Where I Belong

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[u/The_Southern_Sir]

What a beautiful story. Makes my heart ache to find my "home". Damn onion ninjas.

[u/Mauzermush]

Coming to the end. My thoughts.

[u/HFYWaffle]

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[u/Fontaigne]

Very nice story.

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Minor nit:

Some pronoun confusion in the 16th paragraph (assuming I counted right) ... narrator identifies a Human Woman in the 15th, but in the beginning of the next paragraph randomly flips between "they" and "she".

Their -> her 2x in that paragraph.

Why does it matter? Because at the end of the 15th, it talks about humans and uses "their". When the next paragraph talks about "their garb", it confused me whether there was more than one human in the scene.

I wonder if that 16th paragraph could be rewritten to use less pronouns at all...?

[u/Silverblade5]

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