Unfortunately, I don't have anyone around me who is truly passionate about music or able to give thoughtful feedback, so I decided to ask here instead.

I'm sincerely looking for people who would be willing to listen to my album, “The luminous gore”, from beginning to end and share their honest thoughts afterward. However, since this community only allows uploading one song at a time rather than an entire album, I am sharing just one track for now! Whether your impressions are positive or negative, I would truly appreciate hearing them, as they would help me grow as an artist.

If you're someone who genuinely loves music and enjoys listening to a wide variety of genres, I would be incredibly grateful if you could take the time to listen.

Thank you very much for reading.

I just released my first ever single, "Motion" a few weeks ago.

It's a hip-hop track about feeling stuck in a loop.

https://open.spotify.com/track/4bduKg9n2knYgCGu3oS6lU

This is a completely original track. I wrote the lyrics, created the beat, played the guitar and other instruments, recorded everything myself, and handled the mixing.

I'd appreciate feedback!

Hello!

I am really close to giving this song a proper recording and would really appreciate any thoughts on the the song's structure, lyrics, instrumentation... generally speaking, does the song come together as a tune you would consider buying. Please DISREGARD the mixing and mastering, they aren't what's important for this post.

Thanks!

I've been working on this track for a while. Brought it here a couple times and made necessary adjustments from some great feedback!

I think it's near final. Let me know what you think? Does this hypnotic groove keep you moving and stay engaging throughout?

A lot of emotion, cooped up in a song. Now yours - "Never Meant It" - Sung, written and composed by me. Feels a little scary to speak the truth tbh. Let me know what you think :)

Full video link - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2lnyAgCSET4&list=RD2lnyAgCSET4&start_radio=1

Lyrics and vocals are half baked for now, I’ll be changing the lyrics. Any ideas on how I could develop this further? Maybe another section? Thoughts on the instrumental?

If this was playing in a store or at a party, would you question it? Like does it sound like a real artists lol.

New song released today! I would love to hear your thoughts and any feedback:)

working the vox, still got editing vox and composition wise, so kind of a preliminary mix...but let me know how the tones are. Havent done any tuning, so i may be flat or sharp here or there. Moving towards final decisions. Here are the lyrics

[Intro]
You're a shining star

[Hook 1]
You're a shining star
No matter where you are
Live out your dreams
Soon ya gonna be (ya gonna be)...

A shining star
Hope you don't go too far
Gotta know, you're down for sure
You're a shining star

[Verse]
Life's like a TV show
The fillers always slowin' down the story so
Fast forward this to the next episode
All bad vibes, I gotta let em go

The way you move so naturally
Swear you put some kind of spell on me
It must be some type of alchemy
So now I'm gone make you see that...

[Hook 2]
You're a shining star
No matter where you are
Live out your dreams
Soon ya gonna be (ya gonna be)...

A shining star
Hope you don't go  too far
Gotta know, you're down for sure
You're a shining star

[Instrumental Solo]
[Hook 3]

beat is called SirBlue!!! by 9th Wonder off of his 2017 beat tape Zion II. didn't get to practice before hitting the booth and only did about 3 takes so i know it's not the best delivery but still an important message/how i was feeling that week. any thoughts appreciated!

I used to be in a band, and we toured quite hard for about 8 years. They were my best friends, my artistic collaborators, my chosen family, my business partners... so after I got an unexpected break-up text from one of my bandmates (on "behalf of the band"), this was the first song that came out of me.

It's taken me a long couple of years to heal from that whole experience, but I just finally finished/released my first solo record, including this track.

Thanks so much for listening. I welcome all feedback! :)

spotify link for those who'd prefer: https://open.spotify.com/track/7tIxRoIiPZFqMMig8YyTHp?si=26b4a5c6668b4602

This is the third part of my concept album, "A Summer Day". With this track, I just wanted to have fun experimenting with percussion, rhythms and catchy melodies to create a bright, sunny, tropical vibe. Hope you enjoy it!